Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 21, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-24245British motherhood influencers and sharing images of children on Instagram – do they share more than they intend to?PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Baxter, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 15 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The introduction of the manuscript is clear, but the transition to the methodology could benefit from more explanation. Specifically, it would help to clarify why the mixed-method approach, combining content analysis and a survey, was chosen. Briefly discussing the research gaps that led to this choice would strengthen the methodology’s rationale. The research methods section is detailed but would be improved by justifying the sample size of ten influencers. Explaining why this sample is sufficient for an exploratory study, perhaps by referencing similar research, would enhance its credibility. Additionally, the coding process is well-described, but it would be useful to specify if the coding variables were derived from prior research or developed specifically for this study. This would provide stronger links to existing literature and show how the study addresses key privacy concerns. The criteria for selecting influencers, such as follower count and rankings, should also be explained further. A brief statement on why these criteria were relevant—such as their commercial impact or influence, would add depth. Similarly, the time frame for the content analysis could be better justified. Was it chosen to capture specific trends or seasonal variations, or due to the effects of the COVID-19 pandemic? This would give more context to the data. The manuscript discusses inter-coder reliability, but it would be helpful to include a brief note on how disagreements between coders were resolved. This would reinforce the reliability of the analysis. The survey component would also benefit from a clearer explanation of the reasoning behind the selected questions and how they complement the content analysis, adding transparency to the method. In the results section, the link between the analysis and the chosen methods could be clearer. Explaining why specific statistical tools were used, such as Pearson correlation, would confirm that the methods were appropriate for this type of research. Additionally, the relationship between the survey and content analysis should be clarified earlier, explaining how the two methods complement each other for a fuller understanding of sharenting behavior. Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, Thank you for the opportunity to review your manuscript. Overall, I found the topic and approach highly relevant and innovative. The coding of such a large sample is particularly impressive, and I commend you for the effort and meticulousness this must have required. However, after thoroughly reading your work, I have several questions and suggestions that I believe could further improve the clarity and rigor of the paper. First, I noticed that in your reference table, you cite the study by Beuckels & De Wolf as an online survey, whereas it is actually a literature review. Perhaps you meant to reference Beuckels, E., Hudders, L., Vanwesenbeeck, I., & Van den Abeele, E. (2024), which focuses on the role of children and privacy management within influencer content. The problem statement is well-articulated, and your methodological approach is clearly innovative. However, I found the articulation of your research questions lacking. A clear set of research questions or hypotheses would greatly benefit the reader in terms of understanding the scope of the study. Following a different methodological approach, as mentioned, is not a research question in itself. Given the existing body of research on this topic and your quantitative approach, I believe it would be more appropriate to frame the study around clear hypotheses. Doing so would clarify your expectations regarding the variables of interest and ensure a stronger alignment between the literature review, methodology, and results. At present, several variables and analyses emerge in the methodological section without having been introduced or discussed in the literature review, which can make it difficult for the reader to follow the rationale behind their inclusion. By adopting a hypothesis-driven approach and ensuring that all key variables are grounded in the literature, you can create a more cohesive narrative. This shift could potentially improve the flow of the manuscript but also help emphasize the theoretical contributions of your work, which remain somewhat unclear in the current draft beyond the introduction of a new methodological approach. Additionally, I am unclear about how you arrived at your sample of ten influencers for the content analysis. Were there only ten out of twenty who met your inclusion criteria, or did you have to make additional choices? Clarifying this process would be helpful. The section on scraping and ethics also needs more detail. You mention that active consent was unnecessary for Study 1, but this issue is under ongoing debate within the field. Why did you determine consent was unnecessary, and how did you manage the data? For example, were images saved or simply coded directly from the platform? A deeper discussion of these ethical considerations is necessary. Additionally, in Study 2, did the mothers know that their profiles had been previously analyzed? Could this awareness have influenced their responses, possibly explaining why the privacy paradox did not emerge? Is it possible that knowing their profiles had been examined made them more conscious of their sharenting behavior, whereas they might not have been without this priming? Regarding your inter-coder reliability, how was this tested in SPSS? A more detailed report of the analysis and results would be beneficial. The organization of the methodological section could also be clarified. It is not immediately clear that the questionnaire is a second study, as it follows the content analysis without clear separation. Consider using distinct subheadings or treating it as one multi-method study to enhance the manuscript’s readability. Your data collection dates back to 2021, when influencers were still displaying like counts publicly on Instagram. However, with many influencers now opting to hide likes, it may be worth discussing the relevance of using 'likes' as an engagement metric today. While the 2021 data remains valid and provides valuable insights into which content generated higher engagement, reflecting on current platform practices in your discussion would enhance the contemporary relevance of your findings. In your analysis, I’m curious about your choice to focus on the number of children and its correlation with likes. It seems that the preference for depicting intimate social connections, as highlighted in Chung, J., Ding, Y., & Kalra (2023), could explain this correlation as well. Perhaps it’s not the number of children but rather the number of people in general that is driving engagement? In that sense, just comparing the impact of the presence vs. absence of children in posts could be more insightful, but overall, I wonder whether this would yield meaningful insights into sharenting behaviors as your overall sample does oftentimes engage in sharenting. After all, an influencer who typically features their children may also post content without them for reasons unrelated to privacy or anti-sharenting, which may not prompt strong follower reactions. Therefore, can you tell much about the impact of sharenting (vs. not sharenting) with this current sample of influencers? I am also confused by the reversal of your privacy concern scale, as mentioned in your footnote. A high score would typically indicate a high concern, so more explanation on this reversal would be helpful. Furthermore, your discussion on influencers underestimating or correctly estimating their sharenting frequency requires further clarification. How did you analyze this, especially given the differences in how you report the 'percentage of sharenting' versus their 'self-estimated frequency in days' in Table 6? Clearer reporting of your statistical analyses, such as whether you used sum scales or single items, would improve the rigor of your results section. Additionally, the analyses themselves (e.g., correlations, Cronbach’s alpha for scales) are not reported, which is typically expected in quantitative studies and would strengthen the transparency and reliability of your findings. Some of your results appear to be somewhat overstated based on what was actually measured. For instance, you state: “Moreover, all nine influencers reported feeling safe online (Situational Privacy Concern score) and did not perceive sharenting as a threat to theirs and their children’s privacy.” However, it seems the single item you reference here only asks whether they perceive their “presence on Instagram” as a threat to their children’s privacy, rather than their specific sharenting behavior. Furthermore, you conclude that their sharenting is most likely strategic rather than accidental based on this, but I feel there is a gap in the reasoning. Additionally, I question whether the three items you use (only one of which directly relates to sharenting) are sufficient to fully refute the privacy paradox? The discussion section would also benefit from more direct engagement with your results. For instance, what does it mean that the number of followers and the extent of sharenting are not correlated? Are these findings consistent with the literature? Without explicit research questions in your literature review, it is difficult to gauge the significance of your results in relation to existing studies. Lastly, I question the focus exclusively on mothers. There is a growing body of research on ‘dadfluencers,’ ‘Instadads,’ and parent influencers more broadly. Is it necessary to limit the study to mothers, or does this reinforce gendered power dynamics? The current focus seems to place disproportionate blame on mothers, potentially increasing pressure on them in a culture where individualistic parenting and intensive motherhood is already the norm and increasingly results into parental burnouts worldwide (cf. Roskam, I., Aguiar, J., Akgun, E., Arikan, G., Artavia, M., Avalosse, H., ... & Mikolajczak, M. (2021). Parental burnout around the globe: A 42-country study. Affective science, 2(1), 58-79.) In summary, I believe your study makes a valuable contribution to the field, but it would benefit from greater detail, clearer alignment between your research aims and results, and a more nuanced discussion. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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