Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 27, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-25281Public perspectives on COVID-19 triage protocols for access to critical care in extreme pandemic contextPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bouthillier, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 02 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript presents a fundamental discussion on contemporary bioethical issues and contributes to the deepening of issues related to decision-making in critical contexts in health emergencies. Considering the multiple factors and controversies surrounding the access and distribution of healthcare in a scenario of limited resources. Below are some suggestions for improving the quality of your article, in line with the journal's criteria: The demographic analysis of the data presented in the "Results" section could be improved. For example, I suggest that when mentioning demographic categories specific to Canada, such as "visible and non-visible minority", a footnote be inserted explaining what this means in the Canadian census (e.g. who is included in this category). Considering that this is an article for an international audience. In additon, although table 3 mentions the gender of the participants, it is not described in the body of the text. I suggest including this and mentioning that there were no gender diverse participants. Finally, even though the results presented are consistent and show the complexity and relevance of the subject through the survey participants' responses, the discussion section could be developed further. It would be interesting for the authors of the article to include a paragraph on the bioethical controversies involved in the application of triage protocols, expressed by the opinion of the participants categorized as "neutral or Don't know". The ethical issues seem to be associated with the variety of values and principles of equality mentioned by the DD participants. Reviewer #2: First of all I want to thank the team for submitting the article and presenting the results in such an adequate manner. I am happy to say that the article is rich and should be published. As a researcher that has witnessed the difficulties faced by healthcare workers during the covid 19 pandemic, specially in the process of decision making and resource allocation, I’m glad to see this discussion being made outside of hospitals. Besides the conclusions presented I think one of the great merits of this article is to have made a platform for discussing the ethical and moral quarrels of these decisions. The quotes presented show the innate struggles of reaching consensus on extreme situations like the ones experienced during the covid 19 pandemic. At the same time I would provoke the writers to take a step further with its analysis. The discussion of the DD shows the tensions and dissents that were brought up when lay people tried to discuss - roughly put here - “the fairer approach” to the triage protocols during covid-19 pandemic. The results show that, again, putting in a rough manner, “the fairer approach” would be an “egalitarian, utilitarian, transparent and accountable approach”. At this point I would point out that some of the concepts highlighted by the DD are not necessarily self explanatory, they carry within them moral and ethical values. Let’s take the idea of transparency, for instance. Transparency as a democratic value is a rather recent idea, dating back to the 1990’s. The study made by Hetherington, “Guerrilla auditors: the politics of transparency in neoliberal Paraguay.” (2011, Duke Press) showcases how the idea of transparency was executed in Paraguay by a multiplication of papertrail that eventually would become an overbearing shadow for those that were willing to better understand the processes that should be made more transparent in the first place, and worse, this would be the only socially legitimate way to achieve clarity over the guerilla processes that Herington was investigating in the first place. Anyway. As I said, this isn’t a necessity and the article works fine without these debates, but I think maybe the article would gain a lot by showcasing some of the nuances of these ideas and the different values that were inhabiting the notions of transparency, accountability, etc. I would suggest that these values are not inherent, but can only be built and legitimized in an effective manner through the exchange of views made possible by the DD. More than an exercise to produce data, I would argue the DD was an exercise on making the triage protocols fairer and this is a major accomplishment by your team of authors. Finally, I would suggest adding a small point on how the authors have perceived the points made by the participants and if, as health workers themselves, they felt that the discussion was able to showcase some of their own worries and difficulties as decision makers. ********** 6. 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Public perspectives on COVID-19 triage protocols for access to critical care in extreme pandemic context PONE-D-24-25281R1 Dear Dr. Bouthillier, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Rodrigo Toniol Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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