Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 16, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-27986Pediatric Diabetic Ketoacidosis (PDKA) among newly diagnosed diabetic patients at Dilla University Hospital, Dilla, Ethiopia: prevalence and predictorsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Oromo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Besides the important reviewrers comments shown below, authors should also address the following points:
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting article in which the author shows the prevalence and predictors of diabetic ketoacidosis in children in a centre in Ethiopia. Since few articles have this information, it gives us interesting data. However, the work lacks essential data, primarily related to the definition of diabetic ketoacidosis. In the introduction, a new paper about the prevalence of DKA in children in Ethiopia from 2019 should be included in the references (Assefa B. et al. Incidence and predictors of diabetic ketoacidosis among children with diabetes in west and east Gojjam zone referral hospitals, northern 2019. Ital J Pediatr. 3;46(1):164. PMID: 33143741.) According to the 2022 ISPAD guidelines (Glaser N. et al. ISPAD clinical practice consensus guidelines 2022: Diabetic ketoacidosis and hyperglycemic hyperosmolar state. Pediatr Diabetes. 2022 Nov ;23(7):835-856. doi: 10.1111/pedi.13406. PMID: 36250645.) the diagnosis of DKA is based on the triad of hyperglycemia, ketosis and metabolic acidosis; however, specific biochemical criteria used to define DKA vary in different parts of the world and among different research studies. All three biochemical criteria are required to diagnose DKA: • Hyperglycemia (blood glucose >11 mmol/L [200 mg/dl]) • Venous pH < 7.3 or serum bicarbonate < 18 mmol/L • Ketonemia or ketonuria In this paper, the group of children with DKA was defined based on the clinical picture, blood glucose and ketones, and the clinical picture, while venous pH and serum bicarbonates were not determined. The above is very unreliable for definition. The question is how many more children with newly diagnosed T1DM should be in the DKA group if pH and bicarbonates were determined (line 85). The Dilla University Ethical Commission's approval number needs to be listed. I suggest entering it (line 108). Figure 1 is referenced in the results, but it is not present in the work. This figure must be included, as it could provide valuable visual context to the findings, enhancing the reader's understanding of the research. The references in this article must be revised and updated. For instance, references 3 and 16 are identical and should be corrected. This attention to detail will ensure the accuracy and thoroughness of the research, instilling confidence in the reader. Reviewer #2: The manuscript titled “Pediatric Diabetic Ketoacidosis (PDKA) among newly diagnosed diabetic patients at Dilla University Hospital, Dilla, Ethiopia: prevalence and predictors” aimed to know the prevalence of diabetic ketoacidosis among patients with newly diagnosed diabetes mellitus and identify avoidable risk factors. The study raised the importance social issues, including the literacy and the family income However, it was carried on during the period 2018-2022, and the COVID era started 2019. All patients were influenced by COVID which reflected their presentations and even the delay to seek medical advice 1. Methodology: - Criteria of DKA diagnosis: why not mentioned the Venous blood gases results (HCO3 & Ph) - Assessment of knowledge: items to be assessed not mentioned clearly - Assessment of income: to be translated in Dollars and according to the world bank classification” 2. the tables: - n to write the total numbers - comparing the patients yearly will clarify the effect of COVID during this era “to be added” 3. the discussion: - to mention the COVID and its effect on the patient’s presentation Reviewer #3: The manuscript aims to identify the prevalence of DKA among newly type 1 diabetes cases at one single-center in Ethiopia and detect potential predictors The strengths of this manuscript rely on the interest to address a question that has not been sufficiently studied in the region. The manuscript is well written and the conclusions are clear based on findings. The main limitation is that biochemical parameters considered to diagnose DKA according to ISPAD guidelines have not been assessed (only urine ketones) and thus the accuracy of the findings may be uncertain. In addition, data refer to a one-single center and may not be representative of country or region reality. Some points to consider: Abstract: -the term “polysymptoms” is inespecific and likely the abstract would benefit of reconsidering this sentence. -as the manuscript is based on retrospective data the high proportion of DKA in children with newly diagnosis of type 1 diabetes cannot directly be attributed to the described factors. Please reconsider this sentence Manuscript: Line 44: the first cite refers to ISPAD guidelines 2007. Last version of these guidelines was 2022 and thus it is outdated. Please consider to update the cite. Line 60: the term “Materials and methods” should be replaced by “Participants and Methods” Line 77: the term “gender” is preferable to “sex”. Similarly in other parts of the manuscript. Other comments that should be addressed in the discussion >20% of family history in newly diagnosis is a very high rate. Please discuss it. 33% of pneumonia co-morbidity is a very high rate. Please discuss it. Please specify what polysymptoms is. There are not data regarding mortality rates in newly diagnosis type 1 diabetes. Please discuss it. Biochemical parameters considered to diagnose DKA according to ISPAD guidelines have not been assessed (only urine ketones). Please discuss it. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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