Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-36048Experienced cognitive load in the emergency departmentPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Stassen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 19 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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In recognition of the increased patient- and workloads EDs the world over face, I found this to be a well written manuscript that presents novel findings likely of interest to emergency staff. Both reviewers have highlighted the need for greater clarity in your methods section, and have provided critical input to strengthen your discussion. If you choose to revise your article for consideration in PLOS One, please also upload the STROBE checklist for this study to illustrate that you have adhered to the reporting guidelines for observation research. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Editor, Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. This study investigated the cognitive load experienced by residents working in the ED and the differences in cognitive load throughout the day. They found overall low mental effort, low complexity and high comfortability. The manuscript is well written and the topic is interesting and relevant. However, I have some concerns about the data and the conclusions drawn from it. I would suggest that the following aspects should be considered. Abstract - Methods: "3 three" scales appears to be a typographical error. - Methods: Perhaps also provide what is low and what is high for mental effort and comfort to be consistent. - Conclusion: Reading the abstract, I feel that the conclusion is not fully consistent with the findings reported in the results. Cognitive load is presented as high, but is (only) 4. Comfortability is presented as low, but is 80%. These figures don't seem alarming to me. It is only when you look at the shift that the mental effort is at the higher end of the scale (but still only 5.5). I think it is more correct to mention the observed increase in mental effort in the evenings, as this is also something that can be used to organise shifts. - However, a general question remains for me: What is high cognitive load? When is a person's cognitive load exceeded, and how is that defined? I think this needs to be put into perspective to fully understand these measurements (in the main text of the manuscript). Also, I think that working in the ED inherently leads to high(er) cognitive load as it is a demanding job - how does this resonate with other jobs/professions? Perhaps the results are actually quite normal and not worrying? Could this be reflected on more in the discussion section? - It is also stated that the residents felt uncomfortable when making decisions, and based on this I would expect lower comfortability scores. Again, this needs to be put into perspective. Introduction - The introduction is well written and clearly describes the relevance and purpose. - For me personally, the extraneous cognitive load and the germane load could use a few more words of explanation (in the way that the intrinsic load was described). Perhaps give an example based on an ED shift: when working in the ED, what is the germane load? I may have missed this or misunderstood, but does this come up elsewhere in the manuscript? Maybe this is something to reflect on in the discussion? Or maybe it could be left out as it just confused me. - Why did the study only focus on residents (in internal medicine)? Methods - I think it would be good to have some more clarity on how the grading process went for the residents. When did they assess the cognitive load, was it immediately after a decision? And how did they do it? Were they asked by the researchers? Did they have to fill in a form? Was every decision reported, or could some have been missed? - It would be interesting to include the scales in some supplementary material, as not everyone (especially the clinically oriented audience) will be familiar with these scales, and not all of them were easily found online. - Were the scales available in Dutch or were they translated by the authors? How did they do this? - Consider giving the total number of weeks that the observations took place. - What is your rationale for looking for differences between the five types of measurement compared to the 2-hour measurement (see also my comment in the Results section). - Explanation: Why did you look at the correlation between the three scales? What does this tell us? Results - Table 1: Why are all the percentages in the most right column 20%? - I have some concerns about the generalisability of the results, especially given the small number of residents in teaching hospitals and the lack of day shifts and few evening shifts (on which most of the conclusions are based). When I read Table 4, I see that the overall complexity is low, the mental effort low to medium, and the comfortability high. Should the conclusions about high cognitive load be a little more cautious, given the number of participants and the fact that not all shifts were observed? - Complementary measurements: the comfortability score was lower after 15h, how much lower? Is this a clinically relevant difference? - You mention no differences in the complementary measurements (time interval measurements) and then in the next section (comparison of measurements) there are differences. I do not fully understand Table 5 and how this contributes. Why do you compare the medians with the 2-hour interval as a reference? Why did you choose to compare the different measurements to the 2 hour reference? Is this the best way to say something about high cognitive load? Wouldn't you expect everything to be higher/worse for a 2 hour period combined compared to just individual decisions/patients? Maybe I misunderstood, but in that case I think it needs more explanation. - Did you see a difference per hospital or per year of experience? Or according to the type of decision (e.g. evaluation of results might be more demanding than delegation or patient registration). Could these factors explain some of the differences? - A small typo in Table 5 (measurements) Discussion - You conclude: comfortability was overall high (80-100%) – this is not consistent with the abstract. - I have some concerns about the generalisability of the results, given the number of participants and the number of shifts. I think this should be reflected in the discussion section. - When is cognitive load exceeded? How is it defined? These results are quite reassuring when I read the manuscript and I would like to see some more elaboration on this (see also my comment on this in the abstract section). - I would find it interesting if the discussion were a bit more elaborate on how exactly these results would influence practice. Would you recommend changing the way shifts are organised now? What other recommendations might there be? It would be interesting to read some thoughts on this. - Explain a bit more about other studies that have been done with these scales and how well they measure, for example, complexity. - I think it is a strength that a Delphi meeting took place. - I appreciate the effort to do these measurements in a busy ED in real time situations, which provides a unique data set. This is a strength of the study. All in all, this study was interesting to read and provided insights into the cognitive load of residents in internal medicine working in the emergency department. However, both the methods and some of the conclusions need to be rationalised to make them more understandable and accurate. There are some other results that might be interesting to look at (differences by years of experience, by type of decision, etc.). Reviewer #2: This is an interesting prospective, multicenter study involving three hospitals, focused on the cognitive load experienced by residents in the emergency department and how it varies throughout the day. While the results section is clear, the study's procedures are not explained in sufficient detail, particularly regarding practical aspects. More information is needed in the "Methods" section: I don’t fully understand how the Emergency Departments are organized in these three hospitals and what the residents' responsibilities are. Do they only handle outpatients, or do they also manage short-term hospitalizations (before traditional hospitalization or discharge)? Do they work in the resuscitation room? How many residents are there per shift, and how many patients do they manage? Please describe the workload and any differences between the three hospitals. • What kind of supervision was provided (or was there no supervision)? Was the supervision consistent across the three hospitals? • How were the data collected by the investigators? Did the residents fill out questionnaires, have conversations with the investigators, or were they observed? • Regarding "Decision": o Please explain why "patient registration" is considered a decision. o Clarify the "Delegation of tasks": Is it from the resident to someone else (to whom?) or from someone else to the resident? • How were the shifts selected for the study? Was it one shift per day, or were they selected randomly? • Regarding the weekly meetings: Who attended these meetings (residents, investigators from the 3 centers)? • How many investigators participated in the entire study? • Why did you choose to measure cognitive load using not only mental effort but also complexity and comfort? Results: • Page 7, "Complementary results": There is a repetition at the end of the first paragraph. Discussion: • Page 9, 2nd paragraph: o Could you comment based on cognitive load theory? Specifically, what about the extraneous load? o The "peak-end effect" is difficult to understand clearly because it’s not clear how and when the data were collected. • Page 9, 3rd paragraph: o "Residents cannot admit to being uncomfortable": You could have discussed this point by comparing the data of more experienced residents with that of less experienced residents, as you mention later in the discussion. This comparison data would be interesting to include in the "Results" section. Example of another study on cognitive load in the Emergency Room: • Impact of training in the supervision of clinical reasoning in the pediatric emergency department on residents' perception of the on-call experience. Pietrement C, Barbe C, Bouazzi L, Maisonneuve H. Arch Pediatr. 2023 Nov;30(8):550-557. doi: 10.1016/j.arcped.2023.08.006. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-23-36048R1Experienced cognitive load in the emergency department. A prospective study.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Stassen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers only have additional minor comments for you to address. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 16 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I think the authors have improved their manuscript by using the reviewer comments. The findings have been put into more perspective and the conclusions are more appropriate. I also think it is suitable for acceptance after some very minor updates. Some minor remarks: (1) The sentence that was added on page 5 about the data collection: "The residents were asked regarding the cognitive load by the investigators immediately after the decision was made, or immediately after the different time-intervals." Does that mean that sometimes the residents were asked after a certain time interval (e.g. 2 hours for example) and had to recall all decisions they made? That is something different tan being asked immediatly after a decision. This might need some extra clarification. (2) Under table 5 there is the typo 'measurments'. (3) The complementary measurements you admit are somewhat complex, you provide an explanation to me as a reviewer, but you might want to add it to the methods section for readers to make it clearer. Reviewer #2: I thank the authors for the revised manuscript. The comments have been addressed. I just have few new comments : - Setting and study design : In MUMC, the supervisor is present until 8 pm, while in MMC, emergency physicians assist the residents if necessary. What about Zuyderland hospital ? Results : - The median complexity for all five types of measurements was comparable (1.0), although differences in the distribution of the scores resulted in significant differences : I suggest to add a supplement material to see the distribution - mental effort scores were often exceeding 6 (33.3% of 2-hour and shift measurements; data not shown) : I suggest to add a supplement material to see the percentages ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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