Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 13, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-15176Food: source of life or disease? Risk assessment of pesticide residue ingestion in food offered by institutional restaurantsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. ROLIM, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Dear Dr. PRISCILLA ROLIM Manuscript ID and Title: PONE-D-24-15176 & Food: source of life or disease? Risk assessment of pesticide residue ingestion in food offered by institutional restaurants I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to inform you of the editorial decision for your above-said manuscript submitted to the Plos One We have received three Reviewer’s comments on your manuscript, and I would like to thank you for your patience during the review process. I understand that it can be challenging when reviewers provide differing opinions on a submission. Here is a summary of the reviewers' comments: Reviewers # 2 and 3 (Major Revision): found some merits in the research and raised some major points/critics/suggestions (Please find the Reviewer comments) Reviewer #1 has not recommended your manuscript and Rejected by raising some major comments (comments attached) After careful consideration of all three reviewers' feedback and an evaluation of the manuscript by the editorial team, I have recommended your article “Major Revision” following the recommendations provided by Reviewers # 2 & 3. I believe that the comments and suggestions made by Reviewer #1 are comprehensive, and constructive and can significantly enhance the quality of your work in the future. “I strongly recommend to incorporate the suggestions provided by Reviewer #1 with careful consideration and providing suitable rebuttals. Reviewer #1 comments and responses will be critically evaluated during the review process." ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 28 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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I am writing to inform you of the editorial decision for your above-said manuscript submitted to the Plos One We have received three Reviewer’s comments on your manuscript, and I would like to thank you for your patience during the review process. I understand that it can be challenging when reviewers provide differing opinions on a submission. Here is a summary of the reviewers' comments: Reviewers # 2 and 3 (Major Revision): found some merits in the research and raised some major points/critics/suggestions (Please find the Reviewer comments) Reviewer #1 has not recommended your manuscript and Rejected by raising some major comments (comments attached or find below) After careful consideration of all three reviewers' feedback and an evaluation of the manuscript by the editorial team, I have recommended your article “Major Revision” following the recommendations provided by Reviewers # 2 & 3. I believe that the comments and suggestions made by Reviewer #1 are comprehensive, and constructive and can significantly enhance the quality of your work in the future. “I strongly recommend to incorporate the suggestions provided by Reviewer #1 with careful consideration and providing suitable rebuttals. Reviewer #1 comments and responses will be critically evaluated during the review process." Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: According to the title and abstract, the manuscript is expected to offer pesticide residue levels in food and the associated risk to consumers in restaurants from educational institutions. But it seems that the levels of pesticide residues have not been analyzed, and the authors have assumed that the food items will contain the MRL levels for all AI with MRL for that food, which is totally unrealistic. Therefore, the results are irrelevant. There are other methodological limitations, for example for pesticides, with toxicokinetic data available, the use of Kow as proxi for bioaccumulation has no sense, as metabolisms, which is very relevant for most pesticides, is not included. For the risk assessment it should be relevant for this kind of study to conduct both acute and chronic assessments, using the Acute Reference Dose in addition to the ADI. The authors are encouraged to measure actual levels by conducting chemical analysis of representative samples and update the estimations. Reviewer #2: The article entitled “Food: source of life or disease? Risk assessment of pesticide residue ingestion in food offered by institutional restaurants” is really an interesting topic to discuss but I found some major flaws in the article. Here are some key points to improve your article � Author cannot use question mark in the title. � 99% ….there should be space between number and unit � In title write pesticide residues � In keyword write first letter capital ….Diet � Provide the full form of all the abbreviations � What is AI � There should be space between unit and word � If AI is active ingredient then replace it with a.i � What is IR � How you have detected that the pesticides are present in the food. Any data or analysis you have done. � How can you confidentially say that the food which is offered during the lunch is contaminated with pesticides, no doubt it unprocessed but until you have not done the proper analysis, you cannot say the food is contaminated with pesticides? � Which technique and procedure you have used for analysis. Reviewer #3: The topic is of great relevance to public health and food safety, and the research contributes to a better understanding of the possible impacts of pesticides on human health. The work proposes research in an area with few studies developed in Brazil, which makes it difficult to discuss the data. However, the author used dubious bibliographies to support his point of view on the use of pesticides, such as references 7, 15, 56, and 85. Additionally, it is not possible to identify whether references 21 and 47 are the same and where they are available for access. In lines 37 and 38, the author states that Brazil is "one of the leading countries in the world in the consumption of pesticides," but does not mention the bibliography on which this statement is based. Focus on presenting concrete data and scientific evidence about the risks of pesticide residues in chronic consumption. Avoid expressions and arguments that could be interpreted as activism or militancy. The goal is to inform readers based on verifiable facts, allowing them to draw their own conclusions. In the objective of the work, the author proposes to evaluate foods and the risks of exposure. However, during the discussion, he does not develop arguments about the risk of exposure, and in the conclusion, he only highlights the role of collective meal restaurants in promoting nutritional safety. Critically review existing literature, highlighting both identified risks and gaps in current knowledge. There are already published works on pesticide residues in collective meals, such as in school lunches, which were not cited in the work. These similar works can help in the discussion of data. It is important to highlight the pesticide residue and not the food itself, as is the case in reference 41 regarding residues present in beans. It is compared with work in Cameroon, which may not generate equivalence due to different planting techniques and pesticides authorized for use and MRL. The discussion should address potential health risks in a clear and balanced way, without exaggerating the dangers or minimizing the impacts. Suggestions: Describe the mechanisms by which pesticide residues can affect human health. Provide an analysis of exposure levels considered safe and compare them with levels found in the foods studied. Include a discussion of the long-term effects of chronic consumption of pesticide residues, based on case studies, public health reports, and peer-reviewed scientific research. In line 64, the author mentions that there is no data on orange foods in ANVISA monographs. These are included in the citrus group, so review pesticide residues considering this category. Conclusions should reflect the results of the study in a balanced and evidence-based manner, avoiding recommendations that may appear excessively alarmist or unscientific. Suggestions: Summarize the main results of the study, highlighting the implications for public health. Make recommendations for future food safety research and policy based on the evidence presented. Regarding the title, one suggestion is to remove the question "Food: source of life or disease?" and leave only "Risk Assessment of Ingestion of Pesticide Residues in Food Offered by Institutional Restaurants." Adopting an objective, data-driven approach will strengthen your article's credibility and broaden its impact on the scientific community and society. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Risk assessment of pesticide residues ingestion in food offered by institutional restaurant menus PONE-D-24-15176R1 Dear Dr. ROLIM, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ulaganathan Arisekar Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): None Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: Congratulations to the authors for the revisions and for making the suggested changes. The subject is very relevant to the scientific community for discussion and reflection, and especially for the Brazilian population ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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