Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 11, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-28044Effect of Poor Glycemic Control on the Prevalence and Determinants of Anemia and Chronic Kidney Disease Among Type 2 Diabetes Mellitus Patients in Jordan: An Observational Cross-sectional StudyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Al-Dwairi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 19 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a cross-sectional study that determined the effect of poor glycemic control on the prevalence and determinants of anemia and CKD in Type 2 DM patients. This study in Jordan with 120 controlled DM patients and indexed match uncontrolled 120 DM patients recruited from December 2018 to December 2019 showed a higher prevalence of anemia in the uncontrolled T2DM group. Also, female gender was positively associated with anemia in T2DM patients . Using the multivariate model, the authors noted that age, female gender, and CKD were positively associated with anemia, and the univariate model showed increased cases of anemia with poor glycemic control T2DM patients. Major Comments: 1. Introduction: It has a well-written background and highlights the problem under study. However, it can be more concise especially the ending of the first paragraph explaining the pathophysiology of DM. It is great that you have claimed that your study is the first of its kind but since it is a very strong statement I want to make sure that you have reviewed the existing article well. 2. Method: It is very detailed and clear. It would be better if you would also add the reference for the insulin resistance score formula. 3. Result: This section seems lengthy to me, there is repetition of information. It would be better if you would only highlight important points from the table. Since the biochemical profiles are clearly given in the table all the numerical values need not be explained. 4. Discussion: This section is really great. I like how you have backed all the comparisons with possible explanations. Minor Comments: 5. In the abstract section, it would be better if you included the binomial logistic regression in the method section than the result section. 6. In the first paragraph of the discussion, you mentioned how your study stands out as it explores sex-based differences in factors influencing anemia and CKD which can be kept in the last paragraph of your discussion. Reviewer #2: Under DISCUSSION LINE 7:'were controlled' should be 'where controlled' Since the sample age were adults from 18, females with possible menorrhagia in the premenopausal age group should be excluded since they already have baseline iron deficiency anemia and may inflate the number of females with anemia. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-24-28044R1Effect of Poor Glycemic Control on the Prevalence and Determinants of Anemia and Chronic Kidney Disease Among Type 2 Diabetes Mellitus Patients in Jordan: An Observational Cross-sectional StudyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Al-Dwairi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Methodology part needs to be rewritten with major focus on sample enrollment and sample size calculation. For analyte analysis, write down the method employed for determination of serum levels of insulin, fasting blood glucose, total cholesterol, and triglycerides. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 02 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Apeksha Niraula, M.D., Biochemistry Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Methodology part needs to be rewritten with major focus on sample enrollment and sample size calculation. For analyte analysis, write down the method employed for determination of serum levels of insulin, fasting blood glucose, total cholesterol, and triglycerides. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer 1: This is a cross-sectional study that determined the effect of poor glycemic control on the prevalence and determinants of anemia and CKD in Type 2 DM patients. This study in Jordan with 120 controlled DM patients and indexed match uncontrolled 120 DM patients recruited from December 2018 to December 2019 showed a higher prevalence of anemia in the uncontrolled T2DM group. Also, female gender was positively associated with anemia in T2DM patients . Using the multivariate model, the authors noted that age, female gender, and CKD were positively associated with anemia, and the univariate model showed increased cases of anemia with poor glycemic control T2DM patients. Major Comments: 1. Introduction: It has a well-written background and highlights the problem under study. However, it can be more concise especially the ending of the first paragraph explaining the pathophysiology of DM. It is great that you have claimed that your study is the first of its kind but since it is a very strong statement I want to make sure that you have reviewed the existing article well. 2. Method: It is very detailed and clear. It would be better if you would also add the reference for the insulin resistance score formula. 3. Result: This section seems lengthy to me, there is repetition of information. It would be better if you would only highlight important points from the table. Since the biochemical profiles are clearly given in the table all the numerical values need not be explained. 4. Discussion: This section is really great. I like how you have backed all the comparisons with possible explanations. Minor Comments: 5. In the abstract section, it would be better if you included the binomial logistic regression in the method section than the result section. 6. In the first paragraph of the discussion, you mentioned how your study stands out as it explores sex-based differences in factors influencing anemia and CKD which can be kept in the last paragraph of your discussion. [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Effect of Poor Glycemic Control on the Prevalence and Determinants of Anemia and Chronic Kidney Disease Among Type 2 Diabetes Mellitus Patients in Jordan: An Observational Cross-sectional Study PONE-D-24-28044R2 Dear Dr. Al-Dwairi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Apeksha Niraula, M.D., Biochemistry Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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