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PONE-D-23-43307Medical students’ habitual approaches to discussions about racism in Germany: A qualitative analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gerhards, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript has been carefully assessed by myself and an anonymous reviewer. We generally share the same concerns about the manuscript in its current form and invite you to address the following issues in a major revision: - Tightening and improving conceptual definitions. As much as possible, it would be good to be judicious in invoking concepts related to race and racism. The manuscript may currently be trying to address too many ideas at once, making it conceptually unwieldy. Stick to a more selective subset and offer more precise definitions for the ones which truly matter to the argument.- Enhancing correspondence between analytical claims and evidence provided. Various points are raised in the analysis which do not empirically match the data that is given and unpacked. Articulate insights with more explicit connections between data and interpretation to strengthen the results. More detailed discussion of how the present insights link to broader scholarship and inquiry on race outside the medical field -- or perhaps other forms of inequality/inequity in the medical field -- will also be ideal.- Expanded validation and reflexivity statement. Qualitative analysis is shaped by subject positions of analyst/s and these are especially salient in power-laden domains such as race and racism. Improved discussion of the authors' relationship with the topic, participants, and overall findings will be critical for this manuscript. Additional discussion of how themes were validated would also be ideal; consider work by Yardley (2016; https://doi.org/10.1080/17439760.2016.1262624) for guidance in this regard.- Do also consider the various careful and detailed comments provided by the reviewer below. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 23 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, Thank you for the article and research you are conducting. The article offers important contributions to the field of racism, and racialisation in healthcare and medicine, not only within the German context but also for the broader research. As you know, most research does not explore the way healthcare providers, including students, discuss racism and how this may impact healthcare interactions and medical decisions. Hence, the article is an important step towards understanding how racialisation works in healthcare. However, there are some aspects of the article that need more work, especially in regard to defining some main concepts, and the structure of the results. I will divide the comments into main comments, and proceed to more detailed comments: Main comments • The article offers important insights. However, some concepts need to be defined in the introduction. Moreover, some new concepts are introduced in other sections and not discussed in the introduction. I suggest going through the article, writing down all the concepts and ensuring they are properly defined in the introduction. These concepts should form your conceptual framework which is a bit unclear at the moment. For instance, you state in line 207 in the method section that “The qualitative analysis was guided by the assumption that racism influences peoples’ thinking and acting both consciously and on an unconscious or habitual level,” but you do not offer the reader a discussion on this issue i.e., the embeddedness of racism in the various institutions in the nation-state. Clarity about your concepts and the conceptual departure points would make the article stronger and offer a reading an understanding of what guided your research and analysis. Below I will illustrate the undefined or unclear concepts: Concepts not defined: 1. habitual approach and habitus; 2. racialized categorization -this concept is not introduced in the introduction- 3. antiracism – needs to be defined as you state that the category criticism holds a superior moral ground (rather, it is the participants who employ a critical view of racism). If criticism is a superior moral ground, what constitutes antiracism?) – 4. medical professionalization and professionalism, and its connection to habitus need to be unpacked. 5. Pointed labels is another undefined concept not discussed or introduced in the introduction. Finally, 6. heuristic tool mentioned in the result section needs to be defined, and introduced in the introduction. I would suggest not only going through the concepts and ensuring that they are defined but also limiting the number of terms/concepts that are used, as some of them are not necessarily employed theoretically, such as heuristic tools and pointed labels. • The aim of the article is not consistent, and the wording changes throughout the article. For instance, in the abstract, the aim is stated as: “To understand how medical students in Germany deal with the topic of racism,” while in the introduction, the aim stated is “we seek to contribute to a better understanding of the conditions of and obstacles to discussing racism in medical education. The focus is on the medical habitus and habitual approaches to the issue of racism in discussions among medical students.” In the method section, a new aim is introduced, which is: “to explore the practical approaches of medical students in addressing racism”. These different aims are not the same and require different ways to analyse and thus structure and delineate the results. My suggestion from reading the result section is that the aim is what is stated in the abstract. • The method section includes a description of the analysis; in line 235, you state that you have analysed the performance and interactional aspects in the group discussions, which, in the result section, you delineate separately with the title On the level of performance and interaction. I am not convinced that such differentiation is necessary or adds anything to the article since focus groups are, per definition, interactional, and the interactional aspect is always part of any analysis. My suggestion is to remove the separate title and integrate the interactional parts with the analysis of each theme. • Another issue with definitions is how the result section is structured. My main issue here is that the definitions of the themes provided at the beginning of the result section do not always coincide with what the results show. For instance, “Scientism” is defined as a way to approach racism “from a viewpoint of presumed scientific objectivity and neutrality, and interprets it as a problem of ignorant or malevolent misuse of scientific knowledge.” However, this is not what the results show. Rather than the definition provided, the results show that scientific knowledge is used to justify the existence of ‘race’ or racialised categories, i.e., that ‘race’ is indeed a biological reality rather than a product of racism. Hence, it seems that it is not that racism is viewed as non-scientific; rather, ‘race’ is seen as a scientific concept, which is a very interesting finding. My suggestion is to provide the correct definition of this theme so it is consistent with what the actual result shows, such as calling it scientism as justification for the existence of ‘race’ or something of that nature, but it is up to you to decide a new labelling. • In regard to the theme, pragmatism; It is defined at the beginning of the result section as emphasising “the importance of practical professional experience, and views racialized categorizations as a well-tried, necessary, and useful heuristic tool to cope with the hustle and bustle of everyday clinical practice.” You also state in line 342 that “This approach is characterized by the habitus of a (future) physician who is mainly interested in hands on solutions for the everyday challenges of patient care.” Rather than emphasising the importance of practical professional experience, it seems that the onus is put on using ‘race’ to justify pseudo-medical categorisations and diagnoses such as Morbus mediterraneus, etc., i.e., race talk that is used to justify diagnosis on the basis of racialisation. I think the wording of the theme could be reformulated to convey its message. It is not pragmatism per se. Rather, it is using so-called medical pragmatism as justification for racial categorisation. • Regarding the theme “Relativism”, I find it the most unclear one. You define it as “characterized by a combination of unreserved trust and obedience vis-a-vis authoritative medical textbook knowledge and standards on the one hand, and pronounced uncertainty and subjectivism in ‘soft’ matters like the social recognition and moral evaluation of racism on the other.” This definition needs to be unpacked as it is unclear, especially as you provide another definition in line 429: “Relativism is the claim of having not enough knowledge about racism to form a clear and definitive position.”. Please provide one consistent definition. Further, the term relativism does not convey anything in particular since one is left to wonder: relativism of what and in relation to what. Additionally, why is the claim of not having enough knowledge about racism termed relativism? These issues need to be clarified and addressed. • Moreover, the themes do not convey the same logic concerning the analytical approach. This could be attributed to the various aims presented in the article. While scientism and pragmatism and, in a way, relativism seem to be about ways of understanding racism and ‘race’, interculturalism and criticism are about different ways to approach racism and ‘race’. So there is a jump in logic from the first three themes to the last two. This could be resolved by changing the way these themes are articulated, so it is not the approach that is emphasised but the way of understanding racism and ‘race’ that are emphasised. • The discussion section should be further developed in regard to how participants understand the relation of ‘race’ to racism, which is currently absent, and in relation to other research in healthcare in this area. Detailed comments: 1. Line 46: You state: “Talking about racism induces reflection, decreases racist beliefs and discrimination, and expands critical action against it [28-30].” Are you claiming that there is evidence that shows that discussion on racism results in decreased racial bias and beliefs? If so, explain how the provided references (The English ones since I unfortunately do not speak German) do not convey such an association. 2. Line 51. Please provide the year of publication after Novak et al. as well as the citation. 3. Line 58: Please change the word German to Germany. 4. Line 72: Spell out 22 (Twenty two) since numbers should be spelled out at the beginning of sentences. 5. The introduction lacks a review of research on racial bias. Please include this literature under the section Racism and anti-racism in medicine and healthcare in Germany. 6. You state in line 103 that: “ These observations about intention and the unconscious suggest that racism should be discussed with special regard to habitualized approaches, dispositions, and hence, habitus [22, 24-26, 68].” Please unpack this sentence. I suggest discussing these terms earlier since they seem to form your conceptual framework. 7. Line 123 forward includes a document analysis pertaining to the German CanMEDS framework, which should not be included in the introduction section since it is a result of your analysis. This could be the basis of another article. Moreover, this part is not necessary for the justification of this article. 8. Line 167 table 1: please revise the structure of the table. The numbers are not organised correctly. 9. Where minoritised people in the same group as majoritised people? how did this affect the discussion and your choice of methodology? Please reflect on this since you do state that the critical view on racism may have been limited due to the interactional aspect of group discussions? Reflect also on why individual interviews with minoritised people was not conducted. 10. Line 324: You mention the Holocaust but do not mention other genocides conducted by Germans such as in Namibia. 11. Line 359. The terms Morbus ….are they used in the medical curricula or are they race talk used in lectures etc.? 12. Line 521-528. How is this description of interculturalism different from the previous themes? Could you clarify this part? Similarly, in lines 556 and 557, you state that interculturalism is accompanied by a self-perception of being above racism. However, this seems to be the overarching theme and does not only pertain to this particular theme. 13. Please include research on racial bias in healthcare in the discussion section and delineate how your results speak to this body of research (majority of which is from the USA). Overall, I enjoyed reading your article which offered very interesting results. Good luck with the review. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-23-43307R1How do medical students deal with the topic of racism? A qualitative analysis of group discussions in GermanyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gerhards, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 21 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PONE-D-23-43307R2How do medical students deal with the topic of racism? A qualitative analysis of group discussions in GermanyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gerhards, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 30 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We look forward to receiving your revised paper. Best Rahul [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, As explained in the previous round of revisions, all comments have been addressed. The article offers important contributions that will aid in understanding the production of racialisation in healthcare. Reviewer #2: Review on “How do medical students deal with the topic of racism?” Dear colleagues, I read your study with great interest. Below is the summary of the article with my impressions. I then give specific suggestions that I would recommend you address in your revision. This article analyzes German-speaking medical students speaking about the topic of racism in online group conversations. The authors provide a good introduction and literature review that introduces how racism, race, and bias is thought about in this article. The qualitative study using virtual focus group interview data is relevant to the research questions as they give both a thematic overview of the ideas that medical students have related to questions of racism, and also show how medical students explain their understanding of racism and race. The results are presented in a clear manner and use relevant quotes, and the tables support the results well. The discussion and conclusion of the paper has some useful takeaways. Based on this positive assessment, I have some comments that I think are important for the authors to take into account, and I have some suggestions that you can consider: Literature review: The discussion of racism as an ideology and system is well argued. Paying attention to the implicit forms of racist meaning making is an important point. However, I’d make the transition from Fanon’s point to racial bias more clear (110 to 111). I think that these two interpretations are slightly different, and that moving from Fanon’s explanation that racism structures “implicit knowledge” (line 108) is not the same thing as implicit bias which connects more to a cognitive argument of explaining racism. Please make this transition more clear, and articulate why you see both of these explanations as necessary. Also, you could return to this question of implicit bias in the conclusion - and discuss if this still hold its relevance or if other explanations, like systemic ones might be more relevant. Methodology: Write who translated the quotes from your material. Findings: The findings are clear and the quotes relevant. However, I’ve got some questions/concerns regarding the types. I don’t think that a typology of how medical students deal with racism is a helpful description of what’s happening. Rather than types, as you say yourself, these are 5 typical ways that German-speaking medical students deal with the topic of racism; and each person could potentially adapt each way. I suggest that you don’t use the word types to describe it but something else, for example explanations. The term type evokes the idea of typology, which can be associated with fixity, an inability to change. I think an important point that you’re making by using the approach of habitus is that we are socialized into certain behaviors and thoughts, and that we can also change. I think that this should be reflected in the naming of the 5 typical ways. One other word I don’t find so fitting is “scientistic.” I understand that you want to use adjectives to describe each typical way, but I think saying “scientist” would be sufficient. Discussion: This is a good discussion in which you discuss the main takeaways. I wonder if the language could be changed slightly in lines 845-847. You write that “Black women experience to be hypersexualised…” By writing experience to be, I get the impression that this could be debatable. I suggest that you instead write “Black women are hypersexualized” to demonstrate that this in fact happens, and it is not just from their experiences. Finally, it might add to your article to discuss specifically the need for more interdisciplinary work within medical education. Specifically, the lack of critical literacy in terms of understanding racism as a system demonstrates the need for more education outside of the “hard” sciences. I hope that these requests and suggestions are helpful for the authors to improve the quality of this study. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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