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PONE-D-24-13314Clinical status and cytokine profiles in patients with asthma or chronic obstructive pulmonary disease vaccinated against influenzaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kostinov, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Abbreviations should be used judiciously as many are not widely recognized. The brand name of the influenza vaccine must be omitted from the submission, and conflicts of interest should be more explicitly stated for the relevant authors. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 27 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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This policy applies to all data except where public deposition would breach compliance with the protocol approved by your research ethics board. If you are unable to adhere to our open data policy, please kindly revise your statement to explain your reasoning and we will seek the editor's input on an exemption. Please be assured that, once you have provided your new statement, the assessment of your exemption will not hold up the peer review process. Additional Editor Comments: The editorial board and external reviewers have evaluated your submission. The manuscript may be reconsidered after appropriate revisions. Abbreviations should be used judiciously as many are not widely recognized. The brand name of the influenza vaccine must be omitted from the submission, and conflicts of interest should be more explicitly stated for the relevant authors. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study investigates the lung function parameters and cytokine levels of influenza A and B virus vaccinated asthma and COPD patients compared to healthy vaccinated control subjects. Parameters were assessed 6 and 12 months after vaccination and compared to baseline levels obtained before vaccination. This study documented the course of pro-inflammatory cytokines IL-2, IL-6 and IL-17 as well as anti-inflammatory cytokine IL-10 in blood and correlated the results with patient hospitalization, medication and lung function. The authors confirm in their small subject study an improvement of asthma and COPD patients after Influenza virus vaccination that has been clinically observed although not documented in a publication. The publication could give relevant suggestions of patient treatment and quality of life improvement if these topics get included into the discussion part of the manuscript. Asthma and COPD patients can have exacerbation events from bacterial infections with non-typable Haemophilus influenzae. Please specify in the introduction that “influenza” in this study is referring to Orthomyxoviridae and specifically Influenza A and B viruses. Line 69: Please explain the meaning of the abbreviation “ARI” at line 69 instead of the current position at line 78. Line 106: The heading “Methods” should be bold like “Materials” at line 224. Line 135-138: “Within the next 12 months investigator - a pulmonologist, followed up all vaccinated patients and clinically assessed asthma and COPD course with repeated blood sampling and immunological studies in 6 and 12 months.” Can the authors provide more details on this procedure? Is it correct that only one pulmonologist performed all check-ups of all patients in the three different study centers mentioned in line 119-123? Line 192: “The groups were comparable in terms of age, sex and a history of the disease (p >0.05).” It is suggested to rephrase this sentence. In Table 1a the distribution of male and female COPD patients is 95% and 5%, respectively. Also, healthy control were 20-10 years younger than asthma and COPD patients. Comparability is only given in regard of lung function parameters. Line 216: “The vaccine forms a high-level specific immunity against influenza.” It is suggested to change the sentence to: “The vaccine forms a high-level specific immunity against the influenza strains mentioned above.” Line 230-236 should be merged with the paragraph starting line 126 to line 141. The information of line 230-236 would benefit the paragraph starting line 126 as it describes the study design. Line 263: The +/- symbol between Mean and SD is lost. Please insert the symbol anew. Line 313: “Table 3, Figure 1, shows that the level of CRP exceeded the conditional norm (up to 8 mg/L) in all study periods in asthma and COPD patients.” It is suggested to change this sentence to “The level of CRP exceeded the conditional norm (up to 8 mg/L) in all study periods in asthma and COPD patients. (Table 3, Figure 1)” Can the authors explain if the study subjects encountered viral/bacterial/fungi infections during the study course and how it was considered in the cytokine parameters assessed? Can the authors exclude that changes in cytokine levels occur due to infections not only in the lung but elsewhere in the body? Have the authors recorded other viral/bacterial/fungi infections in their patient’s history over the course of study and was it used as an inclusion/exclusion criteria? Line 389-419: “Correlation analysis of clinical, immunological, and functional parameters in asthma and COPD patients before vaccination against influenza” The authors are advised to include the graphs of the correlations in the supplemental material of the paper. Line 469: Please correct the typing error of “vaules” to “values”. Line 515: Can the authors elaborate on how IL-17 contributes to the asthma phenotypes and its role in allergic inflammation? The discussion should include IL-17 and its actions on neutrophil-mediated immunity, which has not been addressed by the authors in the current manuscript. Line 534: Do the authors with “T1 cytokines” mean “TH1 cytokines”? Line 537-543: The authors are asked to discuss their hypothesis of the effect on IL-4 and IL-5 in more detail as these cytokines were not measured in the patient populations. Please support the paragraph by literature. Line 588-591: The conclusion is very general and does not reflect the main findings of the study. And, vaccine development was not mentioned in the manuscript before. The authors should either revise their conclusion or address vaccine development in the introduction and discussion. Can the authors give an outlook on how the influenza A and B virus vaccination can improve the quality of life of asthma and COPD patients in regard to lung function gain, ameliorated pulmonary infections and reduced exacerbation events? Can the authors comment on vaccination strategies for asthma and COPD patients, especially when having a history of exacerbations? Reviewer #2: The authors present a well-structured study to investigate the influence of influenza vaccination on the clinical course and inflammatory markers in asthma and COPD patients. The descriptions of the general experimental design and results are clearly communicated. The findings are relatively reliable, as the authors acknowledge the limitations due to the smaller sample size and provide literature evidence to support the major findings. However, I have a few comments relevant to the study: 1. The statistics described in the paper do not mention multiple testing correction (MTC). The study is prone to Type I error due to the complexity of its experimental design. It would be beneficial to apply MTC, at least for Tables 1 and 2, since the number of hypotheses is large and there are some borderline significant p-values. While the significance might not greatly change for those with extremely low p-values, it might not be the case for the borderline ones. 2. The claim of 100% power might be extremely misleading and needs paraphrasing. Although the observed effect size can be very high, it is almost impossible in statistics to have a power of 100%, no matter how high the results appear. In fact, the unrealistically high calculated power might indicate a limitation due to the smaller sample size, rather than evidence to justify the sample size issue. 3. The ± symbol is not correctly shown in line 263, while the same symbol is correctly displayed elsewhere. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-24-13314R1Clinical status and cytokine profiles in patients with asthma or chronic obstructive pulmonary disease vaccinated against influenzaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kostinov, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: There remain some methodological concerns that warrant attention. Analyzing binary response and explanatory variables is more effectively conducted through logistic regression, which establishes a curvilinear model relationship, as opposed to a linear probability model. This approach will enhance the manuscript's utility. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 09 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: I am generally satisfied with the responses and updates, and I appreciate the amendments made. However, I would like to remind you to mention the use of multiple corrections testing, update and report the adjusted p-values for both Table 1 and Table 2, and highlight the significant variables based on the adjusted p-values rather than the original p-values. Otherwise, the purpose of performing the Benjamini–Hochberg procedure would be undermined, and your manuscript might contradict your responses to the reviewers (for example, VC, % is still highlighted as significant). This is the only point I suggest modifying further in this revised version. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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