Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 5, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-17871Health Experiences of Pregnant Women with Chagas Disease in the Atacama, Tarapacá, and Metropolitan Regions of Chile. (Poor) Treatment as an Indicator of Healthcare Barriers.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Avaria, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Dear Authors, Please, follow all reviewers' suggestions. I strongly suggest to change the title as not all study participants were pregnant at the time of the interview and most of them were not born in Chile. Other aspect of the title is “poor treatment”. The reader will think that the authors will describe the frequency of previous treatment with benznidazole or nifurtimox the patients had. But that was not the case. So, I also suggest to change the word “treatment” in the title. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 23 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. Additional Editor Comments: Dear Authors, Please, follow all reviewers' suggestions. I strongly suggest to change the title as not all study participants were pregnant at the time of the interview and most of them were not born in Chile. Other aspect of the title is “poor treatment”. The reader will think that the authors will describe the frequency of previous treatment with benznidazole or nifurtimox the patients had. But that was not the case. So, I also suggest to change the word “treatment” in the title. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Editor and Authors, Thank you for the opportunity to review the manuscript titled "Health Experiences of Pregnant Women with Chagas Disease in the Atacama, Tarapacá, and Metropolitan Regions of Chile: Treatment as an Indicator of Healthcare Barriers". The paper provides valuable insights into healthcare system perceptions regarding Chagas disease among Chilean and migrant pregnant women. I found the manuscript highly informative. The detailed testimonials are crucial for guiding healthcare policies not only in Chile but also in other countries facing Chagas disease as a public health challenge. Therefore, I recommend the publication of the manuscript after minor revisions: • Line 12. Replace “forms of Chagas transmission worldwide” with “forms of Trypanosoma cruzi transmission worldwide”. Clarify throughout the text that it is the parasite, not the disease itself, that is transmitted. • Throughout the manuscript: Correctly refer to "Chagas disease" instead of just "Chagas", the name of the discoverer. • Line 16. Italianize “Trypanosoma cruzi” consistently throughout the manuscript. • Line 39. Clarify whether Chile is free of vector transmission caused by domiciled species only (e.g., Triatoma infestans) or all Triatominae species. Consider discussing potential vectorial transmission by Mepraia spp. • Line 71. Ensure reference [20] is correctly placed at the end of the sentence. • Line 127. Include median age and interquartile range. • Line 128. Specify the other two South American countries with similar participant characteristics due to the small sample size. • Line 128 (and others). Spell out numbers below thirteen for consistency. • Line 126-131. Consider presenting these results in a table format for clarity. • Line 133. Use "Chagas" with capitalization throughout the manuscript, honoring Dr. Carlos Justiniano Ribeiro Chagas. • Line 151. Remove the unnecessary repetition of "as". • Line 268: Insert a space between "repeated" and "across". • Line 362. Clarify "standard 162" as it appears to be a typographical error. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the work you have done in Chile to bring attention to migrant women who are living with Chagas disease who are either pregnant or postpartum. The manuscript is otherwise written well, and results are easy to interpret. I have some additional suggestions to help improve the manuscript as it stands and prior to publication: - Please review for grammatical errors. Please be consistent when discussing "Chagas" and would recommend either leaving as "Chagas disease" throughout manuscript or abbreviate as "CD". I would consider how you use "vertical transmission" and "vertical Chagas". Many people get confused between vertical and vectorial transmission as the terms are very similar appearing. "Congenital Chagas disease" is a better term to be used when discussing the disease itself. I recommend adding "congenital Chagas disease" to keywords - in the abstract on line 15-16, "carriers of Trypanosoma cruzi" is not a great way to describe someone living with Chagas disease. I would re-word this sentence and possibly utilize "living with Chagas disease" - I suggest adding a figure that contains a map of the three regions where the study was conducted. Within the map, I would also suggest adding population density and catchment. What is the "Metropolitan Region"? More clarification on the sites is important. You can add the clinics to the map. - please clarify recruitment of the patients in lines 99-102. Which healthcare institutions? I would add participating clinical institutions to the "acknowledgements". - Line 100: diagnosed with "Chagas disease" - Did the team assess if the participants had concerns for transmission in Chile, Bolivia or other regions of south America? Where did the other two migrant from in South America? Was there concern for congenital Chagas in the participants or other where they coming from regions of vectorial transmission? - The title needs attention. After reading the manuscript it appears that many of the participants were "migrants" and I would suggest adding to the title somehow. There is a major focus throughout the study on migratory health and I think it should be added. - another question about the title is "pregnant" women. It appears that interviews occurred during pregnancy and postpartum periods. May consider adding "Pregnant and Postpartum Women..." - I would consider discussing stigma in those living with Chagas. https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3772024/ https://academic.oup.com/trstmh/article/114/7/476/5734980 ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Fred Luciano Neves Santos Reviewer #2: Yes: Norman L. Beatty, University of Florida College of Medicine ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Health Experiences of Pregnant and Women with Chagas Disease in the Atacama, Tarapaca, and Metropolitan Regions of Chile. Mistreatment as an Indicator of Healthcare Barriers. PONE-D-24-17871R1 Dear Dr. Avaria, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Roberto Magalhães Saraiva, MD, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Fred Luciano Neves Santos ********** |
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