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PONE-D-24-27175Effectiveness of menstrual hygiene management training to enhance knowledge, attitude, and practice among adolescents in Sindhupalchowk, Nepal.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shrestha, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both reviewers have provided a thorough set of comments which need to be carefully addressed before the paper can be accepted. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 28 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting paper about a MH intervention. The large sample size resulted in significant differences before and after however in reality the improvement was minimal by one point for knowledge ? the max was 6 and the baseline 2/3. the median post was 3 compared to 2. So they barely made 50%. I would have assumed the intervention would be very focused on the knowledge presented in the questions. In this case i would suggest if one particular question there was a marked improvement while others not? what was it that they did not grasp. Similarly the attitudes was significant in improvement but also when looking at the scores had not really risen that much when the max score could be 70. I would have expected this lack of real change to be discussed outside of the claims of significant differences. It seemed with the cultural issues in play from the tables that really the parents and teachers needed the intervention more than the girls. The girls may have changed a little but its the system that needs to change to ensure teachers who are there daily can support and that parents ensure girls are not stigmatised during their menstrual cycle. There was no discussion about this and potential difficulties to change attitudes if parents and communities held views and opinions that treated girls so differently when menstruating. There was a lot of small grammatical errors like full stops not at exact end of sentence on page 12.. On page 14 it says the majority of girls when the % was only 55.4 % which is rather just over half. Table 4 title should end "who had reached menarche, not who had their periods. This table seems very long. I was a bit confused about the discussion around Table 4 as this was baseline? or after intervention? did you look at any of these items after the intervention? it seems odd presented at the end. Reviewer #2: Abstract Please give the sample size, age group, who delivered the training, and a brief description of the knowledge and attitudes scores used. Also please briefly describe the statistical methods used. Introduction I suggest you use the phrase Menstrual Health throughout the paper, and cite the paper with the definition of this (Hennegan 2021) Lines 54/55 – your sentence talks about menstruation “around the world” but your references are a systematic review from India and two individual studies. Why not cite a global systematic reviews of menstrual knowledge among adolescents in LMICs here e.g. the Chandra-Mouli 2017 paper, Coast 2019, Hennegan 2019 (currently your reference 5). Simlarly reference 7 seems a bit ‘random’ as a single study from Nigeria. Best to cite studies from Nepal or neighbouring countries, or systematic reviews. Lines 64/65: Similarly for educational interventions for MHM you could cite Evans et al 2021. Please be clearer about the evidence gap that you are filling with your study – what does it add to the existing literature? Methods Line 78: Why do you call this a cross-sectional study when it is a pre-post longitudinal study? Lines 86: Please give a little more detail about the intervention e.g. how long was the video, was it shown in class? How many students watched? Did boys & girls watch together and discuss together? (you give this information later but it should be in the methods). Lines 92-96: How did you select the schools? Did any refuse? Lines 95: Were all students in the selected classes eligible, or did you select students in each class? Lines 112: How did you assess whether the students correctly understood the meaning of the questions? Did you undertake any cognitive testing prior to the survey? Lines 113: Why did you have a time limit of 45 minutes? Lines 108: Did you consider using validated tools on menstrual health practices such as the self-efficacy tool validated in Bangladesh (Hunter et al 2021?). Or the Menstrual practice needs scale (Hennegan 2020) Please include a sample size calculation The quantitative analysis should adjust for within-school clustering (e.g. using mixed-effects linear regression). It’s not clear in the methods if the outcome was change in score, or endline score adjusted for baseline. Why did you collect endline data from participants who were not seen at baseline? Table 2 should give the mean score at baseline and endline for each exposure level, and the (adjusted) mean difference with a 95%CI. It is not sufficient to just give a p-value as this doesn’t tell us about the magnitude or direction of effect. The results text also needs more detail about scores. Why do you not show the results of the knowledge & attitudes in a Table, like you do for practices? You give more details in the discussion but these should be in the results. Were there specific questions that were poorly answered initially and then improved? Please show the results more clearly e.g. a bar chart with the % answering correctly pre- and post. It is not clear what the “correct” answer is in Table 5. Discussion This is good but often goes beyond the findings of the study e.g. you talk about WASH practices which improve MHM but your intervention did not include WASH improvements in school. Given how deeply rooted the menstrual-related restrictions and attitudes are in Nepal, it seems surprising that a brief intervention can be effective – please comment on this and whether you expect it to be sustained. Also it would have been good to include FGDs among parents as I expect their knowledge & attitudes are very important? Given the problems with audiovisual materials, how would you advise this kind of intervention is scaled up? Line 378 – this sentence is not complete. 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