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Original SubmissionJuly 20, 2024
Decision Letter - Masaki Mogi, Editor

PONE-D-24-30125Effects of intrathecal administration of sodium nitroprusside and nicardipine on cerebral pial microcirculation, cortical tissue oxygenation, and electrocortical activity in the early post-resuscitation period in a porcine cardiac arrest modelPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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5. Review Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: The reviewed manuscript written by Hyoung Youn Lee and co-authors aims to assess the effects of intrathecal administration of sodium nitroprusside and nicardipine on various brain tissue parameters. These include cerebral pial microcirculation, cortical tissue oxygenation, and electrocortical activity in a porcine cardiac arrest model after successful resuscitation.

The manuscript is well-written and structured, the presented data and appropriate statistical analysis support the Author's arguments and conclusions. The study was carried out with all appropriate ethical aspects, and I have just few minor notes to address:

1. I think that the Authors should extend and highlight the Limitations section at the end of the discussion by adding the information about other methods that might have been included in this study in order to better evaluate the effects in a comprehensive manner. For example, they can mention the other methods that make a real-time assessment of cerebral blood flow (LSCI, Photoplethysmography, Doppler, etc.) or brain tissue biopsy/autopsy to assess structural effects on the cerebral cortex tissue. This can show the perspectives for further investigations in this direction.

2. The Authors mention that the doses of sodium nitroprusside and nicardipine were chosen based on clinical studies, have the Authors assessed these doses using the dose conversion between animals and human via equivalent dose calculation? How does it correspond?

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Gennadii Piavchenko

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Revision 1

Dear Editor and Reviewer #1,

Firstly, we appreciate you for your comments. They were very helpful in improving our manuscript and included very useful points that we had not previously recognized. After due consideration, the manuscript was revised as described below.

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: The following sentences are included in the method section to comply with PLOS ONE submissions requirements.

- All experiments were approved by the Animal Care and Use Committee of Chonnam National University Hospital (CNUH IACUC-22028) and performed in accordance with the National Institutes of Health Guide for the Care and Use of Laboratory Animals. The investigators who performed the experiments had completed an Institutional Animal Care and Use Committee training course on animal care and handling. All surgical interventions were performed under sevoflurane anesthesia, and every effort was made to prevent unnecessary suffering of the animals.

- After intramuscular administration of ketamine (20 mg/kg) and xylazine (2.2 mg/kg), they were anesthetized with sevoflurane, endotracheally intubated, and mechanically ventilated with a mixture of nitrous oxide and oxygen (7:3). Sevoflurane was titrated to achieve an appropriate anesthetic depth (no pedal withdrawal reflex and no increase in arterial pressure or heart rate).

- Animals that achieved ROSC received 5.5 h of intensive care under sevoflurane anesthesia.

- None of the animals reached the predetermined humane endpoints for euthanasia (systolic arterial pressure <60 mmHg, heart rate <40 beats/min, or seizure) until the end of the post-ROSC intensive care period.

- Immediately after the post-ROSC intensive care period, the animals were humanely euthanized with a rapid intravenous bolus injection of potassium chloride under deep sevoflurane anesthesia.

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: We reviewed the reference list. We ensure that the reference list is complete and correct. The changes to the reference list were mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies our revised manuscript.

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Comments to the Author

1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

5. Review Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: The reviewed manuscript written by Hyoung Youn Lee and co-authors aims to assess the effects of intrathecal administration of sodium nitroprusside and nicardipine on various brain tissue parameters. These include cerebral pial microcirculation, cortical tissue oxygenation, and electrocortical activity in a porcine cardiac arrest model after successful resuscitation.

The manuscript is well-written and structured, the presented data and appropriate statistical analysis support the Author's arguments and conclusions. The study was carried out with all appropriate ethical aspects, and I have just few minor notes to address:

1. I think that the Authors should extend and highlight the Limitations section at the end of the discussion by adding the information about other methods that might have been included in this study in order to better evaluate the effects in a comprehensive manner. For example, they can mention the other methods that make a real-time assessment of cerebral blood flow (LSCI, Photoplethysmography, Doppler, etc.) or brain tissue biopsy/autopsy to assess structural effects on the cerebral cortex tissue. This can show the perspectives for further investigations in this direction.

: We observed only pial arterioles on the surface of the brain among the cerebrovascular system. To address this limitation, the sentences “Fifth, we could not determine the impact of intrathecal vasodilator administration on penetrating vessels, capillaries, or large cerebral arteries, as we observed only pial arterioles on the surface of the brain. To better understand the effects of intrathecal vasodilator administration on the cerebrovascular system, additional studies using tools such as multiphoton microscopy and transcranial Doppler are needed.” were added to the limitation section.

We did not examine serum biomarkers of brain injury, nor did we assess functional neurologic or histologic outcome. These assessments require support and observation of the animals for a prolonged period of time, as biochemical, histologic, and functional neurologic consequences of hypoxic-ischemic brain injury are established over several days. However, because of our limited resources (shortage of personnel), we could not support and keep the animals for a long time period. As you pointed out above, biomarkers of brain injury and/or histologic findings, even when assessed in the early period after ROSC, might have provided important clues about the effects of intrathecal vasodilator administration.

To address this issue, the sentences “Third, we did not determine long-term neurologic outcomes. In the future, we plan to determine whether the CBF-promoting effect of intrathecal SNP administration is beneficial for long-term neurologic outcomes.” in the discussion section were changed to “Fourth, we did not examine serum neurobiomarkers, nor did we assess functional neurologic or histologic outcomes. Longer-term care and observation of the animals are necessary to accurately assess these parameters, as neurologic consequences of HIBI are established over several days [45,46]. However, we were unable to support and house the animals for a long duration because of our limited resources. A study to determine the effects of intrathecal SNP administration on functional and histologic outcomes after cardiac arrest is currently underway in our laboratory.”.

Accordingly, the following two references were added to the reference list:

45. Vondrakova D, Kruger A, Janotka M, Malek F, Dudkova V, Neuzil P, et al. Association of neuron-specific enolase values with outcomes in cardiac arrest survivors is dependent on the time of sample collection. Crit Care. 2017;21: 172.

46. Back T, Schüler OG. The natural course of lesion development in brain ischemia. Acta Neurochir Suppl. 2004;89: 55–61.

2. The Authors mention that the doses of sodium nitroprusside and nicardipine were chosen based on clinical studies, have the Authors assessed these doses using the dose conversion between animals and human via equivalent dose calculation? How does it correspond?

: We administered SNP and nicardipine at doses consistent with those used in clinical studies (Thomas et al. Stroke. 1999;30: 1409–1416; Pathak et al. Br J Neurosurg. 2003;17: 306–310; Hafeez et al. Neurocrit Care. 2019;31: 399–405). Using the animal equivalent dose (0.18 mg/kg) obtained based on body surface area normalization, we calculated the doses to be administered to our animals as 4.17 mg. This dose is close to the dose of 4 mg used in the clinical studies. Given the larger volume and faster circulation of CSF in adult humans compared to young pigs, the CSF drug concentrations and their CBF-promoting effects after intrathecal administration of the same doses may be smaller in adult patients with cardiac arrest than in the animals in this study.

To address issue, the sentences “Second, we did not optimize the doses of SNP and nicardipine. We administered SNP and nicardipine at doses consistent with those used in clinical studies [10,14,23]. Using the animal equivalent dose (0.18 mg/kg) obtained based on body surface area normalization, we calculated the doses to be administered to our animals as 4.17 mg. This dose is close to the dose of 4 mg used in the clinical studies [10,14,23]. Given the larger volume and faster circulation of CSF in adult humans compared to young pigs [39,42], the CSF drug concentrations and their CBF-promoting effects after intrathecal administration of the same doses may be smaller in adult patients with cardiac arrest than in the animals in this study.” were added to the limitation section.

Accordingly, the following reference was added to the reference list:

42. Fil JE, Joung S, Zimmerman BJ, Sutton BP, Dilger RN. High-resolution magnetic resonance imaging-based atlases for the young and adolescent domesticated pig (Sus scrofa). J Neurosci Methods. 2021;354: 109107.

Thank you again for your invaluable suggestions for improving our manuscript.

Sincerely,

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Effects of intrathecal administration of sodium nitroprusside and nicardipine on cerebral pial microcirculation, cortical tissue oxygenation, and electrocortical activity in the early post-resuscitation period in a porcine cardiac arrest model

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: The authors corrected the manuscript and now it may be accepted for the publication in PLOS One journal.

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Reviewer #1: No

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