Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 24, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-30493 Clinical features and prognostic factors of IV combined small cell lung cancer: A Propensity Score Matching Analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ye, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 05 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please amend the manuscript submission data (via Edit Submission) to include author Zhouhua Li , Xiaotian Huang and Jinbo Li. 7. We note you have included a table to which you do not refer in the text of your manuscript. Please ensure that you refer to Table 5 in your text; if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the Table. Additional Editor Comments: The reviewers have emphasised issues that require a careful and thorough manuscript revision. No commitment to publication can be made at this point. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. Instead of using performance status or comorbidities, the authors used initial treatment and metastatic status as variables for PSM. These variables could be confounding, as the initial treatment may not be independent of metastatic status. 2. Regarding the Kaplan-Meier analysis, the results of "Before PSM" and "After PSM" are mixed within the chapter, making it difficult for readers to understand. Please separate the sections for "Before PSM" and "After PSM" in the chapter for both patient characteristics and KM analysis. Additionally, the authors are conducting two analyses: CSCLC vs. SCLC and CSCLC vs. NSCLC. Since the CSCLC populations in each analysis are different, the authors should not present the results of three cohorts in parallel within the same sections, as this could confuse readers and lead to misleading conclusions. 3. Patients who received radiotherapy as the initial treatment in stage IV were symptomatic and received palliative radiotherapy, typically associated with poor prognosis in clinical practice. In contrast, those who underwent surgery were likely patients with relatively localized metastatic disease or in good PS. This could introduce significant bias in comparisons, so PSM is usually employed for such comparisons. However, the main focused PSM of this study is on CSCLC vs. SCLC and CSCLC vs. NSCLC, and another PSM is required to demonstrate the authors’ hypothesis. The sections on "the prognosis of each treatment modality in IV CSCLC patients" and "the evaluation of different treatment modalities" would be aside from the main objectives in this study, and the statistical method is not appropriate, even though it is a subsequent analysis. The authors should reconsider the main objectives and results of this study in conjunction with the statistical methods used. Reviewer #2: Cai et al. investigated Clinical features and prognostic factors of IV combined small cell lung cancer: A Propensity Score Matching Analysis, They indicated that the prognosis and clinical characteristics IV CSCLC, IV SCLC and IV NSCLC were significant difference. Surgery combined chemotherapy was the best treatment in patients with IV CSCLC and chemotherapy alone was a good choice for patients who have lost the indication of surgery.However following issued shoud be addressed: 1 In table 1 before PSM ,there are so many P-value <0.05 ,but in table 2 after PSM ,there are less sample size ,which will cause bias,please explain it. 2 all figs are low quality,please improve the absolution. 3 the conclusion should sumarize more concisely and logicaly. you indicate "we found that the prognosis of IV CSCLC patients was significantly worse than that of IV NSCLC patients, but better than IV SCLC patients." please provide evidence. 4 the format of study should revise accorading scientific format.please check it. 5 Table 5 1: The mOS and mCSS of different therapy methods in IV CSCLC, SCLC and IV SCLC,there is no statistic analysis to show in table ,you should compare to analysize to achieve the conclusion. ********** 6. 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Clinical features and prognostic factors of IV combined small cell lung cancer: A Propensity Score Matching Analysis. PONE-D-24-30493R1 Dear Dr. Ye, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Clinical features and prognostic factors of IV combined small cell lung cancer: A Propensity Score Matching Analysis Thank you for asking me to review this manuscript. The authors of the article deal with a very interesting topic: CSCLC Combined small-cell lung cancer, a rare tissue type of lung cancer. This disease combines the two best known histological subtypes within the same neoplasia. It is an uncommon condition so we still have a lot to learn about this particular form of neoplasia. The authors’ significant retrospective analysis was based on the data of the SEER database and their research strategy involved the Propensity score matching (PSM) that was chosen to balance the bias of the variables between patients. The article is well structured, the data are clearly presented and the results are well explained. From the conclusions we gather that this rare form of pulmonary carcinoma has a prognosis that we can consider in between the two kinds that are best known to the experts of this field. To be more precise, the research shows us that it is much closer to the prognosis of the SCLC: this suggests that the presence of the kind of cells that cause the SCLC variant of the tumor has a negative impact on the prognosis of the combined variant. This interesting research shows also that a multimodal treatment that includes surgery is the best therapeutic approach in these cases and that chemoradiotherapy is a valuable and effective option when surgery is no longer a possibility for the patient. The authors themselves point out that their research has some weaknesses such as the fact that the SEE database could be improved and the fact that molecular analysis were not included in their study. I believe this research is an important starting point that could eventually be developed into a prospective study in order to better investigate this rare isotope of pulmonary cancer and learn how to treat it best. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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