Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 30, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-17176SEX PREDICTION THROUGH MACHINE LEARNING UTILIZING MANDIBULAR CONDYLES, CORONOID PROCESSES, AND SIGMOID NOTCHES FEATURESPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Guariza-Filho, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In particular, reviewers have pointed out some lacks in the Introduction section that should be improved. Reviewers also recommended to increase the accuracy of the Methods section for what concern the metrics description. Discussion should better highlight limitations of the study, including also a more diffuse comparison with existing works. The authors are required to carefully take into account all the reviewers' suggestions. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 06 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors present a study focused on sex identification based on morphometric bone characteristics of the mandible. Below my comments: - the Introduction section is too concise in my opinion. An overview of the methodologies adopted by other studies with the same objective should be added, as well as on the adopted ML techniques. - In the Methods section I strongly recommend to be more accurate in explaining how the morphometric variables later employed were defined, also with the help of images - Did you check collinearity among the considered variables? - As the Introduction, the Discussion could contain a broader comparison with other similar studies. Reviewer #2: The introduction of the manuscript is quite inadequate. a more detailed literature review would have been expected from the authors. The authors state "However, so far, no studies have been found in the literature that explore machine learning approaches using characteristics of the condyle, coronoid process, and sigmoid notch, whether morphometric or linear, for sex prediction." However, many features of mandible sex prediction have been successfully used and many ML models have been successfully introduced to the literature. This sentence requires serious clarification. Although the authors have included performance metrics such as recall, precission, accuracy, etc., they have not included metrics such as MCC, Spe, Sen, etc., which we are used to seeing in such papers. The authors include the sentence "This allowed calculating an average estimate of validation performance, using a 5-fold crossvalidation." but they do not include this in any of the metrics. In such a cv-5 situation, for example, the accuracy score would be expected to be given as mean +- std. Reviewer #3: 1. Study Design and Sample Selection Limited Scope of Anatomical Structures: The study exclusively focuses on the mandibular condyles, coronoid processes, and sigmoid notches for sex prediction. While these structures are relevant, the exclusion of other craniofacial bone structures that may also contribute to sex determination is a significant limitation. This narrow focus might reduce the generalizability and robustness of the predictive models. Single Ethnic Group: The study’s sample is limited to Brazilian individuals, which introduces potential biases. The findings may not be applicable to other ethnic groups, limiting the external validity of the study. Without additional studies on diverse populations, the applicability of the results to a global context remains questionable. 2. Methodology and Data Collection Imbalanced Age Representation: The sample includes individuals over ten years old, but the study does not address how age-related morphological changes might impact the models' predictive accuracy. Including a broad age range without specific stratification might introduce variability, potentially affecting the accuracy of sex prediction. Potential Measurement Bias: The manual tracing of cephalometric measurements by assessors introduces a risk of measurement bias. Although the study reports high inter- and intra-examiner reliability, the subjective nature of these measurements could still impact the consistency and accuracy of the data. 3. Machine Learning Models and Statistical Analysis Feature Selection Bias: The study employs a univariate analysis with a significance level of 10% for feature inclusion. This relatively high threshold increases the risk of including less relevant or noisy features, which may lead to overfitting or reduced model robustness. Additionally, relying solely on recursive feature elimination (RFECV) without exploring other feature selection methods could result in suboptimal feature sets. Class Imbalance Handling: The use of the Synthetic Minority Over-sampling Technique (SMOTE) to address class imbalance is common, but it can sometimes generate synthetic samples that do not perfectly represent the minority class. This could lead to inflated model performance metrics, especially in scenarios with subtle differences between classes. 4. Interpretation of Results Overemphasis on AUC: While the area under the curve (AUC) is a useful metric, the study places significant emphasis on it without equally considering other relevant metrics such as precision-recall curves, especially in the context of imbalanced datasets. AUC alone may not provide a complete picture of model performance, particularly in cases where the cost of false positives or false negatives is high. Lack of External Validation: The models are evaluated using internal cross-validation and a hold-out test set, but there is no external validation with an independent dataset. This limits the ability to assess how well the models would perform in real-world scenarios or different populations, which is critical for forensic applications. 5. Discussion and Conclusion Inadequate Discussion of Limitations: The discussion acknowledges some limitations, such as the focus on mandibular structures and the single-ethnicity sample, but it lacks depth in addressing how these limitations might specifically affect the study's findings. There is also insufficient discussion on potential ways to mitigate these limitations in future research. Overstated Conclusions: The conclusion suggests that the mandibular characteristics and machine learning models can significantly contribute to sex prediction. However, given the study's limitations, this claim might be overstated. A more cautious interpretation, emphasizing the exploratory nature of the findings and the need for further validation, would be more appropriate. 6. Writing and Presentation Clarity and Organization: The manuscript could benefit from clearer organization, particularly in the methods and results sections. Some sections contain dense information that could be better structured for readability and comprehension. Additionally, some technical terms are not adequately explained, which may limit the accessibility of the paper to non-specialist readers. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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SEX PREDICTION THROUGH MACHINE LEARNING UTILIZING MANDIBULAR CONDYLES, CORONOID PROCESSES, AND SIGMOID NOTCHES FEATURES PONE-D-24-17176R1 Dear Dr. Guariza-Filho, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. The comments and concerns raised by the reviewers have been addressed, and the manuscript was improved following the provided indications. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have organized some requests. It is a study lacking hyperparametrization and should be re-evaluated with a better methodology. Reviewer #3: Accept Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Alessandra Aldieri Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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