Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-07909Fecal bacteriome transplantation from protozoa-exposed donors downregulates immune response in a germ-free mouse model, its role in immune response and physiology of the intestine.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ximenez, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 29 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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National Council of Sciences and Technology in Mexico (CONACyT; grants numbers 140990, 272601, 283522, and 257091) to C.X. and J.T., and the Canadian Institutes for Health Research to B.B.F. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and interpretation, or the decision to submit the work for publication. O.P.-R. (proposal number 208253) received a one-year scholarship from the “Estancias Posdoctorales en el Extranjero para la Consolidación de Grupos de Investigación” program of CONACyT." Please state what role the funders took in the study. If the funders had no role, please state: ""The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript."" If this statement is not correct you must amend it as needed. Please include this amended Role of Funder statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 4. Please expand the acronym “CONACyT” and "IMSS" (as indicated in your financial disclosure) so that it states the name of your funders in full. This information should be included in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. Additional Editor Comments: Both of the reviewers were positive but noted a number of points that need to be adequately addressed in a majorly revised manuscript before further consideration can be made. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the invitation to review this paper. This is a study on the effects of protozoa-positive fecal bacteriome transplantation (FBT) in germ-free mice on the immune system, comparing it to protozoa-negative bacteriome transplantation. Fecal transplants were made from 14 individuals’ stool, of which half tested positive for protozoa. The study reports several findings, including a reduce in cytokines in the small intestine, such as IL-6, TNF, IFN-y, but also IL-10. Additionally, an increased mucus layer, an upregulation of genes involving the epithelial barrier, and a downregulation of Tregs cells were associated with protozoa-positive FBT. The authors should be congratulated for pioneering research on protozoa in relation to the immune system via FBT in mice. I do however have some concerns and suggestions to improve the article. Major comments: 1. The authors argue that they applied a ‘fecal bacteriome transplantation’ instead of a fecal microbiota transplantation due to freezing of the stool samples, which would have eliminated the protozoa. No references are listed here. While freezing diminishes the viability of certain protozoa, such as Blastocystis hominis, it may not completely eliminate them after one freeze-thaw cycle. See references: Hurych, J., Vodolanova, L., Vejmelka, J., Drevinek, P., Kohout, P., Cinek, O., & Nohynkova, E. (2022). Freezing of faeces dramatically decreases the viability of Blastocystis sp. and Dientamoeba fragilis. European journal of gastroenterology & hepatology, 34(2), 242-243. And also Terveer, E. M., van Gool, T., Ooijevaar, R. E., Sanders, I. M., Boeije-Koppenol, E., Keller, J. J., ... & Kuijper, E. J. (2020). Human transmission of Blastocystis by fecal microbiota transplantation without development of gastrointestinal symptoms in recipients. Clinical infectious diseases, 71(10), 2630-2636. Where Blastocystis were transferred via frozen FMT. Since the research question focuses on the influence of protozoa presence on the immune system, I suggest the authors consider extending the experiment with fresh FMT (without a freeze/thaw cycle) to provide more insights into direct and indirect influences of protozoa on the bacteriome, and consequently, the immune system. If this is not possible or desirable, the limitations of current methods for (correlational or causal) interpretation should be discussed. 2. To better understand the reported results; it is important to consider following points for clarification: * Provide information on the 7 participants who were protozoa positive; which were found and in what frequencies? The previous article (concerning 49 participants) were colonized with several protozoa Blastocystis hominis, Entamoeba coli, Entamoeba dispar, Endolimax nana, Iodamoeba butshlii, Giardia duodenalis, Chilomastix mesnili, Hymenolepis nana, and Ascaris lumbricoides. * Include information on the bacteriome of these 14 participants; in that way the reader can interpret the results in the context of bacterial abundance and composition, which are argued to underlie the reported findings. * Specify the number of FBTs conducted, 14 x 4 ? 3. A limitation of this study is that several protozoa (possibly 6?) have been studies in a small sample size. For example, both Blastocystis was studied, which is mostly considered as commensal, but also or maybe (this is not clear in the article) Gardia duodenalis and Entamoeba histolytica, which are known to have the capacity the cause substantial complaints. The variance in protozoa exposure in the stool could be a possible explanation for the seemingly contradictory results found in this research; such as the downregulation of pro-inflammatory markers, but also increased epithelial permeability. This limitation should be discussed. 4. The (clinical) relevance of this research is not explained in the introduction and should receive more attention. Minor comments 1. The interpretation of reported findings and the implication of these findings are not clear. The authors should clarify how they interpret their findings. 2. Fecal microbiota transplantation and fecal bacteriome transplantation are inconsistently used throughout the article. 3. Consider to start the method section with a brief summary of the used cohort. It now starts with ‘every volunteer mother’, which is confusing since this cohort is not introduced. (line 97) 4. In lines 83-87 there appears a contradiction; it states that parasite positivity and parasite negativity are associated with increased abundance of Clostridia taxa. 5. The manuscript should be checked on spelling, grammar and clarity. (e.g. revise line 101-103, line 111-112). 6. Consider to delete line 151 since this sentence is stated twice. 7. Consider to rewrite line 344-346 to avoid redundancy with a section in the introduction. 8. In line 369 it is not clear that the findings of the authors contradict the statement in the previous line 368. 9. Add a reference for line 379-381 or clarify that this is speculation. The same applies for line 426 – 428. 10. The matching strategy should be explained (line. 137-138) Reviewer #2: Review-Faecal bacteriome transplantation from protozoa-exposed donors downregulates immune response in a germ-free mouse model, its role in immune response and physiology of the intestine. The study, a pioneer in its field, is the first to explore the role of a bacteriome shaped by the presence of intestinal protozoa and the use of FBT from protozoa-exposed individuals in a germ-free mouse model. The findings shed new light on the intricate biological processes, suggesting a potential regulatory and protective role of protists in maintaining intestinal homeostasis in a host. The abstract needs to be extended. The text is affected by linguistic errors. The software and design are affected by a lot of irregularities. The results are expected. M and M need more extensive reports and descriptions. The study design part needs to be more clearly described, and all the volunteers' details must be provided. Species names must follow the citation style; once written, the next time, only the second names appear. Please correct this. References: pl adapt to the journal's guidelines. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-24-07909R1Fecal microbiota transplantation from protozoa-exposed donors downregulates immune response in a germ-free mouse model, its role in immune response and physiology of the intestine.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ximenez, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. It appears that most of the scientific concerns have been adequately addressed. However, there remain a substantial number of clerical, typographical, and logistical errors and disorganization in the manuscript. Please carefully edit the manuscript, paying particular attention to those issues noted by the reviewer. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 23 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: Fecal microbiota transplantation from protozoa-exposed donors downregulates immune response in a germ-free mouse model, its role in immune response and physiology of the intestine. Review l. 429 pl don’t write spp in cursive 2. 485, 486 please don’t write phylum and families in cursive 3. References Your refs are still affected with many irregularities and citation style mistakes Examples below- first 4 references !!!!! (but also subsequently) 1. Partida-Rodriguez O, Serrano-Vazquez A, Nieves-Ramirez M, Moran P, Rojas L, Portillo T, et al.3 Human Intestinal Microbiota: Interaction Between Parasites and the Host Immune Response. Arch4 Med Res. 2017;48: 690-700. doi: 10.1016/j.arcmed.2017.11.01556 2. Parfrey LW, Walters WA, Knight R. Microbial Eukaryotes in the Human Microbiome: Ecology,7 Evolution, and Future Directions. Front Microbiol. 2011;2: 1-6. doi: 10.3389/fmicb.2011.00153.8 3. Scanlan PD, Marchesi JR. Micro-eukaryotic diversity of the human distal gut microbiota:9 qualitative assessment using culture-dependent and -independent analysis of feces. SME J. 2008;2:10 1183-1193. doi: 10.1038/ismej.2008.76.11 4. Aboulhoda BE, Abdelfatah M, El-Wakil ES, Alghamdi M, Albadawi EA, et al. Microbiota-12 Parasite Interaction: Implication of Secretory Immunoglobulin A and P2X7 Receptor Signaling.13 Discov Med. 2024 Feb;36(181):217-233. doi: 10.24976/Discov.Med.202436181.21. PMID:14 38409828.15 5. Verma AK, Verma R, Ahuja V, Paul J. Real-time analysis of gut flora in Entamoeba histolytica16 infected patients of Northern India. BMC Microbiol. 2012;12: 1-11 doi: 10.1186/1471-2180-12-183. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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