Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 11, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-23286Single-cell transcriptomics reveals immunosuppressive microenvironment and highlights stumor-promoting macrophage cells in GlioblastomaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== I appreciate the authors' efforts in using scRNA-seq to investigate the immune microenvironment in GBM. However, there are significant concerns regarding the overall quality and novelty of the work that need to be addressed. Therefore, I recommend a major revision of the manuscript. Please be particularly careful to correct any typographical errors in the title, ensuring that "tumor" is spelled correctly. If the authors disagree with any of the reviewers' comments or find themselves unable to perform certain requested experiments, they must provide a clear and well-reasoned rationale for their decisions. Major suggestions:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The article comprehensively reviews recent advances in glioblastoma immunotherapy, emphasizing emerging strategies such as CAR-NK cell therapy and dendritic cell reprogramming. It explores the complexities of the glioblastoma microenvironment, highlighting the role of immune cells like macrophages and NK cells. The review underscores significant challenges, including heterogeneity in treatment response and the need for personalized approaches. Overall, while showcasing promising developments, the study calls for further research to optimize therapeutic outcomes and address existing gaps in understanding immunotherapy efficacy in glioblastoma 1. Were there any notable studies or recent advancements in glioblastoma immunotherapy that were excluded from the review? If so, why? 2.How did you address the variability in study designs, patient populations, and treatment protocols across the reviewed studies? 3. Could you provide a more detailed discussion on the limitations of the current research and the studies reviewed in your article? 4.Can you elaborate on the specific gaps in knowledge identified during your review? What targeted research questions would you recommend for future studies? 5. Could you clarify the statistical methods used in your analysis, particularly how you handled heterogeneity and potential confounding factors across studies? 6How do you envision the clinical application of your findings? What are the immediate and long-term implications for clinical practice? 7.Did you analyze the impact of immunotherapy on different subgroups of glioblastoma patients (e.g., based on age, genetic markers, tumor location)? If so, could you provide more detailed insights into the differential effects observed across these subgroups? 8.Some of the figures and tables lack detailed captions. Could you provide more comprehensive descriptions to enhance their interpretability? Reviewer #2: The article entitled " Single-cell transcriptomics reveals immunosuppressive microenvironment and highlights stumor-promoting macrophage cells in Glioblastoma” is a nice study conducted by authors to explore the molecular diversity of the immune infiltrates in the TME of the 24 GBM patients’ single cell RNAseq data. The authors conducted detailed analysis of Inter- and intra-tumoral molecular heterogeneity of glioma cells, Functional heterogeneity of TAM in GBM, re-clustering of CD4+ T and CD8+ T cells, and detailed analysis of NK cells uncovering CD56dim_DNAJB1 dysfunctional state. They also carried out the analyses for intercellular communication networks in the GBM TME. Authors were able to characterize molecular signatures for five distinct TAM subtypes, highlighting TAM_MRC1 subtypes with a pronounced M2 polarization signature. They also identified a subtype of NK cells, designated CD56dim_DNAJB1. The findings also highlighted significant cell-cell interactions among malignant glioma cells, TAM, and NK cells within the TME. Overall, the analyses are well planned and nicely executed. The figures are explanatory and clear. Authors were able to come up with certain subsets of TAMs and NK cells populations that can be playing an important role in the cold environment of the GBMs and therapeutic interventions might have some clinical significance. Certain concerns need to be addressed: • Multiple grammatical errors, missing words, and wrong sentence framing exist. There are mistakes with the full stop and colons. The author needs to extensively revise the whole manuscript for such errors. • There is an extra “s” in the tumor even in the title. • The discussion section is unnecessarily lengthy. This should be shortened and only very relevant and context related sentences should be included. • Authors should specifically highlight how their finding of the TAMs and NK subset are clinically relevant with the available therapeutic interventions. Reviewer #3: The manuscript entitled “Single-cell transcriptomics reveals immunosuppressive microenvironment and highlights stumor-promoting macrophage cells in Glioblastoma” by Han Cheng et al. describes the immune microenvironment in Glioblastoma using single-cell RNA sequencing data. The authors collected two publicly available scRNA-seq datasets, which consist of tumors diagnosed as GBM. They focused on immune cells including macrophages, T cells and NK cells, and identified molecular signatures for several distinct subtypes. Although the work is interesting, I am concerned about the overall quality and novelty of this work. Major comments: 1. Please explain the meaning of the s for the word “stumor” in the title. 2. Several studies have already analyzed the immune microenvironment by scRNAseq of human GBM. The authors should discuss these other studies and the findings of this study. 3. There is no evidence that the authors have discovered much beyond the traditional macrophage polarization and activation marker. 4. It is also unclear if the classification of each immune subset is robust. No further attempt is made to validate these observations. 5. The authors performed CellphoneDB cell-cell interaction analysis. Could the authors validate these findings in patient tissues directly rather than indirectly? Minor comments: 1. For Figure 1H, as in Figure 1G, there should be an explanation in the Figure indicating which color bar corresponds to which sample number. 2. In Figure 3, font type and size are not consistent among Figures. Unify them. 3. About the Figure 4F, please include information in the Figure so that readers can see what are compared to what. In addition, in the Figure legend, Fig. 4 (F) is missing; insert on Page 28. 4. In the Results section, Fig 5 is missing; insert on Page 15. 5. Text in Figure 5D is not clear. Reviewer #4: Research studies based on aiming and developing therapeutic approaches to manage tumors is currently need of the hour due to increase in number of cancer patients worldwide. In this study authors studied a large dataset of scRNA datasets of glioblastoma and analyzed tumor infiltrating tumor-associated macrophage and NK cells. They also uncovered the complex interactions between malignant glioma cells and tumor-associated macrophage and NK cell subtypes in the glioblastoma microenvironment. This broad exploration highlights the complex interplay of immune evasion mechanisms at play within the glioblastoma microenvironment, revealing potential targets for therapeutic intervention. The manuscript is well written, and the experiments are skillfully designed and meticulously executed. I have a few concerns about the manuscript. • Remove “S” from the title in “stumor-promoting macrophage” • Abbreviations should be defined where used for the first time and then consistent in the manuscript • Included reference to the sentence “Glioma-associated myeloid cells….tumor-infiltrating lymphocytes (TIL). Page 3, Line 59 • Use parenthesis, braces and brackets in proper format to avoid confusion. Page 19 Line 513 ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Single-cell transcriptomics reveals immunosuppressive microenvironment and highlights tumor-promoting macrophage cells in Glioblastoma PONE-D-24-23286R1 Dear Dr. Wang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors have properly responded to the raised comments. The manuscript is now in a better shape for the acceptance. Reviewer #3: It appears that the authors have sufficiently addressed the reviewers' requests. The revisions demonstrate a commitment to enhancing the clarity and depth of the study. At this point, I have no further requests for improvements. Reviewer #4: The authors have thoroughly and effectively addressed all the comments and concerns raised during the previous round of review. They have made the necessary revisions, incorporating the suggested improvements and clarifying key points as requested. As a result of these updates, the manuscript now meets the standards for quality, accuracy, and completeness. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . 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