Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 4, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-13534Too much to process? Exploring the relationships between communication and information overload and videoconference fatiguePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Li, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 26 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please be assured that, once you have provided your new statement, the assessment of your exemption will not hold up the peer review process. 4. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Dear corresponding author, Congratulations for the completion of this timely and high-quality research. Your manuscript has been reviewed by 2 independent reviewers and now requires minor revision. Please make the necessary amendments based on the comments and recommendations from the reviewers and resubmit according to the timeline provided. Please do not hesitate to contact me if more time is required for the amendments. Thank you. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The topic, "Too much to process? Exploring the relationships between communication and information overload and videoconference fatigue," is both timely and significant, offering valuable insights into an increasingly relevant aspect of modern communication. The authors should be commended for their well-structured study, which presents information in a clear and organised manner, facilitating easy navigation through its various sections. The use of headings and subheadings is particularly commendable, as it enhances the readability and coherence of the content. The chosen methods align effectively with the research question and objectives outlined in the study, demonstrating a thoughtful approach to data collection and analysis. However, there are areas where further refinement could enhance the manuscript's clarity and impact. For instance, while both the introduction and literature review sections provide valuable context, there is some overlap and redundancy in the information presented. By streamlining these sections and merging them into a concise background, the authors can focus more sharply on key studies and their gaps, thereby strengthening the manuscript's overall coherence (Lines 42-64) and (Lines 93-96), (Lines 17-34) and (Lines 24-43, 87-92). Furthermore, while the data and analyses effectively support the study's claims, the complexity of the analyses may pose a challenge for some readers to follow. Providing a clear roadmap of the analysis process in the methodology section would greatly assist readers in navigating through the steps of data analysis. Additionally, simplifying dense tables and provide more narrative explanation where necessary and ensuring clear labelling of figures will enhance their interpretability and accessibility. It is worth noting that Table 5 is not directly discussed in the provided excerpts. However, it is mentioned that Figure 4 can be accessed or downloaded, which may contain relevant information related to the study. Unfortunately, without the specific content of Table 5, it is challenging to provide a detailed assessment of its density and interpretability. In the discussion section, the authors have an opportunity to expand on the practical implications of their findings and contextualise them within the broader literature. By discussing specific strategies for reducing videoconference fatigue in different contexts (e.g., educational vs. professional), the authors can offer valuable insights for practitioners and researchers alike. This could include a summarised key finding indicating that both communication overload and information overload significantly contribute to videoconference fatigue. Specifically, the results indicated that higher levels of these overloads are associated with increased fatigue, supporting our hypotheses. These findings align closely with prior research on videoconference fatigue, which has consistently highlighted the detrimental effects of excessive communication and information processing during virtual meetings. In conclusion, I appreciate the opportunity to review this manuscript and commend the authors for their efforts in conducting and presenting this research. Despite the areas identified for improvement, the manuscript has significant potential to contribute to the field. I encourage the authors to carefully consider the feedback provided and to address the suggested revisions to enhance the clarity, focus, and overall impact of the paper. Reviewer #2: Dear authors, First and foremost, congratulations for completing the research work and for writing an overall good manuscript. I appreciate how the 2 studies were presented separately which make them easier to read. All statistical analyses were very well reported. I, however, have a few comments/suggestions for your further considerations: Abstract - Line 29-34: As the overall results are similar for both Study 1 & Study 2, consider to combine the sentences. - Line 34: To add the word 'and' between Information overload and VF. - To add conclusions for both studies. Introduction - To add a description on current curriculum delivery in Singapore i.e., percentage of online and face-to-face classes etc. This is an important information as it may partly help justify why i) secondary school students and not university students were chosen to participate in this study ii) the 4 schools were selected Methodology(for both studies) - to add description on Participant/Respondent Information Sheet - to elaborate on platforms used to distribute the survey instrument - Line 245 (page 11): To remove the word 'teenagers' as there are participants who are 21 years old - to move all demographic results to the Results section - Table 1 (page 13): to describe what the term videoconference means to secondary schools students. - To add the Inclusion and Exclusion criteria of participants for Study 2. Results - Table 1 (page 13): To explain the difference between Genfat1 & Genfat2 and between Emofat1 and Genfat3. You could add the explanation in the results or in the Discussion section. - Table 1 (page 13): To explain the meaning of 'social situation'. You could add the explanation in the results or in the Discussion section. - To consider providing a table on demographic profiles for Study 2. Limitations - To add potential confounders in this study e.g., time of videoconference (day vs night; during vs after office hours), nature or type of work the participants involved in, device they use for the videoconference, place of videoconferencing (own desk vs large meeting room). All these factors could alternatively be included in the discussions. All the best and thank you. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: ZAINOL AKBAR ZAINAL ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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PONE-D-24-13534R1Too much to process? Exploring the relationships between communication and information overload and videoconference fatiguePLOS ONE Dear Dr. ZHANG, Thank you for submitting your revised manuscript to PLOS ONE. The manuscript has addressed all the points raised by the reviewers. However, to further improve the quality of the manuscript, please conduct proofreading as recommended by one of the reviewers below. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 04 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Shairyzah Ahmad Hisham, PhD. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. _______________________________ Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, Thank you for the opportunity to review your manuscript titled "Too much to process? Exploring the relationships between communication and information overload and videoconference fatigue." Your study addresses a highly relevant and timely issue in the context of modern communication, particularly as the world increasingly relies on videoconferencing for both educational and professional interactions. Overall, the manuscript is well-structured, methodologically sound, and written in clear and standard English. Reviewer #2: Dear authors, Thank you for considering my previous suggestions and for addressing all comments I made in the original manuscript. All comments have been addressed accordingly and are acceptable. I, however, would strongly recommend that the revised manuscript to go through another round of proofreading to enhance the clarity of the sentences, especially for the newly added sentences. Please kindly refer to some examples below: - Line 266 (page 11): 'who under 21 old' - Line 268 (page 12): 'all participants had the right to withdraw' --> to consider rephrasing the sentence to 'all participants were made aware about their rights to withdraw' - Line 309 (page 15): 'As Singapore is a multiracial society' --> to consider using the word 'country' instead of 'society'. Thank you and all the best. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: ZAINOL AKBAR ZAINAL ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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Too much to process? Exploring the relationships between communication and information overload and videoconference fatigue PONE-D-24-13534R2 Dear Dr. ZHANG, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Shairyzah Ahmad Hisham, PhD. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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