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Original SubmissionJune 20, 2024
Decision Letter - Deepak Singh, Editor

PONE-D-24-23271Accumulation of road salt in a calcareous fen: Kampoosa Bog, western MassachusettsPLOS ONE

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Additional Editor Comments:

Dear Wayne Ndlovu,

Your manuscript entitled:

"Accumulation of road salt in a calcareous fen: Kampoosa Bog, western Massachusetts" has been reviewed. The reviewer(s) have recommended minor revisions for your manuscript and the comments are included at the bottom of this letter.

Sincerely,

Dr. Deepak Singh

Academic Editor

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: This manuscript provides a thorough and well-researched analysis of the impacts of road salt on a calcareous fen. The study's findings are significant for understanding the long-term ecological impacts of road salt and informing management practices. Minor improvements in the figures and more detailed descriptions in the methods section would enhance the manuscript’s quality.

Reviewer #2: The authors must address the comments in the manuscript especially, the major limitations of the study based on the practical problems faced during the period of data collection. Authors also need to justify why the Chloride Retention efficiency is more in KB 300 during 2018 and 2019 even without having any wetland area and why the chloride flux in the KB300 was lower than the other two, though the Chloride Retention efficiency was more during 2018 and 2019.

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Formatted the title page to exclude the zip codes from the affiliations and instead included the city, state and country.

Updated the affiliations bullet style in the title page.

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We have updated the Funding Information section to reflect the correct grant information.

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Wayne Ndlovu reports financial support was provided by Massachusetts Division of Fisheries and Wildlife. Amy L. Rhodes reports financial support was provided by Massachusetts Division of Fisheries and Wildlife. If there are other authors, they declare that they have no known competing financial interests or personal relationships that could have appeared to influence the work reported in this paper.

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We have included the Role of Funder statement in the cover letter.

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This work was supported by funding from the Natural Heritage and Endangered Species Program of the Massachusetts Division of Fisheries & Wildlife in the Department of Fish and Game (RFR #DFW-2020-051), McKinley Fellowship and the Tomlinson Fund (Smith College). We would like to thank Erich Hinlein and Camelia Rotaru of The University of Massachusetts-Amherst for collecting and analyzing the field samples and curating the streamflow data used in this study. We also thank the Massachusetts Department of Transportation (MassDOT) and Laurene Poland from MassDOT for providing the road salt application data.

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Wayne Ndlovu reports financial support was provided by Massachusetts Division of Fisheries and Wildlife. Amy L. Rhodes reports financial support was provided by Massachusetts Division of Fisheries and Wildlife. If there are other authors, they declare that they have no known competing financial interests or personal relationships that could have appeared to influence the work reported in this paper.

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We removed all funding related information from the manuscript and added the amended statement within the cover letter.

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Response:

We have published our data and related code to HydroShare and below are the citation and URL:

Ndlovu, W., A. Guswa, A. L. Rhodes (2024). Kampoosa Bog - Road salt accumulation, HydroShare, http://www.hydroshare.org/resource/2c676a5913f44c85befedfcedc6185bc

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Response:

We moved the ethics statements to the Methods section (Lines 241-244).

7. We notice that your supplementary tables are included in the manuscript file. Please remove them and upload them with the file type 'Supporting Information'. Please ensure that each Supporting Information file has a legend listed in the manuscript after the references list.

Response:

We deleted the supplementary tables that were included in the manuscript and included them in the Supporting Information file.

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Response:

We thank the editor for the comment. We did not include any retracted articles in our manuscript, however, some of our citations had not been included in the references. We have relinked our citations and included the following references in the revised manuscript:

3. Pieper KJ, Tang M, Jones CN, Weiss S, Greene A, Mohsin H, et al. Impact of Road Salt on Drinking Water Quality and Infrastructure Corrosion in Private Wells. Environ Sci Technol. 2018 Dec 18;52(24):14078–87.

21. US EPA O. Secondary Drinking Water Standards: Guidance for Nuisance Chemicals [Internet]. 2015 [cited 2023 Feb 15]. Available from: https://www.epa.gov/sdwa/secondary-drinking-water-standards-guidance-nuisance-chemicals

41. Kampoosa Bog Drainage Basin ACEC | Mass.gov [Internet]. [cited 2022 Apr 10]. Available from: https://www.mass.gov/service-details/kampoosa-bog-drainage-basin-acec

49. Rhodes A, Wetzel P, Ndlovu W. Kampoosa Bog Water Quality and Vegetation Composition Review and Analysis. 2021.

50. Latham, NY Weather History | Weather Underground [Internet]. 2023 [cited 2023 Sep 28]. Available from: https://www.wunderground.com/history/monthly/us/ny/latham/KALB/date/2019-12

51. CoCoRaHS - Community Collaborative Rain, Hail & Snow Network [Internet]. [cited 2022 Mar 14]. Available from: https://www.cocorahs.org/

63. August 2018 National Climate Report | National Centers for Environmental Information (NCEI) [Internet]. [cited 2023 Jul 31]. Available from: https://www.ncei.noaa.gov/access/monitoring/monthly-report/national/201808

72. Mass DOT Snow And Ice Control Program 2022 Environmental Status And Planning Report [Internet]. Massachusetts Department of Transportation; 2022. Report No.: EEA# 11202. Available from: https://archive.org/details/mass-dot-snow-and-ice-control-program-2022-environmental-status-and-planning-report-eea-11202_202306/page/n25/mode/2up

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Response:

We thank the reviewer for correction. We have created a new map for Figure 1 which does not contain contain copyrighted maps from Google. The new map was created using ESRI ArcPro and using public domain aerial photography and ESRI digital elevation models. We also edited the figure caption for Figure 1 and attributed the data sources and software used.

Reviewer comments (Page, Line)

Reviewer #2:

(2, 28) Suggestion to change from water sources to water resources.

Response:

We accepted the reviewer’s suggestion, and the sentence now reads as:

“Road salt poses a threat to the quality of soils and water resources.”

(4, 99) Suggestion to delete ‘this’.

Response:

We thank the reviewer for the correction and have accepted the suggestion.

(5, 134) Suggestion to replace adsorprtion with adsorption.

Response:

We thank the reviewer for highlighting the spelling error. We accepted the reviewer’s suggestion and the sentence now reads as:

“Over the years, constructed wetlands have been used as a less-expensive alternative to store and treat stormwater and wastewater via adsorption and diffusion into pores [31–37].”

(5, 139-140) Suggestion to add a comma and the word ‘the’.

Response:

We accepted the reviewer’s corrections, and the sentence now reads as follows:

“Two major highways cross the watershed, Interstate-90 (Massachusetts Turnpike), and U.S. Route 7 (US-7) and are the major sources of road salt every winter.”

(6, 175-177) Suggestion to correct the spelling for ‘additionally’ and the structure of the sentence.

Response

We thank the reviewer for the suggestions and have edited the sentence as follows:

“Additionally, increase in sodium leads to decreases in biomass accumulation, inhibits plant growth and promotes crop senescence [47,48].”

(8, 275) The coordinates must be mentioned properly

Response:

We thank the reviewer for the correction and have corrected the coordinates in line 192:

“The Kampoosa Bog drainage basin (Fig 1) is a 465 ha watershed located in western Massachusetts (42.293 N, 73.305W) that comprises ponds, a graminoid fen, shrub fens and red maple swamps [25,26].”

(12, 400) Added ‘Eq’ to equation reference

(15, 491) Added ‘Eq’ to equation reference

(16, 510) Added ‘Eq’ to equation reference

(16, 516) Added ‘Eq’ to equation reference

(17, 539) Added ‘Eq’ to equation reference

Response:

We thank the reviewer for the corrections and have accepted the suggestions.

[11, 342 – 359] What are the major limitations of the study based on the practical problems faced during the period of data collection.

Response

Thank you for this comment. We first edited a typing error which stated that we included ‘irregular data collected at KB150 caused by ice formation during Dec 2018’ (Page 11, Line 375) in our analysis and corrected it to show that the ice formation was during Dec 2017, a period excluded from this study. We also added an additional sentence at the end of this paragraph describing a potential limitation of interpolating some of the data. The paragraph now reads as follows:

“At the four gauges, water level and temperature (oC) plus specific conductance (μS/cm) were measured every fifteen minutes from Nov 2017 to Oct 2020 using a HOBO U20-001-04 water level data logger) and a HOBO U24-001 conductivity data logger (Onset Computer Corporation; Bourne, MA), respectively. However, data from the MB100 gauge was excluded from the analysis due to conductivity probe malfunctions during this period. We focus on data collected from Jan 2018 to April 2020 due to (1) irregular data collected at KB150 caused by ice formation during Dec 2017 and (2) the presence of a beaver dam at the KB100 culvert from May 2020 to Oct 2020 which flooded the fen region and impacted the stage-discharge relationship. Other irregularities in the data caused by stream freeze-thaw cycles occurred over shorter time frames ranging from a few hours to less than 10 days and were addressed by interpolating between reliable data points. Interpolating between these data points may have failed to fully account for some of the complex variations in stage and discharge, which could have led to an oversimplified representation of the data and potentially obscured other short-term fluctuations, but we believe these to be minor given the short timeframe.”

(19, 600-601) Suggestion to us past tense ‘indicated’ and to add the word ‘to’

Response:

We thank the reviewer for the corrections and have accepted the changes. The revised sentence now reads as:

“Historic road salt application data indicated that salt application rates were slightly higher in 2018 and 2019 compared to 2012 – 2017 (Fig 4, S1 Table).”

(Page 20) Table 2. Kindly justify why the Chloride Retention efficiency is more in KB 300 during 2018 and 2019 even without having any wetland area as per Table 1.

Response:

The delineation of the portion of the Turnpike that contributes road salt to KB300 is challenging and we recognize that this could have introduced a degree of uncertainty to our calculations. Our delineation method could have led to overestimating the road length that is contributing road salt to KB300 which led to overestimating the amount of chloride retained in the subwatershed. To highlight this, we added the following:

“Additional uncertainty to these data could also be introduced by the uncertainty associated with estimating the road length in each subwatershed that is contributing salt.” (14, 462-464)

“Although the KB300 subwatershed has no known wetlands, we estimated relatively high retention rates during 2018 and 2019. This could be due to the uncertainty introduced during the watershed delineation resulting in the overestimation of the road length contributing road salt to the KB300 subwatershed.” (19, 618-621)

(24, 739-745) Why the chloride flux in the KB300 was lower than the other two, though the Chloride Retention efficiency is more during 2018 and 2019

Response:

We calculated chloride flux concentration as the total mass of chloride per total volume of water over a period, as stated in line 718-719 while chloride retention is calculated using Eq 4 as shown below:

Ann

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Accumulation of road salt in a calcareous fen: Kampoosa Bog, western Massachusetts

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Reviewer #1: This manuscript provides a thorough and well-researched analysis of the impacts of road salt on a calcareous fen. The study's findings are significant for understanding the long-term ecological impacts of road salt and informing management practices.

Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all the comments. The effort taken by the authors to repond to every comment and the justification given is commendable.

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Open letter on the publication of peer review reports

PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.

We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.

Learn more at ASAPbio .