Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 9, 2024 |
|---|
|
PONE-D-24-13205The effect of cyclophosphamide and dexamethasone on intestinal immunity and flora in DTH micePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Li, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Importantly, both reviewers raised concerns regarding the design of the statistical approach and the absence of comparisons between the Cy and Dex conditions, insufficient details in the experimental methodologies, and the need for clarity in the justification for both the initiation of the study as well as the interpretations of the conclusions. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 18 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Jordan Robin Yaron, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. To comply with PLOS ONE submissions requirements, in your Methods section, please provide additional information regarding the experiments involving animals and ensure you have included details on (1) methods of sacrifice, (2) methods of anesthesia and/or analgesia, and (3) efforts to alleviate suffering. 3. Thank you for stating the following in the Acknowledgments Section of your manuscript: "This study was supported by Guangxi University of Chinese Medicine Doctoral Program (2020BS011 and 2021BS019), Guangxi Key Laboratory of Chinese Medicine Foundation Research Projects (22-065-53-02), Projects to improve the basic scientific research capacity of young and middle-aged people (2020KY07002) and Guangxi first-class discipline Clinical basis of Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM) (0502300304)." We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form. Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: "This study was supported by Guangxi University of Chinese Medicine Doctoral Program(2020BS01 and 2021BS019), Guangxi Key Laboratory of Chinese Medicine Foundation Research Projects (22-065-53-02), Projects to improve the basic scientific research capacity of young and middle-aged people (2020KY07002) and Guangxi first-class discipline Clinical basis of Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM) (0502300304). The funder were Guangxi University of Chinese Medicine and Department of Education of Guangxi. The funders did not play any role in the study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript." Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 4. We note that your Data Availability Statement is currently as follows: All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting Information files. Please confirm at this time whether or not your submission contains all raw data required to replicate the results of your study. Authors must share the “minimal data set” for their submission. PLOS defines the minimal data set to consist of the data required to replicate all study findings reported in the article, as well as related metadata and methods (https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-minimal-data-set-definition). For example, authors should submit the following data: - The values behind the means, standard deviations and other measures reported; - The values used to build graphs; - The points extracted from images for analysis. Authors do not need to submit their entire data set if only a portion of the data was used in the reported study. If your submission does not contain these data, please either upload them as Supporting Information files or deposit them to a stable, public repository and provide us with the relevant URLs, DOIs, or accession numbers. For a list of recommended repositories, please see https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/recommended-repositories. If there are ethical or legal restrictions on sharing a de-identified data set, please explain them in detail (e.g., data contain potentially sensitive information, data are owned by a third-party organization, etc.) and who has imposed them (e.g., an ethics committee). Please also provide contact information for a data access committee, ethics committee, or other institutional body to which data requests may be sent. If data are owned by a third party, please indicate how others may request data access. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: There are some issues with this manuscript that require further revisions. 1.It is better if a normal group was designed which does not undergo sensitization treatment. the control group is the model group according to the description in section 2.It is described that the effect of Cy performed better than DEX but there is no difference comparison between the Cy and DEX groups in results. It should be recommende to supplement. 3. Experimental procedures It is necessary to explain clearly the administration method and time of Cy and DEX. In addition, the time for receiving DNFB treatment also needs to be clearly explained, 12 hours, 24 hours, or 48 hours? 4. Results ①Table1 Missing unit. I think PP number and ear swelling are not suitable to appear here. ②Ear swelling Figure1 lacks scale bar and requires more accurate arrow annotations or higher quality images. The arrow in Figure1B does not show inflammatory cells. In addition, provide a more detailed description of pathological changes “Lymphocytes are the basis of the immune response, and the number of lymphocytes is an important index of immune function.” I think this description doesn’t appropriate here. ③Figure2: The problems of Figure 2 are similar to Figure 1. ④Table2: Lym dose not belong to tissue. ⑤Figure4B:As shown in Figure4B, the percentage of CD3+CD4+ T lymphocytes increased significantly in the DEX groups. This result is relatively rare and may require further analysis or discussion. ⑥3.8 Structure analysis of intestinal bacterial flora The analysis of intestinal bacterial flora is too simple and needs further investigation, such as supplementation α Diversity analysis, species between different groups, and association analysis with immune cells, etc Suggest changing the group of Figure6 and Figure7 to “Control、Cy and DEX” 5、There are many issues with the manuscript writing, and it is necessary to make professional revisions ①A space is required between numbers and units,for example“24h,48h,72h” ②Many symbol descriptions are inconsistent,for example“p<0.01”、“(P < 0.001; Table 1).”、“*means: p<0.05;**means”、“**p < 0.01.”“P<0.05” ③The serial number of the title is duplicated. 2.7 Intestinal SIgA. and 2.7 Determination of gut microbiota abundance and diversity. Reviewer #2: Li et al. describe their work on profiling the immune responses and gut microbiome changes to common immunosuppression agents, Cy and DEX, in a DNFB-mediated DTH female mouse model. In their study, they characterize the immune suppression elicited by Cy and DEX through flow cytometry analysis of peyer's patches, Lym, and MLN. They additionally showed decreased sIgA levels in both treatment groups and differences in their gut microbiome compositions across groups. Overall, the authors generated potentially interesting immune response and microbiome datasets, but I am uncertain of the study's significance and encourage the authors to better convey the motivation behind their study in the introduction of the paper for the broad readership of PLOS ONE. I have some additional recommendations below. - I understand that Cy and DEX are two commonly used drugs but it is not totally clear from the intro why the authors were interested in comparing Cy vs. DEX. Are there indications in which either Cy and DEX could be used for treatment and is that directly related to the DTH model? The authors should clarify this point in the introduction or not make comparisons between the two treatment arms and only with the control arm. - The introduction's opening sentence also is misleading since the authors do not talk about oral vaccines. I recommend that the authors heavily rewrite their introduction to better set up and motivate their study. - Relatedly, all statistics appeared to be performed between control and treatment conditions and none were performed comparing Cy vs. DEX. If the authors want to make statements such as one treatment being better than the other, then the authors should perform the appropriate statistical tests between treatment arms. - The authors should strengthen their discussion around the motivation for looking at microbiome changes. - The authors say that IgA increased in the abstract - I believe this was a typo and that the data show IgA decreased in the treatment arms compared to the control arm. - It is not obvious how many mice were used within each treatment arm. Also, the authors did not mention whether the mice across treatment groups were housed together or separately as this is an important point in any microbiome study. A schematic of the treatment regimen may also be helpful to include in the supplement or as part of figure 1. - A circos plot should not be used in Figure 6. Instead the authors should perform statistical tests on the differences in taxa group relative abundances between groups. The authors should show stacked abundance plots for each mouse/stool sample that was sequenced. The authors may also consider a PCoA plot. - The authors should more clearly discuss reasons for the differences in immune cell subpopulations between the treatment groups and differences between up and down regulation of these population across compartments. - I am not sure that the vague statement of Cy is better than DEX is well supported in the conclusion. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Hongbin Si Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 1 |
|
PONE-D-24-13205R1Comparative analysis of the effects of cyclophosphamide and dexamethasone on intestinal immunity and microbiota in delayed hypersensitivity micePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Li, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I will consider the minor revisions satisfied with the following points addressed:
Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 07 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Jordan Robin Yaron, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper is interesting and reveals important information about the link between gut flora and systemic hypersensitivity reaction. This is an interesting paper due to the results obtained, but some considerations about the methodology and writing should be implemented. 1. In the introduction, it is recommended to search for other references on the immunosuppressive dosage of cyclophosphamide (CY) and Dexamethasone (DEX). The dosage of CY used in different literature reports is not the same, why the study used 100mg/kg CY and 40mg/kg DEX ? It is recommended to add a detailed explanation CY and evidence in the introduction section. 2. Another important consideration is the role of CY on the B cell response, which is not reported in the paper. However, the paper had about the detection of SIgA, in general, we believe that the secretion of antibodies is related to B lymphocyte. Assessment of B lymphocyte populations is essential in this situation. 3. The changes of T cell subsets and intestinal flora were detected in the paper. However, the relationship between intestinal flora and T cell subpopulation changes was not discussed in depth in the discussion section. Although the two changes may be the result of the separate action of CY and DEX, whether they affect each other was not mentioned. 4. The figures of intestinal bacterial flora is unclear, especially in Figure 9, the name of intestinal bacterial flora is not clear, it is suggested to change the picture or increase the color contrast. 5. The manuscript needs language and Grammar editing.The abbreviations before and after the text should be consistent, and the abbreviations appeared in the previous text should be directly followed by abbreviations, such as line 232, line 246‘mesenteric lymph nodes’, which can be directly represented by‘MLN’. In addition, in all image annotations, the comparison after the comma is capitalized, such as lines 255,259,268,273‘Compared to the Control group, **P<0.01, Compared to the DEX group’. There is no superscript of + in the whole paper. Reviewer #3: When describing your study design, there was no mention of when the mice were euthanised and which tissue samples were collected pre and post mortem. This needs to be properly addressed as it is confusing. Could baseline fecal samples have been collected to establish the microflora composition prior to administration of the test compounds and if so, why was this analysis not performed? I am not satisfied with your conclusion that CY and DEX exhibit immunomodulatory effects by regulating T cell subsets, diversity of gut microflora etc. as you have not provided evidence for a regulatory effect. You have describes some alterations to immune celular parameters, without demonstrating a causal relationship or mechanism. Your conclusions should reflect this. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Hongbin SI Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.
|
| Revision 2 |
|
Comparative analysis of the effects of cyclophosphamide and dexamethasone on intestinal immunity and microbiota in delayed hypersensitivity mice PONE-D-24-13205R2 Dear Dr. Li, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jordan Robin Yaron, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-24-13205R2 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Li, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset If revisions are needed, the production department will contact you directly to resolve them. If no revisions are needed, you will receive an email when the publication date has been set. At this time, we do not offer pre-publication proofs to authors during production of the accepted work. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few weeks to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jordan Robin Yaron Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .