Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 19, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-20221Optimizing learning outcomes in Physical Education: A comprehensive systematic review of hybrid pedagogical models integrated with the Sport Education ModelPLOS ONE Dear Dr. zhang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 29 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General Comments for Authors Dear authors, the manuscript is logically presented. The PRISMA steps included for the selection of studies is also well implemented and quality of study assigned. My primary concern relates to the potency of the findings in adding to the extant literature in this domain and specifically these concerns primarily relate to the practical application. I have my doubts about the contribution of this review. The stipulated purpose of this study was “to conduct a comprehensive systematic review of the role of hybrid PMs, combined with the SEM, in optimizing learning outcomes in physical education. Specifically, this study will investigate the impact of these hybrid models, integrated with SEM, on students' learning outcomes. Additionally, the study seeks to explore the advantages of SEM as a foundational model in hybrid PMs”. However, significant work is required to get this review to the point where I would consider it publishable. Details of this issue and specific comments are detailed below in the hope that they provide the author(s) reflections on making the empirical analysis more rigorous and insightful. Regarding format, please check all text for font size and typeface because there are inconsistencies. Specific Comments Introduction: In the theoretical framework I miss a paragraph explaining the sport education model and how it has hybridised with other models. There is only one paragraph in which baggage is presented and another one in which some improvements produced by the model in some studies are shown. On the other hand, I have detected errors in the quotations and references. Please, this should be revised. For example on Page 5, L125 the numbers of citations do not correspond with the papers. Shen & Shao 130 further investigate the impact and mechanisms of hybrid models on students' learning outcomes. What is the difference between this work and Shen's review? Method Figure 1: The words in the blue squares in figure 1 have been cut off, I think the last letter is missing The tables showing the studies are sorted by year (Tables 1 and 2). Please sort them alphabetically to better identify them. Besides, the citations should be numbered as in the citations. And even marked in the references. Otherwise, we cannot identify them and have not been able to check that they have all been mentioned in the results and discussion. Please check this aspect as well. Results The sentence of the line 226-227: “The total student sample size across these 30 articles reached 2381 individuals, with the majority of students aged between 10 and 16 years”. This sentence does not provide any useful data for authors, it is a summation and does not specify anything. Please do some ranking of the number of articles and ages as well as an average number of participants. P15, Line 259: there are two separate square brackets attached to the text. P16, L267: Lccópez-Lemus et al. this quote is not referenced. Please check throughout the text so that this does not happen with any of the following. I think you refer to López-Temus. Discussion P20-21, L373-383: Why you discuss that most articles are from TGfU and SEM because of constructivism and expose their characteristics in the discussion. And again in 392 you justify that also are built on the foundation of constructivist learning theory. P22, L402-406: Why here again the theory of the model is explained. It is about discussing, not expounding theory that should be part of the theoretical framework. In this case of TPSR. The article would contribute more if it showed how to implement these hybridisations. 4.5 Implementation limitations and future applications Can they indicate why you think that L454 “resulting in the teaching content of the other mode of teaching is often interrupted”? Please, review long sentences: example L450-454. Conclusion Please review the 1st sentence of the conclusion “This systematic review systematically examines” In general, the conclusions do not respond to the aims of the review. References Please check the dois in all the references, in Shen's reference does not work. Reviewer #2: The author(s) did a good review which shows that they understand the concept that is been review. I am recommending that the manuscript be accepted for publication. The author(s) should take second look at the the language and ensure grammatical errors are corrected. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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I appreciate your efforts in addressing each point raised, which have significantly improved the quality and clarity of your manuscript. The reviewers have acknowledged your thoughtful revisions, and Reviewer #2 has recommended acceptance of the manuscript. Reviewer #1’s concerns regarding the theoretical framework, references, methodology, and implementation details have been comprehensively addressed, and the updates have enhanced the manuscript’s contribution to the field. Based on the positive feedback and your revisions, I am pleased to inform you that the manuscript is accepted for publication with no further revisions needed. Congratulations, and thank you for your contribution! Musa Adekunle Ayanwale Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. 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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The auhor(s) did a good job and have shown mastery of the article submitted for publication. I approved the article f ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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