Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 15, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-00975Data augmentation via warping transforms for modeling natural variability in the corneal endothelium enhances semi-supervised segmentationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Marrugo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 21 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Sanchez thanks Minciencias and Sistema General de Regal´ıas (Programa de Becas de Excelencia) for a PhD scholarship] We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form. Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: [This work has been partly funded by Ministerio de Ciencia, Tecnología e Innovación, Colombia, Project 124489786239 (Contract 763-2021).] Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 5. Your ethics statement should only appear in the Methods section of your manuscript. If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please move it to the Methods section and delete it from any other section. Please ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics statement entered into the online submission form will not be published alongside your manuscript. 6. This study explores advancements in the segmentation of corneal endothelium images through a novel data augmentation approach. The authors propose a semi-supervised learning framework that integrates unsupervised data with a smaller subset of labeled data to improve segmentation accuracy. Utilizing a combination of models including DenseNet121, and a unique warping transformation technique, the paper claims to outperform standard augmentation methods. While the findings are significant as they offer the potential for more detailed segmentation, the paper requires major revisions in data interpretation and evaluation of results. Additional Editor Comments Related work: 1. Since, the article aims to enhance the segmentation algorithm by improving data augmentation, it is recommended that the authors provide this with numerical results from previous related works for clearer benchmarking in this section (AUC, ACC and Dice) Dataset description and Table 1: 2. The authors should specify the number of unique patients and eyes in each dataset (training, testing, and validation). Additionally, details on the distribution of healthy and pathological corneas in these sets would be valuable. 3. Authors should clarify whether data was split by image, eye, or patient level and confirm whether there is any overlap of images from the same patient across the training, testing, and validation datasets. 4. Table 1: The allocation of data into 216 training, 25 testing, and 30 validation samples deviates from conventional norms, particularly with the validation set being larger than the testing set. Could the authors provide a rationale for this distribution? 5. Table 1: The article describes using data augmentation to increase the sample size. Typically, augmentation is applied uniformly across all images, and they are either replaced or combined with the original images, resulting in the augmented dataset being an integer multiple of the original dataset. However, Table 1 shows that the train data increased from 1719 to 4220 (a 2.76 times increase) and from 216 to 597 (a 2.45 times increase) for the unsupervised and supervised sections, respectively. This is not consistent with an integer multiple increase. The authors need to clarify whether the augmentation was applied selectively to parts of the data multiple times or if another method was used. Semi Supervised Model and Architecture: 6. The authors should provide clearer details about the unsupervised model within the semi-supervised framework shown in Figure 2. Specifically, clarify whether Models ResNet50, ResNet101, DenseNet121, and ResNet101ViT are used as encoders in the unsupervised section, and confirm if DenseNet121 is the only encoder used in the supervised section, or if the same models are employed across both sections. Please revise this section (and Figure 2 if necessary) for greater clarity. Data Augmentation section: 7. In Figure 3, during the keypoints extraction phase, the method extracts points at equal distances along all borders of the image (including all four sides and each square). However, these points do not appear to be centered on any cell. As a result, some cells, especially on the edges, have two very closely spaced centers identified, one of which may be incorrect. This redundancy could significantly impact the performance of the Delaunay triangulation. Could the authors please clarify this issue? 8. In The section "Warping through Local Affine Transformations" discusses the parameter and its influence on image deformation, yet is absent from the formulas provided. Additionally, it is unclear which numerical values of correspond to the data in Table 1 (are these values from high- or low-deformation categories used in the training dataset?). The authors need to specify the numerical values of used in Table 1 and Figure 4 to help readers understand this parameter's impact and efficacy. Results and conclusions: 9. The names of the models prefixed with "BT-" in Table 2 and Figure 8 are not defined in the text. Please clarify what "BT-" stands for. 10. The authors should include the AUROC as a metric in table 2, alongside ACC. AUROC is more informative for segmenting corneal endothelium images, where class imbalances are common (most pixels being non-border, class 0) and can provide a more comprehensive evaluation of the model's performance across various thresholds. 11. The authors should compare and discuss their results with those of other methods that have shown superior performance in this domain. For example, the study linked here https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/29680687/ achieved an AUROC of 0.92 using conventional augmentation methods. 12. The authors should add the results from common augmentation methods to Table 2 for comparison with the proposed method. This will help determine how much of the improvement is due to the unique and effective augmentation approach introduced in the article. While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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PONE-D-24-00975R1Data augmentation via warping transforms for modeling natural variability in the corneal endothelium enhances semi-supervised segmentationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Marrugo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 26 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comment 1: The authors are encouraged to succinctly summarize the newly added related work, focusing particularly on the essential details relevant to the study, as cited in References 57-59. Comment 2: Please ensure that all abbreviations are clearly defined at their first occurrence within the manuscript. For example, "The UW approach" has not been defined, which I presume might refer to 'U-Net and Watershed.' This abbreviation should be explicitly clarified to maintain clarity for all readers. Comment 3: While the added "Dataset Description" section is informative, Table 1 currently lacks sufficient details regarding the distribution of data across the train, validation, and test sets. I recommend enhancing Table 1 with additional columns to clarify the following aspects: Patient Distribution: Out of the 66 unique patients in this study, please specify how many patients belong to the healthy category and how many to the dystrophic category. Dataset Breakdown: For each category (healthy and dystrophic), provide details on the number of unique patients included in the train, validation, and test datasets (e.g., the training set includes 23 unique patients with 17 being healthy and 6 dystrophic). Specular Microscopy Images: Apply the same detailed breakdown to the 90 in vivo specular microscopy images regarding their distribution across the train, validation, and test datasets. Additionally, please revise the newly added paragraph to reflect these details for enhanced clarity and completeness. Comment 4: Please revise and incorporate the main points from your following responses in "Author's Response To Reviewer Comments" file (answers for different comments) into the discussion section of your manuscript: 4.1: "The distribution of samples in Table 1 reflects careful consideration of our data's nature and our study's objectives. We assigned more samples to the validation set than the testing set to fine-tune model hyperparameters during training. This choice helps improve model performance on unseen data and prevents overfitting to the training set. We acknowledge the regulations and the importance of testing data to obtain an unbiased estimate and verify the model's performance in practice." 4.2: "During data augmentation, we generated different deformations for each image by adjusting the parameter "s" to values greater than zero. Distortions larger than zero were more plausible and could be selected, while higher distortions often rendered images implausible and unusable. Therefore, the augmentation process was not uniform. This resulted in the training data increasing from 1719 to 4220 (a 2.76-fold increase) for the unsupervised section and from 216 to 597 (a 2.45-fold increase) for the supervised section. We applied data augmentation in different proportions to the unsupervised and supervised stages. The unsupervised stage (Barlow twins) required greater variability to capture the diversity of features, hence the higher augmentation. In the supervised stage, where segmentation is performed, a less pronounced augmentation was applied to avoid overfitting and ensure proper generalization to unseen data." Comment 5: The authors' response regarding the "Semi-Supervised Model and Architecture" is notably concise and effectively clarifies the methods used in their research, despite being significantly shorter than the corresponding section in the manuscript. I recommend revising the "Architectures" section to mirror this clarity and conciseness, which will enhance the overall readability and precision of the manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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