Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 19, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-15828Food Insecurity and Psychological Stress among migrants and refugees in High-Income Countries: Protocol for a Quantitative Systematic Review and Meta-analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Berhe, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 30 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Dear Authors, Thank you for submitting your protocol, titled "Food Insecurity and Psychological Stress among Migrants and Refugees in High-Income Countries: Protocol for a Quantitative Systematic Review and Meta-analysis.". I have identified few areas you might consider Refinement of Inclusion Criteria: Issue: The current inclusion criteria are broad, encompassing all types of observational studies. This may result in high heterogeneity and limit the comparability of studies. Recommendation: Narrow the inclusion criteria by specifying the types of observational studies (e.g., cross-sectional, cohort) that will be included. Additionally, consider including only studies that have used standardized and validated tools for measuring food insecurity and psychological stress. This would ensure that the data being pooled is more homogeneous and reliable. Specific Focus on High-Risk Subgroups: Issue: The protocol addresses a broad population of migrants and refugees without focusing on particularly vulnerable subgroups. Recommendation: Explicitly state how you will handle studies that focus on high-risk subgroups, such as unaccompanied minors, recently resettled refugees, or undocumented migrants. Consider conducting subgroup analyses to determine if these groups experience different levels of food insecurity and psychological stress. Addressing the Limitations of Self-Reported Data: Issue: The use of self-reported measures like the DASS 21 for psychological stress is subject to recall and social desirability biases. Recommendation: Include a discussion in your protocol about the potential limitations of self-reported data. You could also explore ways to validate these self-reported measures against clinical assessments or other objective indicators of psychological stress, where available. Geographical Scope and Contextual Variability: Issue: The broad inclusion of studies from all high-income countries may introduce significant contextual variability that could affect the results. Recommendation: Consider limiting the geographical scope to a subset of high-income countries with similar socio-political contexts or migration policies. Alternatively, outline a plan for conducting subgroup analyses based on regional differences to account for this variability. Justification for Study Period Cutoff (2008 Onwards): Issue: The decision to include studies from 2008 onwards excludes earlier studies that might provide important contextual insights. Recommendation: Provide a clear rationale for this cutoff in the protocol. If the focus is on post-2008 data due to the global financial crisis, explicitly state this and explain how this choice will impact the generalizability and comparability of the findings. Justification for Focusing on High-Income Countries: Issue: The rationale for focusing exclusively on high-income countries could be further elaborated to strengthen the study’s relevance. Recommendation: Provide a more detailed justification for why the study focuses on high-income countries. Discuss how the findings from these settings can offer unique insights into the challenges faced by migrants and refugees, which may differ from those in low- and middle-income countries. Additionally, highlight how the results could inform policy decisions in high-income countries, where resources might be available to implement effective interventions Thank you for considering these suggestions. I look forward to seeing the revised protocol. Best regards, [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. 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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Well-done on your submission. Please see below comments to possibly improve your paper. 1. Please remove the word “Quantitative” from the paper title. There is nothing like a “quantitative systematic review”. A review may be made up of quantitative studies but that does not make the review “quantitative”. 2. In the abstract, what do you mean by; “meta-analytical approach” to conduct a systematic review of the existing body of literature? From my knowledge, a meta-analysis is the statistical combination of results from two or more separate studies. Such studies could be gotten through a systematic review. On the other hand, a systematic review uses repeatable/systematic methods to find, select, and synthesize all available evidence. You can only conduct a meta-analysis on the result from a systematic review. 3. In the abstract, your study aim is different from your title. Ensure that your title reflects your study aim. 4. Why 1 January 2024? What do you mean by “onward”? Do you mean from 1 January 2024 till date? 5. The abstract has some unnecessary information. For instance, “Any disagreements pertaining to data abstraction, to be carried out by RB and KE, will be resolved either through discussions or with the help of additional reviewers (KA and AA). The degree of agreement among the reviewers will be evaluated using kappa statistics to quantify the proportion of agreement”. This information should be in the methods section and not the abstract. 6. In lines 72-74 you wrote “Notably, refugees and migrants are disproportionately vulnerable to FI because of their heightened exposure to natural disasters and conflict-related instability (9)”, why is their exposure to natural disasters and conflict-related instability heightened? does it mean that natural disasters and conflict-related instability is less in magnitude in areas where non-migrants live within the same country? 7. The study period in Table 1 is different from what was stated in the abstract. from 8. When you wrote, “January 2008 to November 29, 2024”, are you planning on collecting studies that are not yet published? What is your rationale for including a future date? 9. Table 2 should be a supplementary table. 10. In lines 163 – 164, you wrote “Psychological stress will be measured using the well-established and validated 21-item Depression, Anxiety, and Stress Scale (DASS 21)…”, is your review also measuring psychological stress? I believe you meant to say “studies which measured psychological stress using the well-established and validated 21-item Depression, Anxiety, and Stress Scale (DASS 21) will be included”. 11. In line 179, there is no “Sydney University”. Please provide the name of the University in Sydney you are referring to. 12. In Table 1, under Population, initially you wrote “with any visa category” , then later you specified the visa category by naming “the Special Humanitarian Program (SHP) and the onshore stream visa”, this is confusing. Please be specific about the visa category. Also, what about migrants who are not on a visa? Migrants who are permanent residents or citizens? 13. What are the potential strengths and limitations of the review? ********** 7. 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Food Insecurity and Psychological Stress among migrants and refugees in High-Income Countries: Protocol for a Systematic Review and Meta-analysis PONE-D-24-15828R1 Dear Dr. Berhe, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Rabie Adel El Arab Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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