Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 24, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-02458Harnessing explainable Artificial Intelligence for Patient-to-Clinical-Trial matching: A proof-of-concept pilot study using Phase I Oncology TrialsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please carefully check the Reviewers’ comments and improve the manuscript. Reviews provide details into areas that require improvement. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 29 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Thank you for stating the following financial disclosure: “This work is supported by an internal seed fund at The University of Oklahoma.” Please state what role the funders took in the study. If the funders had no role, please state: "The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript." If this statement is not correct you must amend it as needed. Please include this amended Role of Funder statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 4. In the online submission form, you indicated that [Patient records cannot be shared publicly due to the HIPPA requirement. The output of the system can be shared through Google drive]. All PLOS journals now require all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript to be freely available to other researchers, either 1. In a public repository, 2. Within the manuscript itself, or 3. Uploaded as supplementary information. 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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Strengths: Innovative Approach: The study introduces an innovative use of explainable AI to the domain of clinical trial matching, focusing on phase I oncology trials. This approach is significant as it aims to increase the efficiency of patient recruitment without compromising the quality of patient-trial matching. Use of NLP Techniques: The application of modern NLP techniques to process unstructured patient records and clinical trial protocols represents a substantial advancement over traditional manual matching methods. This could potentially streamline the matching process, making it faster and more accurate. Explainability and Transparency: One of the key contributions of this study is the emphasis on explainability in the AI matching process. Providing a summary matching score along with explanations for the evidence contributes to the transparency and trustworthiness of the AI system, which is crucial in a clinical setting. Pilot Study Design: The proof-of-concept nature of the study, demonstrated through a pilot system, showcases the feasibility of the proposed approach. The detailed analysis of the system's performance, including precision, sensitivity/recall, accuracy, and specificity metrics, provides a solid foundation for further development and refinement. Limitations: Sample Size and Data Limitations: The study is based on a relatively small dataset of synthesized dummy patient records and clinical trial protocols, which may not fully capture the complexity and variability encountered in real-world settings. Future work would benefit from larger and more diverse datasets to validate and improve the system's performance. Misclassified Cases Analysis: The manuscript discusses the instances of misclassification, attributing errors to ambiguity in abbreviations, misunderstanding of context, and variations in expression. These insights are valuable, but they also highlight the need for continuous refinement of the NLP models and preprocessing steps to handle such complexities more effectively. Scope for Expanding Eligibility Criteria: The study currently focuses on four main criteria for matching. However, clinical trial eligibility often involves a wider range of criteria. Expanding the system to consider additional criteria could enhance its applicability and accuracy. Future Directions: The manuscript outlines several promising areas for future research, including the integration of gene name thesauri to address genetic mutation matching errors and the exploration of structured reporting approaches to reduce ambiguity. Furthermore, extending the prototype system to include more detailed inclusion/exclusion criteria and testing it on a larger scale are essential steps towards realizing a practical AI-assisted patient-clinical trial matching tool. Reviewer #2: The research is emerging with the application of explanation AI. However, more detailed analysis how explainable AI is used in the proposed work is suggested. 2.The authors should consider some explanation without explainable AI and discuss the improvement achieved. 3. How, the proposed method is trustworthy, transparent and secured as mentioned by the authors, to be elaborated with more detail . 4. Some comparison with other approaches to be discussed with their pitfalls, even though the authors states no research is carried out is novel. 5. How the proposed preprocessing and feature extraction process carried out and what were the outputs and which AI technique is used, please present it in a flow chart and if possible, write down the pseudocode for them. Reviewer #3: This work propose using an AI system, that utilizes modern NLP methods to match patient records with clinical trial protocols based on four criteria: cancer type, performance status, genetic mutation, and measurable disease. It provides a matching score and evidence-based explanations. While the idea of the model is great and may help in finding th epropoer clinical triials. I have major concern about the depth of the information and number of samples as the following: - More in depth data are required to build the relationships between gene mutations+ clinical data with the clinical trial. For example, full variant information included the position the reference and the change, and more in depth about coverage. - A lack of number of samples in this study - A lack of proper measurements (evaluations) out of this study. Again, this is a good idea but still immature for publication. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Abedalrhman Alkhateeb ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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Harnessing explainable Artificial Intelligence for Patient-to-Clinical-Trial matching: A proof-of-concept pilot study using Phase I Oncology Trials PONE-D-24-02458R1 Dear Dr. Lu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Agnieszka Konys, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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