Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 20, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-13468HNL Dimer in plasma is a unique and useful biomarker for the monitoring of antibiotic treatment in sepsisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Venge, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS One. After careful review of the work, and considering feedback from two independent reviewers, I would like to invite you to address the concerns/comments below, and submit a revised version of the manuscript. Besides, here are some additional comments: 1. The study confirms that HNL Dimer is a rapid responder to antibiotics treatment in sepsis, with reductions seen several days before other biomarkers like Heparin-binding protein and Procalcitonin. HNL Dimer and HNL Total are proposed as valuable tools in the diagnosis and management of sepsis and organ failure. Provide more context on how these findings compare to existing literature on sepsis biomarkers. Discuss potential mechanisms explaining why HNL Dimer is a better predictor than other biomarkers. 2. The manuscript could benefit from more streamlined sections to improve readability. Simplify complex sentences to enhance clarity. Ensure consistent terminology is used throughout the manuscript. 3. The study is retrospective, which is a limitation as it might introduce biases. Plasma was obtained at admission to ICU and during follow-up at days 2 and 3. HNL Dimer, HNL Total, HBP, and Procalcitonin are measured using ELISA kits with CVs of duplicates below 10% A prospective study design would strengthen the findings. Include more details on the inclusion and exclusion criteria for patient selection. Discuss the potential biases introduced by the retrospective design and how they were mitigated. Discuss the reliability and validity of the ELISA kits used, including the coefficient of variation (CV) of duplicates. 4. Ensure the clarity of statistical methods by providing more detailed explanations where necessary. Please report exact p-values instead of using thresholds like p<0.05, where feasible. Include a power analysis to justify the sample sizes used in the study. 5. Potential confounding factors such as variations in antibiotic regimens and patient comorbidities are not fully addressed (Page 3, Line 8). 6. While the study highlights the superiority of HNL Dimer, it does not thoroughly compare the cost-effectiveness of this biomarker with existing ones (Page 5, Lines 7-9). Specific comments: Line 10: "Verbal informed consent was given by the patient or next of kin if the patient was not able." - Consider specifying the circumstances under which verbal consent was deemed necessary. Line 20: "This study was retrospective and not designed to monitor adequate antibiotics treatment, which is a limitation of the study." - Suggest elaborating on how this limitation was addressed in the analysis. Line 30: "The concentrations in plasma of healthy persons (n=144) were for HNL-Total: 35.7 µg/L (IQ 29.6-42.0 µg/L), for HNL Dimer: 3.6 µg/L (IQ 2.5-4.8 µg/L), for PCT 0.045 µg/L (IQ 0.036-0.057 µg/L)." - Consider adding a brief discussion on how these baseline values compare to those in other studies. Abstract: Lines 1-5: Provide a more concise summary of the study's background and objectives. Lines 6-10: Ensure the methods section of the abstract is clear and concise. Specify the study design and key statistical methods used. Lines 11-15: Summarize the key findings clearly, highlighting the significance of HNL Dimer as a biomarker. Lines 16-20: Strengthen the conclusion by emphasizing the clinical relevance of the findings. Line 2: Correct "sever" to "serve." Line 5: Ensure the description of the biomarkers is consistent throughout the manuscript. Introduction: Page 1, Line 2: Rephrase "life-threatening consequences, representing a significant global health burden" for clarity. Page 2, Line 3: Provide more context on the current limitations of existing biomarkers. Lines 21-25: Provide a clear rationale for the study, citing relevant literature to justify the need for new sepsis biomarkers. Lines 26-30: Introduce the hypothesis and objectives of the study clearly. Methods: Lines 31-35: Detail the study design and patient selection criteria. Discuss any potential biases and how they were mitigated. Lines 36-40: Describe the sample collection process and the assays used to measure biomarkers. Include details on the reliability and validity of the assays. Lines 41-45: Explain the statistical methods in detail, including the rationale for choosing specific tests. Page 2, Line 11: Clarify the exclusion criteria for the study population. Page 4, Line 16: Justify the choice of a three-day follow-up period. Results: Lines 46-50: Present the findings clearly, using tables and figures where appropriate. Ensure that all statistical results are reported with exact p-values. Lines 51-55: Compare the findings with baseline values in healthy persons and discuss any significant differences. Page 5, Line 4: Elaborate on the significance of the findings in the context of clinical practice. Page 6, Line 1: Include a detailed comparison of the biomarkers' cost-effectiveness. Discussion: Lines 56-60: Compare the study's findings with existing literature on sepsis biomarkers. Discuss potential mechanisms explaining the results. Lines 61-65: Address the limitations of the study, including the retrospective design, and suggest areas for future research. Conclusion: Lines 66-70: Summarize the key findings and their implications for clinical practice. Page 7, Line 9: Emphasize the potential of HNL Dimer as a rapid and reliable biomarker for sepsis management. References: Lines 71-75: Ensure all references are up-to-date and relevant to the study. Check for any formatting inconsistencies. Tables and Figures: Lines 76-80: Ensure all tables and figures are clearly labeled and accurately represent the data. Provide descriptive captions for each. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 07 2024 11:59PM. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1- The first sentence in abstract and introduction is similar. Could u rephrase either one. 2- Why author choose to analyze with non-parametric with the big data. Is it because of data not normally distributed. 3- Could you please explain about the sampling method. How many admissions throughout the year and how many eligible and how many was not included. Or the method is random sampling. 4- Why the p value decimal point is not standardized 5- Is it all the analyzer used to test are all point of care test 6- Could you explain about the lifespan of kits of each biomarker. 7- Why plasma not the serum or whole blood samples. 8- What blood samples type been collected, arterial or venous. How the process of withdrawn the blood and who performed. Who centrifuge the whole blood and duration of time. 9- Is it possible to share the patient demographics and severity score of patients. 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HNL Dimer in plasma is a unique and useful biomarker for the monitoring of antibiotic treatment in sepsis PONE-D-24-13468R1 Dear Dr. Venge, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sonu Bhaskar, MD PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): We are pleased to accept the current version of the manuscript. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS One. Reviewers' comments: |
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