Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 14, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-19447Screening and Diversity Analysis of Dibutyl Phthalate Degrading Bacteria in Agriculture SoilPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Li, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 31 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: I want to add some comments. - The chemicals and materials need to be supplemented with a grade to indicate that they have the appropriate purity for research. - Please present the QA/QC method to demonstrate the necessary parameters of the DBP analytical method, such as recovery efficiency, repeatability, and LOQ. - The manuscript should illustrate more results using charts. For example, in section 3.3.1, a UV-Vis spectrum is required. Graphs showing the degradation of DBP over time should also be presented in chart form. Additionally, it may be necessary to include HPLC spectra to show the degradation before and after the degradation experiment. --- Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The article is well written and organized. Novelty is appreciated. Minor revisions are required. 1- Write the name of the country China for Dayi County. Also, for all cities in the abstract. 2- The following related articles should be cited in the introduction https://doi.org/10.3390/ijms17071012 https://doi.org/10.1016/j.btre.2017.04.002 International Journal of Environmental Science and Development, Vol. 3, No. 3, June 2012 Biodegradation of Dimethyl Phthalate, Diethyl Phthalate, Dibutyl Phthalate and Their Mixture by Variovorax Sp. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.scitotenv.2019.02.385 Li, H., Liu, L., Xu, Y. et al. Microplastic effects on soil system parameters: a meta-analysis study. Environ Sci Pollut Res 29, 11027–11038 (2022). https://doi.org/10.1007/s11356-021-18034-9 3- Novelty over old published articles should be highlighted in the abstract 4- Line 64- 66 add reference 5- Line 132, add country name. also, in line 136 6- Add reference for the method in line 153 7- Line 237, write full name for R2 8- Line 252, remove and 9- Line 269, as shown in Table 3-1.; it should be Table 1.also, in 271 10- Remove repeated information from line 350- 361 11- Figures for results of UV spectra and HPLC chromatograms should be displayed. 12- Study limitation and future plan should be suggested Reviewer #2: The manuscript discussed the isolation and utilization of DBP bacterial degradation strains to reduce the DBP soil content. The bacterial strains were isolated using pure culture approach and were screened and identified using 16S rDNA sequencing. The isolated strains had a successful rate of DBP degradation, making them a good candidate for DBP removal from the soil with the strain SWDB-15 having the most effective degrading capability. However, a thorough English editing is required for this manuscript. The researchers thoroughly discussed the background of the problem in the introduction. They discussed how DBP is related to plastic mulch and human health, and the governmental regulations pertaining to it in China and USA. They also compared its existence in vegetable fields compared to rice and other fields and thoroughly discussed previous literature pertaining to plastic degrading bacteria. Later, the authors discussed the methods thoroughly and showed how the DBP bacteria was identified and isolated. The authors also discussed the results of their work in details showcasing the abilities of the various bacterial strains in degradation of DBP and comparing their results to literature findings. The work was done using standard methodology pertaining to such types of research and the results are adequately and clearly presented. However, several linguistic errors were found in the manuscript. In what follows, I will discuss those errors along with other comments I had: 1) Line 52, it is not usual that the phrase “in our nation” be used in scientific literature. Please replace it with the country name. 2) Line 75, instead of using the word “cheap”, you can say “cost-effective” or “relatively cheaper” 3) Line 111, replace on with in 4) Lines 126-132 are better suited at the beginning not towards the end of the introduction. 5) Line 135, no mention of the number of samples collected? These should be clarified 6) Line 137, should state that these are coordinates and not just numbers. 7) Line 149, the statement seems to be unrelated to text before it and should be integrated into it properly. 8) Line 154, same as above and additionally the first sentence is not clear here and the second sentence is in brackets which makes no sense for a sentence! 9) Line 158, it is better to use the word “Each” instead of “The” at the start of the sentence. 10) Line 168, “The bacterial suspension should be” I believe that it was already and thus this sentence should be re-written. 11) Line 172, the entire sentence needs to be re-written. 12) Line 177, the sentence “After that, inoculate the pure…..” needs to be re-written correctly. 13) Line 218, “then use sterile water….” should be re-written correctly. 14) Line 228, “place the conical…..” should be re-written correctly. 15) Line 236, what do the authors mean by “external standard method”? also, I would say “a standard curve was constructed” instead of construct a standard curve. 16) Line 242, the second sentence needs to be re-written. 17) Line 304, “Then the degradation efficiency can be calculated by comparing it to the DBP standard curve” you mean it can or it was? 18) Table 3-2: the letters should be put as superscripts instead of being next to the numbers. 19) In line 308, But the table doesn't exactly show which ones were in the bacterial fermentation broth? This distinction needs to be made clear in the table itself. 20) Line 345, replace the comma with a full stop. 21) Line 446, “the” should be capitalized correctly. 22) In addition, the statistical model used for the data analysis was not mentioned nor was the software used for the analysis which should typically be in the materials and methods section. Reviewer #3: The techniques used, UV spectroscopy and HPLC and how the experiments and the results were presented is not convincing enough to agree that the Dibutyl Phthalate has been degraded by the bacteria. Also it will be interesting to know what the degraded components of Dibutyl Phthalate were using the bacteria isolated from this study. The bacteria could have degraded the Dibutyl Phthalate to other substance that can be regarded as pollutants. The author made use of unclear (ambiguous) statements such as the ''using the pure culture approach'', ''purified by the dilution coating plate method and quadrant streaking method''. The experimental design of this research make some conclusions that can not to be affirmative. For one of the bacteria strains the author suggests it to be a new species based on 16S RNA blast only. This alone can not make a bacteria to be a new species. The author thinks a particular genera is abundant but based on the isolation and characterization technique used the abundance of that genera might not be the true picture. Why did the author selected some colonies on the basal medium and not all. "Colonies with clear morphology and good growth but without transparent circle were separated and purified." I would have thought ability of the bacteria to grow on the DPB would have made them a presumptive bacteria capable of degrading DPB. Not sure the need of purification in line 135 The soil could have been used without air drying not sure the use of air drying line 140 The unit should be rpm but rmp was used in the manuscript 10-1 bacterial suspension in line 167 could have 10 fold serial dilution Not sure if a single gene can be assembled into contigs line 199 The isolated colonies in line 214 does not suggest each isolated bacteria Both rpm and g was used in line 217. I suggest that a particular unit be used either g or rpm I am confused with the word thallus in line 219 Was the UV reading at 200-350 a good wavelength for measurement of the breakdown of DPB In the results section line 264 Table 2 was cited before table 1. The description of table 2 in line 261-264 is not what we have in the exact Table 2. Table 3-1 might be moved to a supplementary file. Instead of having this table, it can be presented in a summary of presenting the gene length of the 16S RNA what range it is how many of the strains falls into what genus and a similarity range for the blast. A summary is ok and the table can then be moved into supplementary file. Reviewer #4: Dear Authors, The manuscript titled "Screening and Diversity Analysis of Dibutyl" presents an important investigation into the bioremediation potential of DBP-degrading bacteria in agricultural soil, which is a significant environmental and health concern. The research appears to be well-designed, and the findings contribute valuable insights into the microbial diversity and degradation capabilities of DBP in soil. I have the following suggestions for the manuscript improvement: 1. It would be beneficial to include a brief overview of the current state of DBP pollution in China and globally to provide a broader context. 2. It would be helpful to include more details on the soil sampling process, such as the depth of sampling and the number of replicates, to ensure that the study's robustness is clear. 3. The use of 16S rDNA sequencing for taxonomic identification is appropriate, but the manuscript could benefit from a discussion on the limitations of this method and any additional techniques that could be used to confirm the identity of the potentially new species SWDB-7. 4. The manuscript could be strengthened by discussing the implications of the findings for practical applications, such as the potential for using these bacteria in field-scale bioremediation projects. 5. It could be strengthened by discussing the implications of these findings for future research or practical applications in bioremediation. 6. The abstract mentions “vegetable plots contaminating plastic mulch” which could be rephrased for clarity to “vegetable plots contaminated with plastic mulch”. Overall, the manuscript is well-written and presents an important contribution to the field of environmental microbiology and bioremediation. With the suggested improvements, the manuscript could be further strengthened and provide even more value to the scientific community. Reviewer #5: 1. The title needs to be clarified. 2. I highly recommend reviewing the grammar of the paper. 3. Introduction section; - Line 54, change country exceeds to “countries exceed”. - Line 56, write “Based” - line 60, 77, 80, and 99, Change to agricultural soil. - Line 66, remove “And”. - Line 128, remove “so as”. 4. Results section; - Where is the figure for Uv-Vis spectroscopy before and after degradation? - Line 230, what is the meaning of 1.75? - Change the table 3-2 to figure. - The image of transparent rings on culture plates. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Screening and Diversity Analysis of Dibutyl Phthalate Degrading Bacteria in Agricultural Soil in Chengdu, China PONE-D-24-19447R1 Dear Dr. Yong Li, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #3: I Don't Know Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors did all required recommendations. I appreciate their responses. The paper could be published in the current form. Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: Dear Authors, Thank you for addressing the suggestions. The manuscript has improved significantly. However, please correct “agriculture” to “Agriculture” in Line #51. Best regards, Dr. Niaz Ali Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Mohammed Gamal Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes: Dr. Niaz Ali Reviewer #5: Yes: Shaimaa Alexeree ********** |
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