Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 4, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-13332Demographic isolation and attitudes toward group work in student-selected lab groupsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Asgari, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 01 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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In particular, the reviewers raise a number of points around possible alternative interpretations of findings (such as hidden identities, the group formation and influence, and unconscious bias). I think the deeper points involve self-reporting. While I recognize it is often necessary, I think it is important to qualify and reshapes what can be asked from data. I very much believe these concerns can be addressed, but also consider them to be consequential enough to merit a major revision. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study investigates how demographic isolation in student-selected lab groups affects students' attitudes toward group work. Using a pre-post survey design, the authors collected data from a large-enrollment biology laboratory course to examine the criteria students use to form lab groups, the prevalence of demographic isolation in student-selected versus randomly-formed groups, and the association between demographic isolation and students' group work attitudes. The study found that students primarily formed groups with peers sitting near them, resulting in less demographic isolation than randomly-formed groups. The regression analyses showed no consistent negative associations between demographic isolation and students' attitudes toward group work. This study is relevant given that group work is a commonly used student-centred pedagogical approach in college classrooms. Given concerns about the social-emotional challenges some students face when isolated by particular identities, educators can benefit from a better understanding of student behaviours and related social experiences in these group work settings. However, I have some comments and questions that could potentially improve the overall quality of the study: - Clarification on survey options: In the post-course survey, students were given six choices for criteria they considered when forming their lab groups: “friends,” “students sitting next to me in the lab,” “students’ GPA and familiarity with the biological concepts,” “students’ gender identity,” “students’ race/ethnicity,” and “students’ year in college.” Could you please clarify how you determined these specific options for the survey? Were they based on previous literature, preliminary research, or another rationale? - Potential bias in group formation criteria: Regarding the criteria provided for group formation, don't you think limiting the possible choices to a relatively small number may bias the study's results? Additionally, do you consider self-reporting problematic, given the bias that political correctness may introduce? How did you address these potential biases in your research? - Sample size clarification: When you mention, "The responses of students who selected non-binary or prefer not to say options had to be eliminated from the quantitative analysis due to their small sample size," how small was this sample size? While the answer is provided in Table 1, adding this information directly to the text would make the paragraph more straightforward. Could you include the specific numbers in the text for clarity? - Unconscious bias in seating choices: The authors state, "In this examination of student survey data, we found that the majority of students reported casually forming groups with peers who were sitting around them and that their process yielded groups with less demographic isolation than would have resulted from randomly-formed groupings." Could it be that students choose their seats based on unconscious bias towards minorities? How did your analysis account for potential unconscious biases in seating choices? Reviewer #2: Accept with minor revisions This study aimed to address the following 3 questions: Q1. What criteria do students consider when forming lab groups? Q2. How does the composition of student-selected groups differ in terms of demographic isolation when compared to randomly-formed groups? Q3. Do students’ attitudes toward group work vary between students who were demographically isolated in groups and those who were not? Questions 2 and 3 were adequately address in the data, results section, and discussion. The finding that student-selected groups decreased demographic isolation is novel and provides instructors with both important practical information information to consider when assigning group work. Especially, as the paper stated, group work is one of the most common student centered practices in the college classroom. This finding, coupled with the positive perception of group work from the students provides instructors with more information to consider when attempting to create an comfortable and inclusive classroom and researchers foundational data to build upon when looking at student centered practices that are predicated on formal group work. While question 1 was addressed by the research team, there are still unaddressed questions. The fact that students working in informal groups for 3 week prior to creating teams was not addressed as a potential impact on team selection. Figure 2 shows that most students opted to work with students near them, but the fact that those students had potentially worked together and formed trust over the course of those 3 weeks is not addressed. In a follow up study, it would be interesting to look at the group of students that did not team up with those around them, presumably those students that they’ve been working with, and collect qualitative data on their reasoning for picking a team with students they did not work with during the initial 3 weeks of the lab. This could potentially help address the claim on page 21 “students can choose groups to avoid the types of demographic isolation that they think will likely cause them harm.”. While that data does show that allowing students to choose their groups can allow them to actively avoid demographic isolation, which is interpreted as a self protective mechanism, and is important in supporting historically marginalized groups in STEM, the data does not support that there is the same impact for hidden identities (claim made on page 20). The two potentially hidden identities surveyed for are first generation status and international status. These two identities may not be immediately visible from someones physical appearance and showed no statistically significant difference in demographic isolation percentage between the classroom and simulated data. More information is needed for the authors to properly make this claim. The suggestions for instructors in the discussion section felt thorough and nuanced. They addressed the different arguments both for and against allowing students to choose their own groups. Specifically, the argument around cultural competency was salient. The following below was a great addition to the ongoing conversation on this topic and gave practical considerations for instructors when it comes to harm mitigation and the extra emotional labor that marginalized students take on in group interactions. "Other goals, such as improving students’ cultural competency skills, may require other instructional support. In practice, teaching students to work well with diverse groups of people likely requires actions beyond assigning the particular group compositions that instructors have adequate data to prescribe. While cultural competency courses can influence student attitudes in positive ways (Patterson et al., 2018), we suggest there are also simple strategies instructors can use to allow student-selected groups while also providing opportunities for students to practice cultural competency skills by creating course activities that require inter-group collaboration. 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