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| Original SubmissionOctober 4, 2024 |
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Additional Editor Comments: Please consider the reviewer's comments and revise your manuscript accordingly. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This study introduces the mobile health application LIVEBORN as an approach to inducing effective bag-masking, based on the importance of bag-mask ventilation and the decline in training skills for it, It also presents an implementation strategy for incorporating liveborn feedback into clinical practice using a participatory research methodology called Trials of Improved Practices (TIPs) to reach a target system usability scale and feasibility. Despite limitations, such as midwives sometimes not agreeing to ventilatory guidance and bag-mask ventilation case reflections not reaching feasibility figures, the study identifies feasible strategies for incorporating liveborn feedback into clinical care. Mobile health applications are an effective means of improving the quality of resuscitation procedures in areas where medical and human resources are limited. However, its implementation is not easy in areas where it is actually needed. The paper also describes a process to measure feasibility and usability as a pilot study and to improve to a target point. The target setting is also appropriate. It is an important contribution to improving the quality of neonatal resuscitation in areas with limited medical and human resources. Although the debriefing on the bag-mask ventilation cases has not reached a feasibility figure, rather, the six cases without BMV were also debriefing. As the authors discuss, the item setting may be best selected based on time to breathing. The authors' meticulous research and deep insights will greatly advance our understanding of this field. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review the manuscript titled, Mobile Health Supported Real-Time Guidance and Debriefing for Newborn Resuscitation: A Pilot Study of LIVEBORN Feedback. This paper presents new evidence for application of a real-time guidance tool for neonatal resuscitation in LMICs. The need for improving neonatal outcomes in LMICs and supporting midwives during reception of the newborn reflects the importance of LIVEBORN. There are a few suggestions for the authors to consider before publication is considered, as follows: Suggest minor editing to improve sentence structure and punctuation. Introduction p. 4. The introduction states “… HBB training are often not sustained due to a decline in knowledge and skill over time.” This sentence is not clear in relation to who HBB training is relevant to. For example, are you referring to midwives? Why is knowledge and skill related to BMV declining over time? Are T-piece devices available in these settings? p. 5. What type of mixed methods approach was used? Please define and provide a reference to enhance this section. Materials and Methods Study Design and Participants p. 5. Sampling strategy should be noted here. Was purposive sampling of participants used based on midwives who have specialised knowledge of resuscitation? p. 5. What was the target recruitment number of midwives? p. 5. A section on the study sites could have been added here. For example, how many births were recorded at each site per year? What level of capability/facilities available to support neonatal care at each site? Level of staffing at each facility. Description of LIVEBORN Feedback p. 6. More information needed on LIVEBORN usability would be beneficial. Does the observer manually type (free text) in observations during a real-time resuscitation or are there pre-populated fields and drop-down boxes to minimise data entry errors? p. 6-7. Is the ongoing practice of prolonged suctioning linked to a decline in knowledge and skills over time (from p. 4)? It is not clear why this practice remains despite simulation training. Training in Use of LIVEBORN Feedback p. 7. You emphasized the importance of creating a culture of improving care. This sentence fails to acknowledge the importance of health professionals being reflexive practitioners. Suggest some mention of reflexive practice, which in turn influences culture and the provision of care. Strategy Design and Refinement More information on the methodology, Trials of Improved Practices, would enhance this section. Currently, this methodology is not well explained or justified when using a MM approach. p. 8. “using a participatory research methodology called Trials of Improved Practices (TIPS)”. This sentence requires editing to improve readability. The first word, using, is not capitalised. If over 50% of facility births were targeted, how many births does this equate to? During the testing phase, what barriers were identified to implementation of the strategy? What changes were made in response to identified barriers? Qualitative Evaluation p. 10. Convenience sampling was used. Would purposive sampling be relevant considering midwives possess specialist knowledge on resuscitation? pp. 10-11. Were all midwives who participated in the focus groups equal in terms of position status? It is not clear here if any midwife participants had higher responsibilities than the others with the potential for power imbalances existing during the focus groups. Results Strategy Design and Refinement p. 12. Environmental health services staff have not been mentioned prior to now. Who are these staff? A description and recruitment strategy would be beneficial. p. 12. “ … the nurse assigned to acute care ensured that it was charged”. Apologies if I missed this, but aren’t the participants midwives? If so, why are nurses included in the results? Is this nurse a research study nurse? Nurses in the acute care should be included in the methods if involved in the study. Were they recruited and PICF provided? p. 12. Table 1 Who are skilled birth attendants? Are these midwives? There is some inconsistency with titles if they are the same. If not, please clarify each role. p. 12. Table 1 Who observes births and Which births are observed are questions. Insert question marks or reword, for example, Birth observer and Observed birth type. Similarly, please edit questions in Table 2. p. 12. Strategy design involving recruitment target for midwives or observed resuscitation activities should be stated in methods (recruitment). p. 13. Legend requires punctuation between numbers 1-5. p. 13. Checklist was found to be burdensome. In view of these burdensome features, what modifications have been made for the RCT? p. 18. Nurse trainees and non-clinical staff as intra-facility observers were introduced in the discussion. These staff should have been introduced in the methods section, including recruitment strategies. p. 18. Data documented shortly after the resuscitation highlights a limitation with LIVEBORN. What adaptations have been made to ensure post-resuscitation documentation is minimised or avoided for the proposed RCT? p. 19. You state, “beyond feasibility, instilling confidence in the guidance may be key to changing behavior”. Might ongoing professional education of midwives be key to improving resuscitation techniques and hence, their behaviour? p. 20. Edit out additional comma, “Given prior data in these health facilities indicating that providers fail to initiate ventilation in 80% of the cases in which it is indicated,, …” p. 20. Additional cases were added to the debrief and results: Wasn’t there an eligibility for BMV debrief to ensure additional and irrelevant cases did not conflate your results? p. 21. The use of mixed methods for analysis was not adequately linked to the theoretical approach of TIPS. At what points were the quantitative and qualitative data merged? Did the results of the quantitative data inform the topics for focus group discussion? p.21. Limitations are clearly presented and provide direction for future implementation of LIVEBORN. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Melissa Blake ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Mobile Health Supported Real-Time Guidance and Debriefing for Newborn Resuscitation: A Pilot Study of LIVEBORN Feedback PONE-D-24-35966R1 Dear Dr. Patterson, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ju Ok Park Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: Thank you for your revisions. These revisions have improved the reader's understanding of the design using MM. I am happy to endorse the publication of this research. Well done on contributing new knowledge for health professionals when conducting neonatal resuscitation. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: Yes: Melissa Blake ********** |
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