Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 19, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-24563Development of an optimized protocol for generating knockout cancer cell lines using the CRISPR/Cas9 system, with emphasis on transient transfectionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Fahimi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 24 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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When submitting your protocol to the protocol entry service please include the customer code PLOS2022 in the Note field and indicate that your protocol is associated with a PLOS ONE Lab Protocol Submission. You should also include the title and manuscript number of your PLOS ONE submission. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript report a protocol which is of utility to the research community and adds value to the published literature? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the protocol been described in sufficient detail? To answer this question, please click the link to protocols.io in the Materials and Methods section of the manuscript (if a link has been provided) or consult the step-by-step protocol in the Supporting Information files. The step-by-step protocol should contain sufficient detail for another researcher to be able to reproduce all experiments and analyses. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Does the protocol describe a validated method? The manuscript must demonstrate that the protocol achieves its intended purpose: either by containing appropriate validation data, or referencing at least one original research article in which the protocol was used to generate data. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. If the manuscript contains new data, have the authors made this data fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the article presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please highlight any specific errors that need correcting in the box below. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The overall description of the protocol is satisfactory; however, it appears to be a classical CRISPR-based transient knockout protocol without any evident novelty. There are several issues that need to be addressed: Figure Resolution: The resolution of the main figures, particularly Figures 4 to 6, is inadequate. It is difficult to discern the bases in each figure due to the poor quality. Figure Consistency: The individual photos in Figures 5 and S7, as well as Figure 7, are not in the same frame shape and lack a consistent background. This inconsistency should be corrected for a more professional presentation. Figure Legend: The legend for Figure 7 is missing and needs to be provided to ensure clarity and proper understanding of the figure. Validation of Knockout: For the validation part of the model construction, it is crucial to confirm the knockout effect of the target protein EpCAM. A Western blot is necessary to verify that EpCAM has been knocked out in the clones that are claimed to be successfully constructed. Reviewer #2: The title of the manuscript is clear and accurately reflects the content of the study. The abstract provides a concise overview, highlighting the significance, methodology, and key findings. However, it would benefit from a brief mention of the specific challenges addressed by the new protocol compared to existing methods, such as reducing off-target effects and improving transfection efficiency in various cancer cell lines. The introduction could be more concise in sections discussing the historical background of CRISPR to improve readability. For example, the discussion on the differences between CRISPR and other genome editing tools like ZFNs and TALENs could be condensed. More emphasis should be placed on the specific gaps in current methodologies that this new protocol aims to address, such as the limitations of viral delivery methods and the challenges of achieving high-efficiency transient transfection in cancer cell lines. The methods section is detailed and provides step-by-step instructions, which are crucial for reproducibility. The inclusion of troubleshooting tips and the use of robust bioinformatics tools are commendable. However, the manuscript would benefit from a more explicit comparison of the new protocol's effectiveness against existing protocols. Maybe emphasizethe key steps (the comparasions with previous steps) in the protocol in the a flowchart (fig.7) for quick reference would improve accessibility, especially for new researchers. The results section presents clear evidence of the successful creation of knockout cell lines using the new protocol, and the inclusion of sequencing data to confirm biallelic knockout is a strong point. However, the results could be strengthened by including comparative data showing the performance of the new protocol against established methods, such as viral transfection techniques or other non-viral methods. Providing additional quantitative data on transfection efficiency, cell viability, and off-target effects would enhance the robustness of the findings. For example, including data on the percentage of cells successfully transfected and the frequency of off-target mutations would provide a more comprehensive evaluation of the protocol's effectiveness. The discussion provides a good interpretation of the results and their implications for cancer research, highlighting the potential applications and benefits of the new protocol in various research contexts. However, it could benefit from a deeper analysis of the limitations of the new protocol and potential areas for further optimization. For instance, discussing the potential integration of plasmid fragments into the host genome and the associated risks in more detail would provide a more balanced view. Additionally, a more detailed comparison with other non-viral delivery methods, such as electroporation or microinjection, could provide clearer insights into the advantages and drawbacks of the lipid nanoparticle-based delivery strategy used in this study.Additionally, discussing the applicability of the protocol to other types of cancer cell lines beyond colorectal cancer, such as breast or lung cancer lines, could broaden its impact and relevance. The figures and tables included in the manuscript are well-organized and support the text effectively. However, some figures could benefit from more detailed captions explaining the experimental setup and results. For example, the figure 7 illustrating the steps of the protocol should include more descriptive captions that detail the significance of each step. Including error bars and statistical analysis in the figures would provide a better understanding of the data's reliability, enhancing the scientific rigor of the presented results. Overall, the manuscript is well-written and makes a valuable contribution to the field of genome editing. Attention to minor grammatical errors and typos will enhance the overall readability. It could be expanded to include a brief discussion on the potential impact of this protocol on clinical applications and personalized medicine. Addressing these specific areas for improvement will strengthen the manuscript and enhance its contribution to the field. Reviewer #3: In this protocol, Seyed and other authors described a detailed protocol to generate knockout cell lines using the CRISPR/Cas9 technology by transient transfection. The authors used the EpCAM gene as an example to provide a step-by-step protocol for deleting a gene in a cancer cell line. The protocol is well-written and easy to understand for persons without much experience in the field. Overall, I would like to thank the authors for their efforts in providing such a detailed protocol. Meanwhile, my general comment is that this protocol contains too many details that might be distractive. Below are my specific comments for the authors. 1. The abstract can be shorter to emphasize the contents of the current protocol since CRISPR is a well-known technology already. 2. Lines 51-60 talked about the off-target effect of CRISPR. Does off-target effect is the main focus of this protocol? Please provide rationale and references regarding to why this protocol can minimize the off-target effects. 3. Line 472-500. It seems that all the lab consumables were listed in the equipment session. My general impression is that materials like pipette tips (especially the colors) don’t have to be described. 4. Since the authors mentioned that this protocol can help researchers with limited funding opportunities. They may want to consider pointing out which reagents are critical to success and which are dispensable or interchangeable between vendors. 5. Some preparation methods for commonly used reagents may not have to be described. For example, line 504, ampicillin solution. 6. To increase the readability of the protocol: Standard experimental conditions don't have to be described, for example, 37 °C with 5% CO2 for cell culture. If the reagents and volumes have been displayed in the table, please consider to reduce the verbal description (For example in STEP 48). ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Development of an optimized protocol for generating knockout cancer cell lines using the CRISPR/Cas9 system, with emphasis on transient transfection PONE-D-24-24563R1 Dear Dr. Fahimi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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Does the manuscript report a protocol which is of utility to the research community and adds value to the published literature? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the protocol been described in sufficient detail? To answer this question, please click the link to protocols.io in the Materials and Methods section of the manuscript (if a link has been provided) or consult the step-by-step protocol in the Supporting Information files. The step-by-step protocol should contain sufficient detail for another researcher to be able to reproduce all experiments and analyses. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Does the protocol describe a validated method? The manuscript must demonstrate that the protocol achieves its intended purpose: either by containing appropriate validation data, or referencing at least one original research article in which the protocol was used to generate data. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. If the manuscript contains new data, have the authors made this data fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the article presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please highlight any specific errors that need correcting in the box below. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: There are lots of difficulties for the authors to do research in Iran.But personally speaking, it shouldn't be the acceptable reason. Reviewer #2: I have reviewed the revised manuscript. The revisions effectively addressed all the concerns raised in the initial review. Reviewer #3: I have no further questions. My previous questions have been sufficiently addressed in the revised manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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