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PONE-D-23-40401Subjective Affective Experience under threat is shaped by environmental affordancesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Qi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Three Reviewers have evaluated the manuscript, providing mixed revisions. I think that the manuscript is well written and the experimental procedure is inventive and has merits, but I agree that some shortcomings are present that prevent the reader to understand what exactly has been demonstrated by the study. I add two concerns of mine to Reviewers' comments: - how affordances have been operationalized. As far as I understood, "affordances" were written words or maybe icons (judging by figure 1..? this should be clarified) - justification and possibly references should be provided to sustain that those can be properly considered affordances; according to Gibson, affordances are a matter of perception more than cognition; is a written word or a symbolic icon an affordance? To what extent? - by using horror movies, this is basically a media psychology research, yet media psychology literature is absent. Immersion and understanding of narrative contents should be taken into consideration - personally I would make different choices if I had to face the mutant monster from "The Thing" or a person possessed by a demon... is a gun effective against both...? Are all weapons the same (e.g., close contact vs. distance)? Research on video games and interactive narrative may be useful to respond I suggest Authors to respond to Reviewers' comments taking into account that not all the revisions were supportive of the manuscript. I would also suggest to tone down interpretation of the results and improve limitations section of the discussion. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 12 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The present work aims to investigate attack or escape behaviors in environmental situations that produce emotions of anger or fear in the protagonist. The central role of the study turns out to be to investigate not so much the hedonistic motivations (Hirschman and Holbrook (1982) state that hedonistic motivations are characterized by the presence of a strong emotional component, concerning such aspects as fun and pleasure, rather than the mere achievement of functional goals), but rather, the authors want to focus on the instrumental factors that may influence/modulate anger or fear and attack/escape behaviors. Specifically, the authors consider the construct of affordances that underlies James J. Gibson's "ecological theory of perception," with the intent of demonstrating its causal relationships between environmental affordances and the expression of anger and fear, whereby more anger is expressed when affordances are available that favor approach and participants choose to fight. In addition, it is intended to show how instrumental motivations influence emotional and behavioral regulation when the environment presents different affordances. In the study, threats are represented by the presentation of short video clips from horror movies, selected in a previous pilot study, and affordances are presented to study participants in the form of pictograms. The abstract should be more structured to include: background, objectives, participants, proposed intervention, results, limitations and conclusions. In the introduction, the authors summarize the main research questions and key findings. The authors very reductively identify the current literature on the topic and explain how the study relates to this previously published research, but it would be appropriate to expand the review of current scientific literature in the field of studying emotions, affordances, and action motivation. Also, it would be interesting to include some scientific literature regarding the psychology of media? The introduction section should include citations of the theories and empirical cases cited (lines 12, 23-24 and 38 of the introduction). In the "experimental procedures" section, it is specified that: "each participant will be made to watch a total number of 40 video clips" (are there any other data that were not reported among the figures in the article? If so, why were they not included?). The materials and methods section of this study describes the techniques and materials used in the experiments. The explanation of the structure of the scientific study (experimental design used) is missing. This description should be such that another group of researchers can reproduce the experiments in the scientific publication. Consequently, without this section, the reproducibility of the results obtained during the experiment is slightly compromised. The experiments or interventions are appropriate to address the research question. The conditions are appropriate and the controls right. The data are sufficient to draw a conclusion. The authors do not critically and fully address the limitations of the research. The data were collected and interpreted accurately. The study complies with ethical guidelines. Writing quality and clarity: writing quality needs to be slightly improved for minor typos. Bibliographic list: the references in the manuscript appear to be correct. Conclusions: the article lacks an adequate amount of references to the existing scientific literature on the topic discussed (especially regarding the construct of affordances). The results are extensively argued and discussed. Weaknesses include the failure to include data from pilot studies, due to technical problems that prevented the article's authors from including them. As pointed out in the "method" section, "participants" paragraph. Can't something be done to solve this problem? (Example: inclusion of a partial report supporting the cited hypothesis). Also missing is reference to the experimental design used in the present empirical study. References to media psychology are missing. The introduction should include a review of broader scientific literature on the constructs investigated (emotions, affordances, motivation) No major changes to the manuscript are highlighted. Review minor details. Reviewer #2: "The introduction is generally well-written, but the final paragraph seems to belong in the methods section. Additionally, stating the hypothesis explicitly in the last paragraph would be helpful. The relationship between the sentence "There is indeed evidence that prior to engaging in conflict, people are more likely to choose situations that are likely to elicit anger rather than neutral emotions (Tamir, 2009)" and the preceding text is not clear. It would be helpful to explain what HIT is and why this selection criterion was used. The sentence "Confirming our initial hypothesis, we used design from the pilot study to conduct a power analysis" appears to be worded incorrectly. It would be beneficial to provide more details on how the power analysis was conducted and why a minimum of 250 participants was necessary. Could you provide some examples of the plots of the video in the methods section and include them in the appendix? Has there been research on whether the results may differ if participants report their emotions before reporting behavioral options? In this sequence, emotions may affect behavioral choices, rather than the participants' behavioral choices affecting their reports of emotion. The current results indicate that if participants see a weapon before choosing to fight, they will report feeling more anger compared with if they did not see the weapon before their decision to fight. The awareness of the affordance to fight increases anger. In contrast, if participants see an escape route before choosing to flee, they will report feeling less fear compared with if the escape route is blocked. The awareness of the opportunity to escape decreases fear. It would be helpful to discuss why this difference in anger and fear exists. One limitation of the method is that participants were only observing movie clips rather than reporting their own personal emotional experiences - imagining oneself as the movie protagonist and experiencing the events in real life can be very different, especially as horror movie scenes rarely occur in real life. These factors may affect the ecological validity of the study. The study did not reference recent literature such as Suri, G., Sheppes, G., Young, G., Abraham, D., McRae, K., & Gross, J. J. (2018). Emotion regulation choice: The role of environmental affordances. Cognition and Emotion, 32(5), 963-971. The discussion should place the study within a larger theoretical framework of "emotion-cognition-behavior-environment" rather than being limited to environmental affordances. In this study, is emotion a kind of cognition, feeling, or motivation? You could refer to “Andrea Scarantino, The Philosophy of Emotions and Its Impact on Affective Science, in Barrett, L. F., Lewis, M., & Haviland-Jones, J. M. (2016). Handbook of emotions, fourth edition. Guilford Publications." Reviewer #3: In this paper, the Authors try to show a relationship between environmental affordances, decision-making, and emotions in contexts of threat. To this end they adopt an experimental paradigm in which subjects are shown a short horror movie clip after being instructed about the availability of different affordances (either fight or escape) that could help the subject to make a choice between approach behavior (fight through the situation) and avoidance behavior (escape from the situation). The authors conclude by stating that their findings reveal features that items available in the environment (environmental affordances) influence both behaviors (approach or avoidance) as well as levels of experienced anger and fear. The work proposed by the authors, although interesting, in my opinion presents methodological problems that unfortunately severely hampers the accuracy of the conclusions. Major points: My fundamental problem with this study is the experimental approach used; in fact, the study is entirely built using an online approach and thus, the accuracy could only be poorly controlled. Everything is based on a good understanding by the subjects enrolled in the study, of the structure and purposes of the experiment, but a real control of the accuracy of the answers is completely neglected. Furthermore, despite the large number of subjects enrolled, an accurate selection of subjects is also lacking. In fact, given the subjects of the study, a better characterization of the personality or presence/absence of neuropsychiatric disorders would have guaranteed better control of the experimental conditions and stronger support to the conclusions. Further, since this is a study that calls into question emotions such as fear and anger, I wonder why the authors decided to use an online approach that necessarily prevent any physiological measurement. I think that even the simplest evaluation of a few key autonomic parameter (such as GSR, heart rate, etc.) could have made a great contribution to evaluate the differences in the various experimental situations. In summary, in my opinion the both the recruitment procedures and the lack of control of the experimental procedure, severely hamper the reproducibility of the experiment. Minor points: Can the Authors please provide greater justification for this study in the introduction? In the Discussion the results should be interpreted and discussed in more detail considering the existing literature. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-23-40401R1Subjective Affective Experience under threat is shaped by environmental affordancesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Qi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Authors have provided only partial revisions considering my and Reviewers' comments. - it was asked to include references and justification about written descriptions considered as affordances; for now Authors added speculation and a reference on dangerous affordances, but they did not provide references to previous research on affordances that could justify their rendition as written descriptions. There is no debate on the fact that affordances could be complex and "mediated" by culture and knowledge (e.g., a mailbox is a physical affordance to put something in, and a mediated affordance to send a message to someone if one is aware that something like a postal system exists), but the problem is whether we can consider descriptions as affordances while they are commonly operationalized as objects one can perceive and act upon - it was asked to include media psychology research by me and one Reviewer; this was not done. Authors added some justification about movies as experimental tools that could generate emotions, which again is well known, but not on narrative media to study action and agency Further revision is necessary that fully responds to Editor and Reviewers' concerns ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 16 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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