Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 19, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-10631The effect of gravity on hand spatio-temporal kinematic features during functional movementsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bucchieri, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 24 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: he manuscript submitted for consideration seeks to assess the the effect of gravity on hand spatio-temporal kinematic features during functional movements. It is evident that the manuscript has been meticulously crafted and organized. The study exhibits a sound methodology and effectively addresses the research questions it posits. In my opinion, this article displays strong potential for publication in a reputable journal. Reviewer #2: The paper is well written and sound, I'm favourable to its publication after addressing a few comments: • Line 276. Here, the following papers in which the authors analysed upper limb movement in Parkinson’s disease may be useful for you: o Cesarelli, G., Donisi, L., Amato, F., Romano, M., Cesarelli, M., D’Addio, G., ... & Ricciardi, C. (2023). Using features extracted from upper limb reaching tasks to detect Parkinson’s disease by means of machine learning models. IEEE Transactions on Neural Systems and Rehabilitation Engineering, 31, 1056-1063. o Ponsiglione, A. M., Ricciardi, C., Amato, F., Cesarelli, M., Cesarelli, G., & D’Addio, G. (2022). Statistical analysis and kinematic assessment of upper limb reaching task in Parkinson’s disease. Sensors, 22(5), 1708. •Line 498. It would be of interest having some information regarding the MoCap protocol proposed by Vicon and employed for acquiring the subjects. • Line 567. “…this metrics was…” should be “this metrics was”. • Line 629. “Statistical analysis were performed…” would better be “Statistical analysis was performed”. • In the "Statistical Analysis" section, the authors explain they use different test according to the normality of the data. How did they check the normality distribution of the data? Reviewer #3: The article investigates variations in upper limb movements in relation to their direction with respect to gravity. Experiments with 24 healthy subjects were conducted. In these, the participants performed object movement tasks between different heights on a shelf. Traditional metrics were used in the analyses, and two new metrics were proposed. The extent and quality of the analysis of the results and discussions, with comparisons to related works, are highlighted, indicating new findings, and results consistent with those reported in correlated works, and pointing out hypotheses for those that are discordant. Discussions and conclusions about the new metrics are also presented (more comments concerning the conclusions are further provided). Thus, the article presents a significant scientific contribution to the field of upper limb biomechanics and its related areas. The text has both major and minor deficiencies. Overall, it is well written; however, a revision of the English, and improvements in the writing and organization of the text, are necessary. The following major improvements are suggested: - Reorganization of the text. Normally, articles involving experiments of this nature follow the order: Introduction, Materials and Methods, Results and Analyses, Discussions, and Conclusion. The current text presents a different order, which is considered unusual by this reviewer; - Inclusion of a conclusions section. It is considered that the text from line 437 to 484 constitutes a good text for the conclusions; - References have to be numbered according to the order in which they appear in the text; - Why is the only cited robotic rehabilitation system the MIT-Manus? Is there any reason for this preference? There are many other robotic rehabilitation systems. There are excellent review articles on robotic systems for rehabilitation that could be cited instead; - The content of the abstract is faithful to the text; however, important information can be added, such as more details about the experiments and the main results and conclusions of the study; - Paragraph from line 137 up to 143. Axis of a reference system is mentioned. How is the reference system oriented in the experimental environment? Minor corrections: - Is the "Author Summary" section necessary? In this reviewer's opinion, this writing style is unusual for papers; - The text uses an excess of abbreviations and acronyms. Remove those that appear infrequently, such as ARAT, FMA, RMSE, etc. Keep only those that appear frequently and throughout the text; - The repetition of acronyms and abbreviations very close to each other in a text should be avoided, just as the repetition of words is. Reducing acronyms and abbreviations improves the fluency of reading. Review the text, especially the results section - In Figure 1, markers are named with the same format as the references citation, which may lead to misunderstanding; - Some paragraphs are too long, such as those from line 2 to 61 and from line 386 to 429. These paragraphs contain more than one subject. Splitting them according to more correlated and few subjects may improve writing quality. Considering the scientific contribution of the results, novel metrics, and discussion, it is recommended the paper be accepted after the suggested improvements. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Leonardo Marquez Pedro ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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The effect of gravity on hand spatio-temporal kinematic features during functional movements PONE-D-24-10631R1 Dear Dr. Bucchieri, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Monika Błaszczyszyn Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: All the suggestions to clarify research details and to improve the text were satisfactorily implemented, or proper justifications were given by the authors. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: Yes: Leonardo Marquez Pedro ********** |
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