Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 24, 2024 |
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Dear Dr. Valladares-Garrido, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 28 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Barr, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Prevalence of dengue in Peruvian patients with febrile illness according to RT-PCR and ELISA NS1, IgM, and IgG diagnostic tools: systematic review and meta-analysis. In my opinion, the manuscript can be published if the following observations are clarified or raised: Summary section: 1. In the methodology section, indicate only the databases used: Google Scholar is not a database, for example. 2. Indicate that observational studies with a control group were considered. 3. The keywords must be Mesh terms. Introduction section: 4. This section should refer to other systematic reviews with or without meta-analysis on the research question carried out in Peru or Latin America. Methodology section: 5. Indicate whether there were deviations from the original protocol registered in PROSPERO. 6. It is necessary to indicate that observational studies without a control group were considered and for what reason? 7. Again, Google Scholar is not a database; these sources or information must be changed. 8. State the limitations of the bias risk assessment tool for the studies considered. Considering the following points: Is this tool relevant? Does it assess the ability to develop a meta-analysis from the studies? Does it assess heterogeneity? Limitations section 9. Add the limitations of the work. Mainly the risk of bias after analysing the studies. Reviewer #2: The Authors present a meta-analysis on the prevalence of dengue among febrile patients in Peru. It is a well-structured and well carried out study. They address the importance of Dengue as a reemerging infection worldwide with a heavy burden in Peru and the Americas. The methodology and results are clearly presented, and support the authors conclusions. The authors mention limitations for the diagnosis of dengue given the technological and infrastructural requirements for dengue diagnosis in poor communities but decided not to include lateral flow test/Rapid test in their study. The authors fail to address the limitation of determining prevalence of an acute infection in a febrile patient through a serological test, were due to exposures to many pathogens’ antibodies might be secondary to previous infections and the necessarily the current cause of fever. Overall I believe this is a good and valuable manuscript and should be consider for publication following minor changes. Specific areas for improvement In the methods section of the abstract the authors state that “Study selection, quality assessment, and data extraction were performed independently by more than two authors” however in the study protocol it says this was done by two others with a third author only coming in to solve disagreements. In the Results section of the Abstract why are there to different results for IgG Elisa the authors might want to clarify the difference between one and the other. In the introduction line 4, page 3, the authors might consider rephrasing “a rise in body temperature of at least 38.0°C”, as it could imply an increment of 38 on top of the persons normal temperature. In the introduction, line 1 of paragraph 2, the authors might consider rephasing the sentence as “…dengue virus, a positive-stranded RNA…”, it might be better to have the word virus after RNA instead of after dengue or use virus after both dengue and RNA. It also seems a little redundant to say a virus causes an infectious disease. In the first sentace of paragraph 3 of the introduction the authors might consider rephrasing and “asymptomatic symptoms” is not the best wording. In the first sentence of paragraph 3 of the introduction the authors might consider rephrasing as malaria is not a viral disease and leptospirosis is a zoonosis not a vector borne disease The authors might want to reconsider their wording in the third sentence of paragraph four of the introduction as IgM and IgG antibodies can help differentiate between recent and past exposure not primary or secondary infection. In the last part of paragraph 4 the authors might want to develop that idea, instead of talking about secondary infection, focus on how disease severity might increase when infection from some serovars occur in patients with previous infections by other serovars. In the last part of paragraph 5 the authors might consider their wording as them seem to want to address cross reactivity with other flavivirus but the instead mention “secondary flavivirus infections”, this seems to insinuate coinfection. The study selection process included in the methods differs from the one in the study protocol, the protocol states two researchers reviewed titles and abstracts with a third one coming in to help solve disagreements, while the methods state that 3 researchers reviewed titles and abstracts with a fourth one coming in to resolve disagreements. The authors should review their explanation on how they assessed heterogeneity between studies, as the current explanation does not account for how a study between 50 and 75% would be categorized. The authors need to address the limitation of determining prevalence of dengue in a febrile patient from an endemic community using IgG and to a lesser extent IgM. Talking about the implication of their findings, the authors mention a greater need for diagnostic tools, but fail to connect this to their findings or to suggest what test they recommend being used based on their results. ********** what does this mean? ). 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| Revision 1 |
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Dear Dr. Valladares-Garrido, The reviewers consider that your writing needs major modifications; it is very important that you clarify the biases that the study design may have when discussing dengue prevalence in Peru. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 15 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Kind regards, Victoria Pando-Robles, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** Reviewer #2: The authors refer both to the incidence of dengue and the prevalence of dengue within the text. As an acute infection when speaking of the disease itself it is correct to use incidence. I understand that due to the information the authors were reviewing positivity within a community (including positivity of serological test). I suggest talking of prevalence of positive dengue results instead of the prevalence of dengue or always clarify that you are talking of febrile patients, or prevalence of dengue antibodies if talking only of serological results. If the authors agree with this suggestion it would apply to: • conclusion section of the abstract • the outcomes section in material and methods • the last paragraph of data analysis section in material and methods • characteristics of the included studies section in results • the Prevalence of dengue in Peruvian patients with febrile illness according to NS1, IgM, IgG ELISA, and RT-PCR section in results • In discussion • In Conclusions The authors might also want to mention that dengue has an endemic and epidemic behavior, so it is normal to see spikes in cases, and the number of cases fluctuates during the year making it hard to compare and contrast “prevalence”. Reviewer #3: The goal of the study is to provide an overall estimate for dengue among those presenting with febrile illness (i.e., the meta-analysis should be relying on descriptive studies to produce results). LILLACS would represent a primary source of information for this and should have been a primary source when searching for manuscripts for this meta-analysis. Instead, the analysis has selectively relied on 15 studies, including those describing outbreak investigations (ref: 34, 37), observational studies (ref: 35), and technology assessments of diagnostic tests (ref: 18, 30). None of these studies are designed to provide valid disease prevalence assessments, and, if used for that purpose could provide incorrect estimates. At the same time, previously published descriptive studies specifically designed to answer the research question of this meta-analysis (i.e., prevalence of dengue among those reporting febrile illness), using the same dengue diagnostic tests as those included in this meta-analysis, appear to have been excluded with the reason “No diagnostic test for dengue” (e.g., Forshey BM et al. PLOS Negl Trop Dis. 4(8): e787). It is also unclear why the LILLACS database was not included in the search for manuscripts. There is also no discussion on issues of geographic and seasonal differences in dengue or recent outbreaks of the disease and government responses to control it. (e.g., Puno is not considered a high-risk area for dengue and the disease appears more often during the rainy season.) The manuscript does not discuss government surveillance estimates for the disease (i.e., CDC MINSA) or public health efforts to control the disease in the midst of recent outbreaks. The manuscript also covers the time-period of COVID-19. How could this have impacted results? Editor’s & Reviewer Comments not addressed - Data Availability Statement (Editor comment): Data on the evaluation of manuscripts for bias. The manuscript provides boilerplate language to the field of epidemiology, but no specifics are given as to what is specifically being evaluated (e.g., why is confounding important to evaluate if this is a descriptive study?). - Search of LILLACS for manuscripts (Editor & Reviewer #1 comment): It is still unclear why it was excluded from the analysis. - Need to include the statement on observational studies (Reviewer #1): There continues to be a confusion regarding what a descriptive study and observational design are investigating. - Limitations of the work (Reviewer #1): The manuscript does not address key issues related to geographic and spatial heterogeneity of dengue estimates as well as changes in prevalence estimates during COVID-19. - Implication of study findings (Reviewer #2): There is no discussion of these results in relation to government public health efforts to control dengue or even current government surveillance efforts to track the disease. Reviewer #4: This study aims to assess the prevalence of dengue virus in febrile patients in Peru. Notable strengths of the study include a well-designed methodology and a robust study population. However, certain minor aspects could be refined to further enhance the quality of the presentation. It is recommended that the authors take these into consideration. It is recommended that the text be edited for better readability. 1- Suggested shorter title: "Dengue Prevalence in Febrile Patients from Peru: A Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis" 2- Mentioning diagnostic methods in the study background is unnecessary and should be removed. In the abstract avoid including unnecessary details such as: "Study selection, quality assessment, and data extraction were performed independently by more than two authors." and "The study protocol was registered in PROSPERO (CRD4202424558891)." Simply mentioning the methods is sufficient and enhances the readability of the abstract. 3- The introduction is well-written and provides valuable insights into the significance and characteristics of the disease, as well as its regional status in Peru. However, some sections could be more concise to enhance the flow and improve transitions between topics. It is recommended to shorten the introduction for better readability. 4- "The original protocol registered in PROSPERO was modified with minor adjustments." Clearly define what these "minor adjustments" entailed and provide a rationale for each change. 5- "During a meeting, the three independent authors compared their data extractions and reached a consensus to resolve any discrepancies." Clarify how consensus was achieved—whether through discussion, statistical methods, or another approach. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: Yes: Pablo Uribe-Restrepo Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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Dear Dr. Valladares-Garrido, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript improved in comparison with previous version. However, we still believe two minor issues should be addressed. First, the use of IgG to assess the prevalence of an acute disease in febrile patients may be problematic, as IgG can persist for months or even years after infection. This concern has been better addressed compared to earlier versions of the manuscript, and it is now acknowledged in the limitations section. Second, the authors should clarify what they mean by including studies with controls in their search strategy." Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 11 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: The paper has improved greatly, I believe it holds interesting findings on an important topic. I still feel that two minor things should be addressed, one regarding the prevalence of an acute disease in febrile patients through IgG that can persist for months or years after the infection. This was improved from previous iterations of the manuscript, and with a mention of this in the limitations section. Second, I think the authors should clarify the concept of studies having controls within their search strategy. I still believe the authors should be more guarded when they talk about the prevalence of dengue through IgG ELISA, even in a febrile patient; unless those patients had an associated positive PCR result, or at least a positive NS1 result, IgG is not a diagnostic test, and thus the authors should talk about the prevalence of dengue antibodies when reference those results. For example, in the 3rd line of the results section of the abstract, the authors could talk about the “…prevalence of dengue or dengue antibodies…”. This is seen again throughout the results, like in section 3.3 and parts of the discussion. This issue has been addressed and corrected in other sections, like the first two sentences of the discussion section. In the second sentence of the 5th and last paragraph of the introduction, I would review redaction, avoiding the repetition of the word rapid. In the materials and methods section in the Protocol Registration section, the authors mention that “inclusion criteria were expanded to allow studies both with and without a control group”. However, in the Eligibility Criteria section, they still include that “investigation included a control group”, followed by “Studies without a control group were included” in the very next sentence, making this a contradiction within the eligibility criteria. I suggest framing this in a similar way to the one used in the Protocol Registration section. Moreover, I would clarify this because febrile patients with negative results for dengue are not a control group, as this is a result of a test outcome and not a predetermined group in the study design. Unless you are talking of patients with confirmatory laboratory criteria (PCR or NS1) as control and disease groups to evaluate the performance of non-confirmatory laboratory tests (single sample IgM). Looking at table 1, under Study type, non of the studies were case control studies. In the methods, in the Data collection process and data items section, I suggest changing the wording for “the region of development”, maybe something as simple as study site, or geographical region, might work better. Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: Yes: Pablo Uribe-Restrepo Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Prevalence of dengue in febrile patients in Peru: a systematic review and meta-analysis. PONE-D-24-36774R3 Dear Dr. Valladares-Garrido, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Victoria Pando-Robles, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed my comments, and despite minor differences in opinion, they have clearly justified their decision-making in presenting information (like the concept of "control groups" within the studies selected). I believe this to be a well-written manuscript based on rigorous research and is ready to be published. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: Yes: Pablo Uribe-Restrepo ********** |
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