Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 29, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-21569Enhancing Multiclass COVID-19 Prediction with ESN-MDFS: Extreme Smart Network using Mean Dropout Feature Selection TechniquePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hussain, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 05 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please provide a complete Data Availability Statement in the submission form, ensuring you include all necessary access information or a reason for why you are unable to make your data freely accessible. If your research concerns only data provided within your submission, please write "All data are in the manuscript and/or supporting information files" as your Data Availability Statement. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Authors should address the following major revisions: 1) These research, by virtue of the fact, stress the existence and severity of dire results associated with delayed and improper diagnosis which can be a real threat to the survival of humankind. The latest studies have revealed that deep learning models can be used for coronavirus image classification.- add the following work for this statement such as: A Deep learning-based X-Ray Imaging Diagnosis System for Classification of Tuberculosis, COVID19, and Pneumonia Traits using Evolutionary Algorithm 2) While deep learning models have shown promise in classifying COVID-19 images, there are still limitations that need to be addressed. One such limitation is the lack of research on applying domain adaptation techniques to overcome the challenge of the cross-dataset problem.- add the following work for this statement such as: Deep learning network selection and optimized information fusion for enhanced COVID-19 detection 3) Related work of this manuscript can be further enhanced by adding few recent works. Also, discuss the cutting edges and gaps that should be linked with the proposed work. 4) How many features are extracted from the VGG model? How many layers used for the re-training on the selected datasets? 5) how many parameters are trained for the VGG model and how the hyperparameters are selected? add in the manuscript. 6) What is the purpose of GLCM features and how many features are extracted? 7) What is the loss function of the XGBosst classifier and what is the purpose of this classifier? Reviewer #2: The paper proposes a novel approach called “Enhancing COVID Prediction with ESN-MDFS”, which combines an Extreme Smart Network (ESN) and a Mean Dropout Feature Selection Technique (MDFS) to improve the multi-class detection of COVID-19 and three other lung conditions (normal, viral, and bacterial) using portable chest x-rays (CXRs). This method extracts both static features using Grey-level Co-occurrence Matrix (GLCM) texture analysis and dynamic features through a VGG-16 pre-trained deep learning model. The authors highlight the limitations of traditional diagnostic methods, such as RT-PCR and biomarkers. Their study seeks to overcome challenges like data variability and the need for large labeled datasets by developing a robust, lightweight deep learning model for COVID-19 detection. The authors present the key steps of the proposed method, namely: 1. Preprocessing: Images are resized, denoised using median blur, and normalized for intensity. 2. Data Augmentation: Techniques like rotation, flipping, shearing, contrast adjustments, and various transforms are applied to balance the dataset and prevent overfitting. 3. Feature Selection: Static Features are extracted using Grey Level Co-occurrence Matrix (GLCM) analysis, while Dynamic Features are extracted using a pre-trained VGG-16 model. The Hybrid Feature Space combines static and dynamic features, optimized using the Mean Dropout Feature Selection Technique (MDFS). 4. Model Training: The hybrid feature space is used to train an XGBoost model, evaluated using precision, recall, and F1-score metrics. The proposed model demonstrated high performance in multi-class classification of lung conditions, achieving an accuracy of 95.54% without mean dropout and 96.18% with mean dropout. High scores were achieved for precision, recall, and F1-score across all four classes (bacterial pneumonia, COVID-19, normal lungs, and viral pneumonia). The reported Area Under the Curve (AUC) values were 0.99 for bacterial and viral pneumonia, 0.96 for normal, and 0.95 for COVID-19. The ESN-MDFS model surpassed existing lightweight models in both accuracy (achieving 96.18% compared to the next best at 95.54%) and compactness (889 KB compared to the next best at 12 MB). The authors demonstrated that the proposed model is ideal for deployment on resource-constrained edge devices, facilitating immediate diagnostic insights and more rapid treatment decisions. Suggestions: 1. Review the paper for grammatical errors and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage throughout the manuscript. 2. Ensure that all terms and concepts are clearly defined and consistently used throughout the paper. Consider adding a table of abbreviations to improve comprehensibility and avoid ambiguity. 3. Be consistent when reporting results. Use the same format for all metrics and comparisons. For example, in Table 5, ensure that the number of samples in each category is presented consistently across all discussed models. 4. Outline potential future work, including improvements to the model and adaptation to other imaging modalities. Reviewer #3: 1. The paper's formatting needs improvement for consistency. Please ensure that the table formatting is uniform throughout the document. Additionally, standardize the captions for figures and tables to maintain a cohesive style. Lastly, align the equations consistently, either centering them or left-aligning them. 2. The comparasion experiments should be run multiple times to show the mean and std of the results. 3. Considering that VGG16 is a well-known model, it may not be necessary to include the entire model architecture as a figure or provide extensive introductions to it. Consider simplifying this section to focus on the more novel aspects of your work. 4. While using a fixed model for feature extraction is a common technique, the concepts of "Dynamic Features" and "Static Features" in this context are unclear. Please provide a clear definition of what you consider dynamic and static features and how they relate to your proposed method. 5. The baseline methods compared in this paper appear to be outdated, with references [61]-[63] being papers published in 2020. Given the rapid advancements in this field, it would be beneficial to compare your work with more recent publications. For example, consider including a comparison with the work by Pratiwi et al. (2021), "Effect of CT-scan image resizing, enhancement and normalization on accuracy of covid-19 detection," which also utilizes VGG16. Providing a justification for not comparing with more recent works would strengthen your paper. 6. Lack of ablation studies. The paper would benefit from the inclusion of ablation studies to demonstrate the impact of each module in the proposed framework. 7. The novelty of the proposed method is not clearly evident. The combination of data augmentation, using a fixed CNN model for feature extraction, and training an SVM or XGBoost classifier is a well-established and widely used technique across various fields. To enhance the contribution of this paper, consider highlighting the specific innovations or improvements your method offers compared to existing approaches. Clearly articulate how your proposed framework advances the state-of-the-art or addresses limitations of previous methods in the context of your specific application. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-24-21569R1Enhancing Multiclass COVID-19 Prediction with ESN-MDFS: Extreme Smart Network using Mean Dropout Feature Selection TechniquePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hussain, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. You did not respond to comment no. 5 from Reviewer 1. Please address it, but in a separate paragraph. Your previous responses were appended to the original comment, making them difficult to follow. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 21 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PONE-D-24-21569R2Enhancing Multiclass COVID-19 Prediction with ESN-MDFS: Extreme Smart Network using Mean Dropout Feature Selection TechniquePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hussain, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 28 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Catalin Buiu Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: You did not respond to the first reviewer's fifth comment: 5) how many parameters are trained for the VGG model and how the hyperparameters are selected? add in the manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Enhancing Multiclass COVID-19 Prediction with ESN-MDFS: Extreme Smart Network using Mean Dropout Feature Selection Technique PONE-D-24-21569R3 Dear Dr. Hussain, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Catalin Buiu Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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