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PONE-D-23-20912TIME TO MAJOR ADVERSE DRUG REACTIONS AND ITS PREDICTORS AMONG CHILDREN ON ANTIRETROVIRAL TREATMENT AT NORTHWEST AMHARA SELECTED PUBLIC HOSPITALS NORTHWEST; ETHIOPIA, 2023.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bishaw, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 31 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. 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This study is quite interesting because adverse drug reactions (ADRs) are common in HIV treatment and as the authors rightly put it, determining the incidence rate and predictors of ADRs among children on ART may be useful in improving treatment outcomes and minimizing harm. The authors indicated limited evidence regarding the time to ADRs and its predictors among children on ART in Ethiopia, and this further justified the study. The researchers employed a structured data extraction checklist to collect data for the study. They further indicated how data was analyzed and how parameters of interest were determined. The authors determined the incident rate of major ADRs per person/month, while they used the Cox proportional hazards regression model to identify predictors of major adverse drug responses. They declare statistical significance when p-values of less than 0.05 at 95% CI were attained. The researchers followed the participants up for between 6 and 59 months for a total of 9916 person-months and observed an incidence rate of major ADRs of 3.5 / 1000 person-months. From the results of the study, the researchers reported congruence of their observed incidence rate of major ADRs among children on ART with previous studies in Ethiopia. They further reported advanced clinical stages of HIV / AIDS, poor treatment adherence, taking ART medications twice or more, and not taking opportunistic infection prophylaxis as predictors of major ADRs. Introduction The introduction was quite well-written. The authors gave some statistics on the global and Sub-Saharan Africa prevalence of HIV/AIDS with some useful information on ensuing ADRs during treatment of affected patients. The authors then narrowed down on similar studies carried out in Namibia, Nigeria, and in Ethiopia. Method The study area, setting, and population were well defined, as well as the duration of the recruitment of study participants retrospectively. The data extraction period was also specified to be from February 15 to March 30/2023. The researchers stated how the sample test for the study was determined. The authors also explained the sampling technique and sampling procedure used to enroll the study participants and this was quite appropriate. Variables and operational definitions were provided by the authors. The authors stated a data collection checklist and procedure that is quite sound. They also included how data quality control was achieved. The researchers gave details on how data was analyzed. The authors secured ethical clearance for the study and included the approval number. They also secured permissions from the study sites. Results A table and description of social demographic characteristics were provided. Under baseline clinical, immunological, ART drug and prophylaxis related characteristics, the researchers stated that more than half of the study participants (60.16%) used DTG-based ART regimens but failed to show what ART drug regimen the remaining 39.84% of the study participants used. Minor Revision Abstract 1. Authors should write ART, and AHR in full at first use. Introduction 2. Paragraph 3 line 5: Authors should write AVR in full at first use. 3. Paragraph 5 line 4: Authors should write AZT in full at first use. 4. Paragraph 6 line 4: Authors should write BMI, and TDF-3TC-EFV in full at first use. 5. Paragraph 7 line 3: Authors should write TDF-NVP in full at first use. 6. Paragraph 8 line 2: Authors should write MADRs, and DTG in full at first use. Methods 7. Authors should write all abbreviations in full at first use in all sections of the manuscript. Results 8. Under baseline clinical, immunological, ART drug and prophylaxis related characteristics, the researchers stated that "more than half of the study participants (60.16%) used DTG-based ART regimens" but failed to show what ART drug regimen the remaining 39.84% of the study participants used. The authors should include this data and discuss any observed effect the different ART regimen may have on time to major ADRs in study participants. Discussion The discussion was well written. 9. However, the authors compared their findings with previous findings but gave no brief description of such findings. The authors should include very brief description of the previous findings to make their comparison more meaningful. Reviewer #2: Opening Comments: This is an important by Bantegizie Senay and colleagues. It sought to retrospectively examine adherence of children infected with HIV to ARTs’ in Amhara in Ethiopia. The manuscript is well written... Title: Time to Major Adverse Drug Reactions and Its Predictors Among Children on Antiretroviral Treatment at Northwest Amhara Selected Public Hospitals Northwest; Ethiopia, 2023. Abstract - The abstract is ok, and well structured. Introduction - Paragraph 5, line 5: Revise ‘4.18–2.3 gm/dl’ to read 4.2 -2.3 g/dl - Paragraph 6, line 2: Revise ….’majority of (90.74%)’….to read ….’majority (90.7%) of’ …., and delete the last 2 words (i.e. of ART ) at the end of that sentence. - Last Paragraph, second line: Write the acronym ‘MADRs’ in full, and put the MADRs in parentheses or bracket here Methods Study area, setting, and population - Revise the first sentence into 2 sentences - Line 6 and 7, add the respective hospitals to complete that sentence Data Quality Control - Last sentence, from Line 4: Should read 5% with the number obtained in parentheses - Write DMCSH and FHCSH in full Data Analysis - Line 2: Correct the error in the acronym MADR’s from MDAR’s Results Incidence of major adverse drug reaction - Line 1, Paragraph 2: Kindly take a second look at the sentence ‘The incidence rate of MADR among females and males was 4.2/4278 and 3/5638 person months’ in comparison with the female: male population in Table 1, Review and confirm that its collaborative and correct Discussion - Line 5: Should read…. The study reports that …. - Second Paragraph, Line 2: Revise to read: ‘in Debre Markos (in Ethiopia) and Mali’. Conclusions - Revise the first sentence, especially the quotation of the value ‘3.5/1000’. Summary 1. Manuscript requires minor revisions indicated. Thanks ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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TIME TO MAJOR ADVERSE DRUG REACTIONS AND ITS PREDICTORS AMONG CHILDREN ON ANTIRETROVIRAL TREATMENT AT NORTHWEST AMHARA SELECTED PUBLIC HOSPITALS NORTHWEST; ETHIOPIA, 2023. PONE-D-23-20912R1 Dear Dr. Bishaw, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Edmund Tetteh Nartey Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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