Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-20146A machine learning model for early candidemia prediction in the intensive care unit: Clinical applicationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Meng, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 12 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please see the following video for instructions on linking an ORCID iD to your Editorial Manager account: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_xcclfuvtxQ Additional Editor Comments: Dear Authors, please address the following: Reviewer 1: 1. The introduction and especially the literature review is not sufficient. Authors need to add more state-of-the-art methods. 2. The model development section is not clear, it should include an explaination of the working principle of all the models utilized in this work. 3. The features used as inputs for the SHAP analysis are not mentioned. 4. The results should be compared with state-of-the-art methods. Reviewer 2: Major Comments: 1. The authors carried out 10-fold cross-validation of the algorithms by randomly assigning 7/10 groups for training the models and the remaining 3/10 for internal validation. This is considered standard best practices. However, the results in Table 2 are inconsistent with this premise and suggest that there was a single static pair of training and testing data. 2. Related to the previous point, the results in Figure 2 do not clarify which data set was used. Additionally, if the training or internal validation data were used, then there should be multiple curves for each model corresponding to each fold of the cross-validation. The same lack of clarity also applies to Table 3. 3. The nomogram is a nice addition that can improve the clinical utility of the models here. This is a graphical device, which can lack precision when used. I suggest that the authors also include a table showing the coefficients of the nomogram formula for more precise calculation of risk by clinicians. 4. The authors opted to exclude patients with 50% or more missing features but without providing adequate justification or performing sensitivity analyses to assess the impact of using lower or higher cutoffs. 5. Missing features of the remaining patients were imputed using mean values instead of using more refined approaches such as multiple imputation. 6. On the topic of missing data, please explain how clinicians should deal with missing values when using the nomogram or its formula when attempting to calculate the risk of candidemia infection. This is particularly critical since the model uses 18 features, each having a possibility of being missing, and the overall probability of at least one missing feature is likely moderate to high. 7. The bivariate analysis suggests that many (if not most) features are not marginally associated with infection. I suggest trying to build a more compact model and comparing its performance to the RF model presented. This is likely to have sub-optimal performance relative to the RF model, but if the performance is still comparable (say, AUC>0.8) then this might be more useful to clinician, especially given the likelihood of missing discussed previously. 8. Another reason to consider a more parsimonious model is that the sample size may not allow for adequate power to support 18 variables, and it’s likely that the predictive strength is being driven by only a handful of variables. 9. The data was matched based on hospitalization duration, which was defined as the number of days from hospital admission to the occurrence of candidemia. This is unclear since we do not know the exact time of candidemia occurrence, and especially since testing can take a long time. Minor Comments There are many grammatical and organizational errors that need to be revised to improve the readability of the paper. I highlighted these as comments on the manuscript. Moreover, the figure and table captions should be further improved to clearly indicate which sample was used and the sample size. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have done a good job, the work is interesting, and the results have been presented well however, there are some observations: 1. The introduction and especially the literature review is not sufficient. Authors need to add more state-of-the-art methods. 2. The model development section is not clear, it should include an explaination of the working principle of all the models utilized in this work. 3. The features used as inputs for the SHAP analysis are not mentioned. 4. The results should be compared with state-of-the-art methods. Reviewer #2: This paper presents and contrasts predictive models for early detection of candidemia infection that leverage more readily available clinical information in ICU patients. The results suggest that the machine learning algorithms demonstrated strong predictive strengths against testing and validation data, thus allowing clinicians to identify potential infections in a timely manner. Major Comments: 1. The authors carried out 10-fold cross-validation of the algorithms by randomly assigning 7/10 groups for training the models and the remaining 3/10 for internal validation. This is considered standard best practices. However, the results in Table 2 are inconsistent with this premise and suggest that there was a single static pair of training and testing data. 2. Related to the previous point, the results in Figure 2 do not clarify which data set was used. Additionally, if the training or internal validation data were used, then there should be multiple curves for each model corresponding to each fold of the cross-validation. The same lack of clarity also applies to Table 3. 3. The nomogram is a nice addition that can improve the clinical utility of the models here. This is a graphical device, which can lack precision when used. I suggest that the authors also include a table showing the coefficients of the nomogram formula for more precise calculation of risk by clinicians. 4. The authors opted to exclude patients with 50% or more missing features but without providing adequate justification or performing sensitivity analyses to assess the impact of using lower or higher cutoffs. 5. Missing features of the remaining patients were imputed using mean values instead of using more refined approaches such as multiple imputation. 6. On the topic of missing data, please explain how clinicians should deal with missing values when using the nomogram or its formula when attempting to calculate the risk of candidemia infection. This is particularly critical since the model uses 18 features, each having a possibility of being missing, and the overall probability of at least one missing feature is likely moderate to high. 7. The bivariate analysis suggests that many (if not most) features are not marginally associated with infection. I suggest trying to build a more compact model and comparing its performance to the RF model presented. This is likely to have sub-optimal performance relative to the RF model, but if the performance is still comparable (say, AUC>0.8) then this might be more useful to clinician, especially given the likelihood of missing discussed previously. 8. Another reason to consider a more parsimonious model is that the sample size may not allow for adequate power to support 18 variables, and it’s likely that the predictive strength is being driven by only a handful of variables. 9. The data was matched based on hospitalization duration, which was defined as the number of days from hospital admission to the occurrence of candidemia. This is unclear since we do not know the exact time of candidemia occurrence, and especially since testing can take a long time. Minor Comments There are many grammatical and organizational errors that need to be revised to improve the readability of the paper. I highlighted these as comments on the manuscript. Moreover, the figure and table captions should be further improved to clearly indicate which sample was used and the sample size. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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