Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 10, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-00989Optimizing cabin air inlet velocities and personal risk assessment: introducing the Personal Contamination Ratio (PCR) method for enhanced aircraft cabin infection risk evaluationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 19 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper reports the results of a series of numerical analysis of airborne transmission in a enclosed space, assuming an aircraft cabin. The results of the numerical analysis are compared with experimental results for a mock-up cabin model, and a certain degree of validation of the prediction accuracy of numerical method is also provided. The infection risk model, although simple, is a model that has been applied widely, and a certain level of prediction accuracy is ensured. The research theme and the numerical analysis method are not claimed to be novel, since they are based on previous studies, but they contain some novelty compared to previous studies, such as the use of a new index for evaluating exposure concentrations, PCR. Overall, this manuscript is judged to have few shortcomings and to be well-considered/well-organized, and this reviewer would recommend this should be accepted. Reviewer #2: The present study performs numerical simulations to analyse droplet dynamics in a Airbus A320 model, evaluating the effect of changing air supply rate on passengers’ exposure to droplets. The topic is interesting and worth of investigation; however, there are issues associated with the methodology and the CFD simulations, making the proposed results not reliable and the paper unsuitable for publication. Listed below are the main criticalities of the paper. - The Authors present the analysis of the breathing zone as a strong point, but the dynamics of breathing and particle inhalation are completely neglected. These aspects considerably alters the distribution of particles in the breathing zone, making the results obtained unreliable. - English language needs improvement. At some points, the sentence construction is convoluted; contracted forms are also present, which are not suitable for a scientific paper. - The description of the simulated scenario is confusing. It is stated that 6 people have been simulated (line 152), but in Figure 1 more passengers are depicted. In addition, authors should demonstrate that the simulated domain (restricted to a section of the whole cabin) is representative of the problem under investigation. - Authors should specify the software employed to carry out CFD simulations. - It is not sufficient to state that “Building upon existing research findings, our simulations employed a mesh grid totaling 6.51 million polyhedral cells within the cross-section of the three-row cabin” (lines 152-154). Unless the authors have carried out previous studies on the same cabin model, a grid sensitivity analysis must be performed. - A complete description of the boundary conditions should be provided. The periodic boundary condition set for the “periodic faces” needs to be discussed further. - The governing equations presented in section 2.4 (Equation 1 and 2) are for a laminar, incompressible and unsteady flow. These are not the governing equations of the problem under investigation. The URANS equations must be provided. In addition, the Boussinesq approximation seems to be used to model the effects of buoyancy (by considering the density constant in the transient and convective terms), but then in the gravitational term its dependence on temperature is not considered. - The drag force (equation 3) should be evaluated as a function of the droplet Reynolds number. - The scenario analyzed for particle emission is not realistic at all. It should also be described in more detail, not simply reporting the total number of particles emitted. The diameters (1 and 5 µm) are not representative of a real scenario, nor are the velocity (fixed at 1 m/s) and the direction of release. - How would the model proposed by the Authors improve the Wells-Riley model, by changing the perspective from global to local (section 2.5)? In the Referee’s opinion, the proposed model is not reliable to provide quantitative information about the risk of infection; rather, it gives information about the relative weight between different zones. For this purpose, it would have been sufficient to show the concentration of particles in different zones. - What is the error between PIV measurements and CFD results? The agreement seems to be very poor, especially for lines A and F (Figure 4). Such disagreement raises questions regarding the turbulence model, the boundary conditions and the grid sensitivity analysis. In addition, the section of the experimental-numerical comparison should be highlighted in the computational domain and the scenario considered for the validation should be described. - I find the representation in Figure 5 of little use, with the experimental vectors barely visible. The legend is also missing (as in the later images). It would be more useful to represent the entire measured velocity field. In general, the representation with vectors is unreadable and does not allow to visualize the presence of recirculation zones; in this sense, streamlines would be more suitable. - A picture depicting particle spatial distribution should be provided, commented with reference to the simulated velocity fields. - A strange effect is present in the velocity fields of the simulated scenarios whereby the air jet is strongly drawn back to the wall, despite being released at a certain angle toward the inside of the cabin. This effect is not present in the validation scenario and should be explained by the authors. - How is it possible for air to be completely carried behind (resulting in infection only for those passengers sitting behind the infected person)? The explanation provided by the authors (lines 379-383) is not convincing and the effect of the boundary conditions set at the "periodic faces" should be investigated. - Representing the possibility of infection for the source (Figure 12) makes no sense. In addition, there is probably a typo in the legend (the highest probability is equal to 0.25%, which is very low). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-24-00989R1Optimizing cabin air inlet velocities and personal risk assessment: introducing the Personal Contamination Ratio (PCR) method for enhanced aircraft cabin infection risk evaluationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 02 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: Please carefully address the additional comments from the reviewers. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: The authors provide references to sources providing information about the conditions representing the tested case. The authors provided drawings and data explaining the adopted methods and results to demonstrate the usefulness of the PCR method. This study contributes important information on droplet transport dynamics and infection risk in aircraft cabins, highlighting the importance of optimizing air delivery rates. PCR can significantly contribute to better design of ventilation systems and public health strategies. Reviewer #4: The manuscript entitled “Optimizing cabin air inlet velocities and personal risk assessment: introducing the Personal Contamination Ratio (PCR) method for enhanced aircraft cabin infection risk evaluation” is interesting. However, there are several major concerns that authors shall address. 1. Abstract: Measurable findings are required in the abstract session. Conclusion Is not clearly highlighted as in current form. 2. Introduction- suggest adding on other airborne infection statistics and its description, instead of COVID-19 only. These inclusions could show the importance of present study to be adopted in future. 3. Description of droplets shall be included, i.e., material, density, viscosity, other physical properties. 4. Is humidity being considered in this study? If no, please justify thoroughly. As far as reviewer concern, humidity could significantly affect the droplets transportation characteristics. 5. Authors shall justify why SIMPLE scheme for pressure velocity coupling and second order upwind scheme are chosen. Else, authors might need to find reference (similar study that investigate the effect of droplets dispersion in indoor) to support. Example: https://doi.org/10.1016/j.enbuild.2023.113439 6. Line 340- satisfactory agreement could be subjective. What is the relative error? This information is very crucial to support the reliability of result. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: Yes: Konrad Gumowski Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Optimizing cabin air inlet velocities and personal risk assessment: introducing the Personal Contamination Ratio (PCR) method for enhanced aircraft cabin infection risk evaluation PONE-D-24-00989R2 Dear Dr. Shang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Krit Pongpirul, MD, MPH, PhD. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #4: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed well. Please send the manuscript for proofread before publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #4: No ********** |
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