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PONE-D-24-34676Gluteus Medius Muscle Activation Patterns during Gait with Cerebral Palsy (CP): A hierarchical clustering analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wolf, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 28 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript, titled " Gluteus Medius Muscle Activation Patterns during Gait with Cerebral Palsy (CP): A hierarchical clustering analysis " aims to investigate in depth the relationship between hip abductors (especially gluteus medius) and Duchenne gait in patients with cerebral palsy (CP) employing electromyographic (EMG) cluster analysis. Gait data from 845 CP patients and 65 normally developing individuals were analyzed and different EMG activity patterns were found to be associated with Duchenne gait characteristics. However, in the introduction section, it is recommended that a discussion of the clinical importance of the impact of CP and hip abductor dysfunction on children's daily living and motor abilities be added. Furthermore, the Methods section should detail the participant's gait assessment criteria and how the six characteristics relate to the research question. Also, describe how coaching bias was minimized and other clustering assessment criteria were considered. Moreover, the discussion needs to be supplemented with an analysis of the study limitations and recommendations for clarifying future research directions, such as longer follow-up data and multicenter large-sample studies. Specific comments are shown below: Introduction 1. Lines 49-54: When referring to the effects of CP and hip abductor dysfunction, a discussion of the clinical importance of the problem could be added, including the impact on the child's daily life and motor abilities. This would help the reader understand the need for the study. 2. Lines 72-83: Regarding the application of machine learning methods in gait analysis, it is necessary to provide a detailed overview of the latest research directions (including explainable machine learning, optimized gait feature extraction algorithms, etc.), further drawing out the advantages of cluster analysis. To provide more effective evidence, the authors may consider referring to the following relevant studies: A new method proposed for realizing human gait pattern recognition: Inspirations for the application of sports and clinical gait analysis (https://doi.org/10.1016/j.gaitpost.2023.10.019); Explaining the differences of gait patterns between high and low‑mileage runners with machine learning (https://doi.org/10.1038/s41598-022-07054-1) 3. Lines 95-98: In the last paragraph, the main research questions and hypotheses of the study are clearly and unambiguously listed so that the reader can understand the direction and objectives of the study at a glance. Methods 1. Lines 108: You mentioned “ability to walk barefoot without any assistive device”, could you elaborate on how participants were tested in the gait assessment? For example, were standardized gait testing procedures performed? 2. In describing the six main features extracted, it is possible to further explain how these features specifically relate to the research question and why they were chosen for cluster analysis. 3. Describe how the presence of multiple certified strength and conditioning specialists minimizes coaching bias. This is important for ensuring that training is administered uniformly across groups. 4. In determining the optimal number of clusters, the Davies-Bouldin criterion was used; are there other assessment criteria (e.g., contour coefficients) for comparison to ensure the reliability of the selected clusters? Discussion Your discussion section does not mention the limitations of the current study. Is it possible to add a discussion of sample size, sample characteristics, experimental design, etc.? Also, it is recommended to clarify specific directions for future studies, such as considering longer follow-up data or multicenter studies with larger samples. Reviewer #2: My overall assessment of the reviewed work is very good, I recommend submitting the manuscript for publication without the need for major changes. The research topic is well-grounded in the literature review and current needs of human movement analysis. The use of an existing database and its more comprehensive analysis, using a new patient classification method proposed by the authors, should be considered a plus. The data was created using top-class measurement tools and methods (Vicon system, Kistler platforms), which guarantees an appropriate level of data quality. The presented research and data analysis protocol is described in sufficient detail, which allows it to be reproduced by other research teams who would like to use the proposed technique in their projects. The presented results correlate well with the stated goals of the work and allow for proper conclusions. I have minor comments on this part of the work, which I will present in detail at the end of the review. It also seems necessary to indicate more clearly the limitations of the work that may affect the obtained results. I would also like to point out that the abstract of the work with the same/similar title is publicly available as conference materials from 2024 and I leave it to the Publisher's decision whether this does not violate the declaration of submitting work not published in any other journal. Minor detailed comments: Table with participants characteristics – what values are in the brackets? (table 1) Table 2 - why come from number of TD subjects equal 117? In table 1, also in paper text is 65 typical development subjects. 10 gait phases – including a full cycle. It my opinion would be better to describe it as “... for 10 time intervals including a full gait cycle and its 9 phases: LR, etc….”. Writing about a full gait cycle as a phase of it is a bit misleading. But it's only me feeling. Line 183-185: "The 50-87% of the gait cycle (pre-, initial, and mid-swing phases) was visually chosen by comparing the EMG patterns." – I don't fully understand this sentence. Does this mean that by visually looking at the emg pattern it was determined when the preswing, initial, and mid-swing occurred, without using normalized time values? Why? What was the rules for 'visually determined intervals? Line 225:"Furthermore, these patients showed a higher pre-treatment activity of GM during 50-87% of their gait (p=0.05) (Table 3) and a greater RoM of hip abduction at 90 degrees hip flexion (p=0.05) compared to SUB_2 (Table 4)." Please check what the tables talk about, table 3 is not about emg. Line 283: "Therefore, after treatment and fixing the biomechanical problem, subsequently the frontal plane movement of pelvic and trunk in SUB_1 improve." Please note that only a significant difference was confirmed for the trunk range of motion, so information about the pelvis cannot be added here, it is unconfirmed. Line 285: "In addition, the compensatory prolonged activation of GM during swing (50-87% of gait) was diminished in these patients (SUB_1) after the intervention.” I don't think this statement is based on facts. As is known, the EMG signal is characterized by a certain variability, about which I have no information in the referenced Figure 5. It would be necessary to present a graph separately for Sub1 and Sub2 with the muscle activity profile (its average line but necessarily with the standard deviation range) during the observation of E1 and E2. It may turn out that looking at the average signal and its variability, both time points of observation of the EMG profile do not differentiate (and this should be assumed in the visual assessment, if the average +/- STD is superimposed on another compared course also expressed as the average +/- STD.) The authors also did not indicate any statistical test confirming their conclusion for the indicated range of the gait cycle (50-87%) comparing muscle activity before and after therapy/surgical intervention. Line 304:"An activity level above 70% of mean EMG, combined with a limited range of motion of less than 30 degrees, may suggest that surgery alone will not automatically improve trunk movement, and the patient may require additional treatment such as trunk motor control training, prior to surgery." Does this mean that if the patient who has less than 70% and a limited range of motion below 30 degrees, that is a good sign for them? 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