Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 23, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-07080A Neural Network Approach to Predict Opioid Misuse among Previously Hospitalized Patients using Electronic Health Records.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Vega, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 03 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please see the following video for instructions on linking an ORCID iD to your Editorial Manager account: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_xcclfuvtxQ 5. Please ensure that you include a title page within your main document. You should list all authors and all affiliations as per our author instructions and clearly indicate the corresponding author. Additional Editor Comments: I have thoroughly reviewed the feedback from both reviewers regarding your paper titled "A Neural Network Approach to Predict Opioid Misuse among Previously Hospitalized Patients using Electronic Health Records." Both reviewers commend the paper for addressing a significant issue, opioid misuse, and for its unique approach utilizing electronic health records (EHR) and neural network models. However, they have provided constructive feedback aimed at enhancing the clarity, coherence, and adherence to journal guidelines. Reviewer 1 acknowledges the high value of your paper in addressing opioid misuse but notes deviations from the journal's author guidelines, leading to confusion and readability issues. They specifically highlight the lack of introduction to neural networks, EHR, and machine learning, along with unnecessary sections and inconsistent referencing styles. Additionally, they recommend integrating sections such as literature review and research questions into the introduction and methodology for better flow. Reviewer 2 emphasizes the need for improvement in language and grammar, suggesting trimming unnecessary sections to enhance readability. They also point out specific instances of incomplete or unclear sentences, inconsistent terminology, and the absence of references for certain claims. Both reviewers recognize the significance of your work but highlight areas for improvement in clarity, coherence, adherence to journal guidelines, and language quality. Therefore, I recommend revising the manuscript to address these concerns before resubmitting it for further consideration. Please ensure that the revisions align with the journal's formatting requirements and guidelines to facilitate the review process. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, After going through your paper “A Neural Network Approach to Predict Opioid Misuse among Previously Hospitalized Patients using Electronic Health Records” I can see that it has high value and address a major issue i.e., opioid misuse. The paper is unique and presents how electronic health records (EHR) could be used to predict opioid misuse using neural network approach. I agree that opioid misuse is a significant problem and can lead to cases of opioid overdose and deaths. Therefore, if earlier identification of opioid misuse could be done among previously hospitalized patients it could further benefit them from getting risk of opioid overdose. After going through your paper, I found most of the contents within the paper is well explained and I genuinely commend authors for that. However, I also found that the authors didn’t follow the author guidelines (https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines) properly before submitting the paper. Because of the content’s irregularity, the paper can get confusing and difficult to read. I recommend authors to strictly follow such guidelines so that it maintains clarity and readability among researcher and even readers. As of current, it looks like a thesis dissertation file. Similarly, the authors also haven’t included significant components such as “the introduction of neural network, its approach, EHR in the introduction section.” This creates confusion and shows lack of coherence. I recommend authors to fully revise the paper following the guidelines. I have few comments for the authors. These comments are simple as it mainly focuses with the adhering journal guidelines along with clarity and readability of paper. Comments: Introduction 1. Line 11-12: “In the United States, nearly 10 million individuals misuse opioids annually National Center for Drug Abuse Statistics (2021).” This line creates confusion on whether it’s an entire sentence or the later one is intext-citation. Please amend so that clarity can be maintained. Please maintain references thoroughly. The author guidelines mention on using “Vancouver” (See under style and format), however you seem to have used author-date style. 2. Line 12-13: “Opioid misuse occurs when an individual 1) takes opioids in different/larger quantities than prescribed by their physician, or 2) takes opioids without a prescription.” Please cite this sentence too as this sentence provide useful information. 3. Line 35-39: With respect to your topic, I don’t find any introduction on the idea of neural network, its approach, its meaning and purpose. Similarly, I don’t see any introduction to EHR and its purpose in this sense. The authors could have also provided a little context to machine learning models and their importance in predicting such misuse. 4. Line 41-45: “The rest of this paper is structured as follows. Section 2 is the Literature Review and explores opioid risk assessment tools and machine learning. Section 3 contains our Research Questions. Section 4 is the Experimental Design and we present the OMPS System. Section 5 details the Experimental Results and Discussion. Section 6 delivers our Conclusions, Limitations and Future Directions. Finally, Sections 7 and 8 contain the Abbreviations and Declaration statements respectively”. This is not needed. We don’t mention such things in introduction section. Better omit this. 5. Section 2 and its subsection is not required. Please follow the author guidelines properly. Within this section, you have mentioned all the overall variables/checklist (taxonomy of opioid risk assessment tools) and machine models. This perfectly sets up for the upcoming section. But a specific literature review section is not needed, please amend this portion within your introduction, methodology sections. Including this in your earlier and later sections, make your paper must robust and readable. 6. Section 2.2 Line 132-135 explains on the machine learning and Line 137-139 shows the meaning of EHR and its use. You can include this in your introduction section. 7. Section 2.3 “Research gaps” ideas could have been incorporated within the introduction section. 8. Section 3 “Research questions” could also have been incorporated within the introduction section. 9. Section 4 should be methodology not experimental design and only the authors should highlight it as an experiment design study. 10. Section 5: Please rename it to as “Result and discussion”. I acknowledge the authors idea of presenting the results as per the research questions. 11. The limitations, further implication sections are well presented in accordance with study results and objectives. 12. Please look out for potential grammatical errors, abbreviation and spelling mistakes. I commend authors for providing such detailed explanation on the topic. However, your work needs further revision to improve its clarity and readability. Reviewer #2: 1)Overall, the writing needs to be improved in terms of language and grammar. 2)I feel many unnecessary sections could be trimmed and included in the introduction and methodology. The manuscript is very lengthy and should be reduced to a readable pace. 3) Also, please check on the referencing system. 4)Line 11- The line seems to be incomplete. Please make sure it is clear. 5)Line 14- Opiate use disorder- Probably you could provide a clear description on this and what are the consequences. 6) Line 32- What is the definition of universal screening that you meant? Or is it based on a standardised protocol? 7) In Line 32, you mentioned that there is a lack of resources to administer questionnaires but under Figure 1 (Opiate risk assessment tools), there is questionnaire. So which one you are referring to? Please be clear. 8) Line 441- “This finding also aligns with previous research.” Where are the references? 9) Please adhere to the manuscript formatting for the article. It looks more like a mini-thesis to me. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-24-07080R1A Neural Network Approach to Predict Opioid Misuse among Previously Hospitalized Patients using Electronic Health Records.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Vega, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 14 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Sunil Shrestha Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments : Please kindly review the manuscript based on the reviewers comments [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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A Neural Network Approach to Predict Opioid Misuse among Previously Hospitalized Patients using Electronic Health Records. PONE-D-24-07080R2 Dear Dr. Vega, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sunil Shrestha Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): ACCEPT Reviewers' comments: |
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