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| Original SubmissionApril 7, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-09373What’s the harm? Results of an active surveillance adverse event reporting system for spinal manipulation therapy providersPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Pohlman, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 05 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Some comments and suggestions for consideration by the authors: Materials and Methods Line 125: First sentence outlines time frame but not location. Would the authors consider adding country here? I appreciate it does appear later in the manuscript. Adjudication for AE severity Line194: commencing with “Firstly, a summary….” I found this sentence confusing and even after a number of re-reads, still found it difficult to comprehend. Would suggest the following for the authors’ consideration: Initially, one of the study investigators prepared a summary of the reported adverse events (AE) using information from the provider long-form and any relevant previously provided data. The content experts then assessed the severity of the AE independently based on this summary. Statistical analysis Line 235: post-treatment form at T2 vs “who did not” should read: those who did not. Discussion Line310: first sentence: consider the following: We found almost a fifth of patient visits to a chiropractor or physiotherapist reported an AE. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript which I think will be of interest to the readers of PlosOne. The authors are to be congratulated for their work and for contributing to this important area in manual therapy research. My comments and feedback are given with the intent to both clarify and strengthen this manuscript. Title Consider editing to remove the term spinal manipulation therapy (SMT) as there was no data reported to suggest that spinal manipulation (SM) was delivered to every participant. I argue that it is more appropriate to use the term manual therapy instead. If the authors are reluctant to do this, they should provide strong justification for the use of SMT in the title and clearly define in the manuscript what is meant by this and what treatment included i.e. not only SM but also (most likely) spinal mobilization and ancillary procedures (e.g. advice, stretching, trigger point therapy, dry needling etc). This data should be reported. Abstract Reads well but please check reported values for accuracy of reporting as some values in the main text Results section seem to be incorrect. Introduction - P3, line 88: would it be helpful to make this sentence more specific to manual therapy? - P3, lines 89-91: 'severity and frequency' does not fit here or, needs further explanation - P3, line 91: please clarify what is meant by 'oversight' i.e. by professional registration boards, governments, professional associations? - P3, lines 88-94 & P4, lines 95-104: please consider acknowledging that there already exist other reporting systems (e.g. CPiRLS) in the literature and why the current reporting system is needed/relevant to your setting (and follow-up in the Discussion) Methods and Materials - P5, lines 126-129: please clarify if these numbers (i.e. 100/50) relate to unique patients or, patient visits and also if these numbers referred to all patients or, only patients who received SM. If it was all patients, did all receive SM? If not, this would support my argument to remove SMT from the title. If it was patient visits (not unique patients), did all participants return the questionnaire before their next visit? - P5, line 128: please clarify if the clinicians self-reported using SMT or, how these data were obtained - P6, line 156: who provided the one-on-one training? Was this person responsible for training all practitioners? - P6, lines 170-171: similar to my comment re the title, please provide further details regarding what components 'treatment' could contain - P6, lines 180-183: was there any trend regarding differences in reporting of AE at say 2 vs. 7 days? Could this have influenced the results if all participants returned their questionnaire at 7 days vs. 2 days? Similar to my comment above, for patients who had appointments close together (i.e. twice in one week), was the questionnaire always returned prior to their second visit? - P7, lines 192-194: how was 'experienced' defined? Years of clinical experience? - P7, lines 194-196: this sentence does not make sense to me, is it possible that a verb is missing? - P8, line 238: how were 'treatment dose' and 'number of risk factors' determined/defined? Results - Table 1: what is the relevance of 'mark all that apply' in the presenting condition row? Why are neck and back pain reported together? Is there evidence of equal incidence rates following SM delivered to the neck and back? How were acute and chronic defined? Please provide examples for 'Musculoskeletal conditions', 'cardiovascular conditions', 'pain medication', 'medication – other', 'natural health products – other' and 'other insurance'. - P10, line 264: this missing data should be discussed in the Discussion re influence it may have had on the results - Table 2: is it possible to help orient readers by providing which questionnaires (i.e. T0/1/2) provided the data for each of the rows in this table? - Table 3: please check the values reported in this table as by my calculation the total of four rows is not correct (rows 3, 6-8 of reported values) - P11, line 280: please check dizziness n=5 as this is reported as n=10 in Figure 2 (if I understood the figure correctly) - P11, line 301: similar to my previous comment, please provide an example of a 'risk factor' Discussion - P12, line 311: it is unclear where '75.7%' came from, is this from presenting condition in Table 1? - P12, lines 326-327: '… levels and standards of training' of who? And what is meant by 'provider characteristics'? - P14, lines 390-392: it is unclear what is meant by this sentence - P14, lines 392-393: what is meant by 'natural variations in msk symptoms'? - General comments: - Please check references as I think P12, line 314 [11] is a typo and should be [10] - Please consider discussing differences in incidence rates based on whether an active or passive reporting system is used - Similar to my previous point, please consider discussing other existing AE reporting systems - Parts of the Discussion read as quite general and I think could be improved with more specificity of the existing literature vs. the current study (e.g. what are frequencies of AEs for drug use or, if these are not available, please state that and why the paragraph discussion physiotherapists is relevant here when the inclusion criteria was that physios had to report frequent use of SM/SMT but I would argue that most physios do not apply SM unless they have specific training) - In the paragraph reporting on the other SafetyNet studies, why do you not consider that the current results should be replicated in other adult cohorts? Do you see this system as having global generalizability or being more relevant to North America? Why/why not? - How does the AE definition used in this study differ from existing definitions and do you think that might reduce comparability with the studies discussed in the Discussion section? - Further discussion re sample size required as recruitment failed to reach calculated sample size Reviewer #3: On line 63-64 and in Table 1 - you note the patients were 62.5% females. Capturing the patient characteristics of gender may be more inclusive in future work. Line 268 reports severity classification of total AEs, however the numbers don't add up to 21.3 (2 missing). You do account for this in line 264 where you note that 2% had missing information. I think a line at 273 noting this missing information "missing severity information - 41 (2.0%)" would help the reader. Table 2 (line 266) may benefit from an extra line "No AEs reported" to show the counterpart number to 21.3% (I presume there was no AEs in 78.7% of patient visits). A reader often looks to see that the numbers 'add up'. Line 274, "Table 3. The number of patients with an AE reported by provider and/or patient (n=2136)" I thought 2136 was the number of patient visits that you had complete data sets for (T0+T1+T2). Should the number listed in line 274 not be (n=455)? Line 278 "... were the most common AE (n=152 and n=87)". Should be AEs (you are discussing 2 categories) Line 365 "especially if use at a community-based" should be 'used' Line 369 "has been successfully used in pediatric offices and a chiropractic teaching clinic" - I think 'chiropractic' should be inserted before 'pediatric offices' for clarity. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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