Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 16, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-01588Handheld dynamometry: validity and reliability of measuring hip joint rate of torque development and peak torque.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. McNabb, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers have provided some useful comments that can assist the manuscript to improve. They both find the study of potential use, an evaluation I agree with. You will see both have raised some concerns and have made suggestions, I would encourage you to carefully consider and address . Areas that have been raised by both reviewers, such a s residual fatigue or 'analytical goals', as well as any other methodological aspects, should be of particular attention. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 08 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this study, the authors aimed at investigating the concurrent validity of handheld (HHD) and isokinetic (IKD) dynamometers, as well as the intrarater reliability of the HHD when measuring hip muscle peak torque (PT) and rate of torque development (RTD) outputs. This is a very relevant topic and I commend the authors for trying their endeavor. Even though, major concerns limit the interest in recommending this study for publication. My main concern is related to the number of tests performed. According to the procedures, each muscle group has been tested at least 24 times (Session 1: 4 trials to measure PT using IKD, 4 trials to measure RTD using IKD; Session 2: 4 trials to measure PT using HHD, 4 trials to measure RTD using HHD plus re-tests). Some of them may have been tested even more, as some of the hip muscles can be activated in more than one movement. In addition, the sessions were about 30-minutes apart, with the second one including test and retest measures. Although participants of this study were free from pain or injury, it is important to consider that, in this scenario, fatigue may have played a role in the results’ interpretation. Another important aspect that should be considered is the physical activity level of participants (different effects of fatigue are expected between physically active and sedentary ones). However, no information about physical activity levels or perceived efforts during testing has been provided. Why analyses comparing PT and IKD have not been performed as previously (10.1371/journal.pone.0140822)? They are important and can further support the agreement analyses. The discussion of this study is too long and hard to follow. Short paragraphs like “The present study demonstrated that late phase RTD0-150 and RTD0-200 measurements are more reliable, have better agreement with the IKD, and relate to PT, than early phase RTD0-50 and RTD0-100.” are common and does not bring a deeper discussion considering previous literature, current findings, and overall implications. In the limitations, the authors have stated that “Lastly, the study employed a labour-intensive onset of contraction calculation method for RTD which may not be practical for clinical practice due to its time-consuming nature.” and this contrasts with the purpose of the study. What clinicians should do about RTD measures after reading this manuscript? Mentiplay et al. (10.1371/journal.pone.0140822) have provided software program that helps clinicians to extract RTD values when using a similar protocol to them. Why something similar has not been considered? The introduction of this study should be better aligned with its aims. An example of that is the focus on the importance of testing maximal strength in patients with hip related pain, whereas only pain or injury-free participants have been included. The authors should be clearer about the need for correlation analyses between PT and RTD measures. I suggest the inclusion of information in the introduction. Also, in the discussion, the authors have stated that “Correlation analysis was also performed to inform clinicians that there was a high association between RTD in the later phases (RTD150 and RTD200) and PT. This indicates that the simpler PT calculation can be used in clinical practice.” and I wonder if the results of this study support such a statement. Does this suggest that clinicians should use PT measures to surrogate RTD ones? How would that work and how they should be interpreted? The higher SEM and MDC reported by the authors may be explained by the inclusion of participants who were free from pain or injury (10.1371/journal.pone.0140822). Can the authors use previous literature including other samples (e.g., samples with hip related pain) to provide further information of how clinicians can interpret absolute reliability? I understand how hard is to perform IKD and PT protocols using the same testing position. However, why positions had to be different for hip abd/add? Lower values of hip abd, for instance, may be expected when testing in supine as compared to side-lying (10.1016/j.ptsp.2020.01.005; 10.1016/j.jbmt.2022.02.011; 10.2519/jospt.2023.12045). This may have influenced differences/disagreements between instruments. Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript! Reviewer #2: Proposed additional limitations: - Before conducting the study, it was essential to make an informed decision about the clinical importance of any potential bias between the two instruments (IKD and HHD). Without such decision, the presence of a statistically significant bias between the two instruments would present a dilemma similar to interpreting p-values and effect size. For example, while a bias of >10 (Nm/s/kg or Nm/kg) could be considered large enough to inform meaningful bias, this may not be the case for any bias <1 (Nm/s/kg or Nm/kg). This may therefore, affect interpretation of the findings and importance of the found significantly different biases. - Data collection was completed in one day due to restrictions during the Covid era, with approximately 30-minute delay between measurements 1 and 2. This will not directly translate to delays practiced between repeat measurements in a clinical setting, potentially affecting generalisation of found measurement repeatability. - Repeatability of measurements may be lower in clinical populations due to changing health states and pain levels. It would be insightful to explore/speculate whether a more conservative multiple of the MDC is needed to accurately capture these changes when using HHD to assess treatment responses. Methodological points: - Consideration should be given to the accurate reporting of sampling frequency of IKD, which is typically 100 Hz but was sampled by the Labchart data acquisition system at a different (1000 Hz) frequency. Did IKD have actual SF of 1000 Hz? - Clarification is needed on the duration of time under tension during MVIC for completion of the method, and how peak torque was determined, particularly regarding data manipulation: according to the manuscript the highest peak was reported over 4 trials: i.e. this was the maximum (one data point) value obtained out of 4 trials. - Confirmation is required on whether the moment arm was measured once or twice during HHD. - The method for detecting onset of contraction needs clarification, particularly regarding the translation of (3) data points into different time windows due to differences in sampling frequency between instruments. - You have used “onset of contraction” for referring to the onset of torque production (Data Extraction). To prevent confusion, it might be better to reserve “contraction” to refer to muscle activity. Muscle activity starts earlier than increase in torque, and no EMG was used in this study Results: I would have liked to see the results of t-test when reporting significant Bias in relevant tables. I am aware of space limitation. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-24-01588R1Handheld dynamometry: validity and reliability of measuring hip joint rate of torque development and peak torque.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. McNabb, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The authors are commended for the thorough and extensive revision of the manuscript. Please include a version (it can even be a shortened one) of your reply to R2 re the 'the clinical importance of any potential bias' in the manuscript, so the reader is explicitly informed about the difficulty in determining that. Additionally, please standardise reporting as either 'CI' or '95%CI' (preferable). Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 18 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Handheld dynamometry: validity and reliability of measuring hip joint rate of torque development and peak torque. PONE-D-24-01588R2 Dear Dr. McNabb, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review the revised version of this manuscript. The authors have addressed all the comments and I commend them for their endeavor. Reviewer #2: I have now reviewed responses of the authors to the paints I raised and feel that paper is greatly improved and can be used with cautious reader who note limitations of the study. ********** 7. 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