Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 12, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-14441Deciphering the explanatory potential of blood pressure variables on post-operative length of stay through hierarchical clustering: A retrospective monocentric studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Fischler, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 16 2024 11:59PM, 11:59 pm. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: I congratulate the authors for this important study. With a large cohort of patients, this study provides important results on the relationship between intraoperative blood pressure data and length of hospitalization. The manuscript was reviewed by two reviewers and their recommendations are as follows. We look forward to your point-by-point responses to their suggestions and to your re-uploading the revised version of the manuscript after any necessary edits. We wish you success. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. Technical Soundness and Data Support Study Design and Methodology: The manuscript describes a retrospective cohort study involving 9,516 patients who underwent non-cardiac surgery under general anesthesia. The primary aim was to identify intraoperative arterial pressure variables associated with prolonged postoperative length of stay (pLOS) using a hierarchical clustering approach. The study design is appropriate for the research question, and the methodology is clearly outlined. Data Analysis: Statistical Methods: The use of Kendall’s tau coefficients and a penalized Bayes information criterion for cluster determination is appropriate. The application of absolute standardized mean distance (aSMD) for variable ranking and multivariate independence analysis ensures that the analysis is rigorous. Significance Testing: The p-values reported (<0.001) indicate strong statistical significance, supporting the robustness of the findings. However, the manuscript would benefit from a more detailed explanation of the choice of these statistical methods and their assumptions. Data Support: The data supporting the conclusions are comprehensive. The availability of the dataset in the Dryad repository (doi:10.5061/dryad.12jm63z5r) complies with the journal's data policy, enhancing transparency and reproducibility. 2. Presentation and Language Clarity and Structure: The manuscript is generally well-organized and easy to follow. Each section flows logically from the previous one, with clear headings and subheadings guiding the reader through the study. Language and Grammar: While the manuscript is mostly written in standard English, there are a few typographical and grammatical errors that need correction: In the Abstract: "received general for a scheduled non cardiac surgical procedure" should be "received general anesthesia for a scheduled non-cardiac surgical procedure." In the Introduction: "encourages to investigate" should be "encourages investigating." In the Methods section: "this procedure (collective information) meant that need for individual consent" should be "this procedure (collective information) meant that individual consent was not needed." Intelligibility: The manuscript is intelligible, with technical terms appropriately defined and explained. However, simplifying some complex statistical descriptions for a broader audience could enhance readability. 3. Results and Interpretation Results Presentation: The results are clearly presented, with appropriate use of tables and figures to illustrate key findings. The hierarchical clustering results are well-detailed, showing the association between arterial pressure variables and pLOS. Interpretation of Findings: The conclusions drawn from the data are appropriate and supported by the findings. The discussion appropriately contextualizes the results within the existing literature and outlines the clinical implications of the findings. 4. Ethical Considerations Ethics Approval: The study received ethical approval from the local Ethics Committee, which is clearly stated in the manuscript. The procedures for anonymizing patient data and providing collective information to patients comply with ethical research standards. Data Sharing: The authors have made the underlying data publicly available through the Dryad repository, complying with PLOS ONE’s data sharing policy. This transparency allows for independent validation of the study’s findings. 5. Strengths and Limitations Strengths: The large sample size enhances the robustness and generalizability of the findings. The innovative use of hierarchical clustering provides a detailed understanding of the relationship between intraoperative arterial pressure variables and pLOS. The thorough methodological description allows for reproducibility and transparency. Limitations: The retrospective design limits the ability to infer causality from the observed associations. Being a monocentric study, the findings may not be entirely generalizable to other settings or populations. The manuscript could benefit from a discussion on potential confounding factors and how they were addressed. 6. Overall Assessment The manuscript is technically sound and contributes valuable insights into the relationship between intraoperative arterial pressure variables and postoperative length of stay. The statistical analysis is rigorous, and the data support the conclusions. The manuscript is generally clear and well-written, though minor errors should be corrected. The findings have significant clinical implications for perioperative management and patient outcomes. Specific Recommendations Clarify Statistical Methods: Provide a more detailed explanation of the statistical methods used, including the assumptions underlying Kendall’s tau coefficients and the penalized Bayes information criterion. Address Potential Confounders: Discuss potential confounding variables and how they were controlled for in the analysis. Improve Language and Grammar: Correct the identified typographical and grammatical errors to improve readability. Simplify Technical Descriptions: Simplify some of the more complex statistical descriptions to make the manuscript accessible to a broader audience. Reviewer #2: Introduction General It is well conducted research with novel idea and you have written the paper well. There are some grammatical errors that need work, Methods Study setting: It is better if you add more description regarding the hospital size, anesthesia department annual patient volume, … Ethics approval: what about the institution head? Mention if s/he is aware of the study and consent was taken from her/him as well. Exclusion criteria are too much. What is the reason for excluding all this population from the study? As it will likely affect the external validity of the study Discussion: The conclusion needs to be broaden more and you should not miss a chance to call out other researchers to further explore this new PLOS evaluation method. And also include weakness and strength of the study. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Deciphering the explanatory potential of blood pressure variables on post-operative length of stay through hierarchical clustering: A retrospective monocentric study PONE-D-24-14441R1 Dear Dr. Fischler, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Eyüp Serhat Çalık Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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