Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 16, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-15393Post-myocardial infarction heart failure and long-term high-fat diet: cardiac endoplasmic reticulum stress and unfolded protein response in Sprague Dawley rat modelPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wojciechowska, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Two independent reviewers have evaluated your manuscript. Reviewer #1 states that a substantial and comprehensive revision would be required throughout the paper. Reviewer #2 suggests that the novelty of this experiment is limited and that the authors must provide justification for studying this experimental model. If you believe you can effectively address all their suggestions, I am open to reconsidering it. Specifically, I would like you to consider the questions raised by Reviewer #1. Additionally, the revised version will need to undergo review by the same reviewers, and the final decision will be based on their assessment. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 28 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review PONE-D-24-15393 The study investigated the effect of post-myocardial infarction (MI), heart failure (HF), and high-fat diet HFD on inflammation, nitro-oxidative stress, endoplasmic reticulum (ER) stress, and unfolded protein response (UPR). Twenty-eight male adult Sprague Dawley rats were divided into four groups (NFD vs. HFD) and surgical procedures (sham operation vs. coronary artery ligation to induce MI). The authors concluded that dietary fat content significantly impacts cardiac function and stress markers in a rat model of MI HF. However, several methodological weaknesses and speculative conclusions must be resolved to make the study more scientifically acceptable. • Adherence to strict dietary standards is a cornerstone of rodent research, ensuring the reproducibility and reliability of results. The dietary pattern of rodents, as outlined in AIN93 (J Nutr 1993;123:1939-51 doi:10.1093/jn/123.11.1939), is a crucial aspect that is unfortunately not detailed in the manuscript. Different types of fat can have varying effects on animal metabolism, and the protein content of the food is also vital for post-surgical recovery. Therefore, I kindly request a table providing a comprehensive breakdown of the ingredients in the control and high-fat diets used in the study. • What was the difference in energy between the control and HF diets? • The names of groups should be more explicit and not confusing. • Page 5 - Fig 1 is mentioned, but we see a table. In line 103, three references are cited to explain the experimental procedures (refs. #24-26). However, these references are a meta-analysis and two reviews that do not provide experimental details. • Coronary artery ligation in rodents is not always lethal, but many animals die. The manuscript does not inform how many animals were operated on or the survival rate. • When ligating the coronary artery to cause a myocardial infarction in rodents, the method produces individual lesions; some animals may have an extensive infarction area, but others may not. Evans blue and triphenyl tetrazolium chloride staining can determine infarct areas at sacrifice (a missing item that compromises the study). • Did the operated animals eat normally? How was the animals' food intake? The information is relevant to understanding the result of body mass loss reported in the article. • Line 139 –reference #34 used to describe the protein analysis method is a meta-analysis, so… • I did not find an explanation for what proBNP means (which appears a few times in the text). • Lines 206-2010 - Nitric oxide (NO) is a gas that degrades quickly. The study did not evaluate NO production and cannot discuss NO levels. • Comparisons between groups (and markings on graphs) - there are comparisons between groups that are not comparable (e.g., unoperated ND vs. operated HFD) and should not be stated or commented on. • The statistical analysis should be more explicit and inform where the parametric or non-parametric analysis was performed. Why was the Spearman coefficient not determined for non-parametric correlations? • I do not understand how the authors talk about 'heart failure' (HF) if the study does not include measuring the animals' blood pressure or a cardiac functional test (ultrasound?). Analysis of left ventricular ejection fraction is essential to understand the effect of post-infarction HFD. • There are numerous grammatical and spelling errors in the text. Reviewer #2: This manuscript describes an exploratory study examining the influence of high fat diet on cardiac nitrosative stress and endoplasmic reticulum stress in rat model with post-myocardial infarction heart failure. Overall, the manuscript is well written. Although the novelty of this experiment is limited by the great depth of literature available using other rodent models, this manuscript reports a technically-sound experiment describing the nitrosative and endoplasmic reticulum stress markers in rats. Nonetheless, the manuscript lacks any functional metrics that could support and verify the development of heart failure in this model. The choice of single time-point also limits the information provided by this characterization study whereby it is unclear when does nitrosative stress and endoplasmic reticulum stress occurs with diet and MI-induced heart failure. Minor comments: Individual data points should be presented in bar graphs. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-24-15393R1Post-myocardial infarction heart failure and long-term high-fat diet: cardiac endoplasmic reticulum stress and unfolded protein response in Sprague Dawley rat modelPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wojciechowska, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewer #2 approved the authors' responses but requested a comment in the conclusion indicating that this study is preliminary. However, the reviewer #1 did not accept the authors' responses and insists on them being addressed adequately. As the academic editor, I will grant the authors another opportunity, and the responses will be forwarded to reviewer #1 for evaluation. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 01 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Aguila, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review PONE-D-24-15393R1 I thank the authors for reviewing the manuscript and considering previous comments. However, there are still some issues that need to be resolved: Lines 137-138 "The infarction surface was measured planimetrically". Planimetry is a method for estimating areas (just like a scale measures mass). The issue with evaluating the infarcted area in the left ventricle is that the manuscript does not have any information on how this was done. As mentioned in the first review, Evans blue and triphenyl tetrazolium chloride staining is generally used to determine infarct areas at sacrifice. However, the authors responded that they did not do it this way but by planimetry (?). OK, but how did the authors select the region of infarction? Were histological sections made from the left ventricle and a dye used? How many cuts, and at what levels of the left ventricle? How did the authors perform the fractionation of the ventricle to estimate the infarction area? Does planimetry use point counting, image analysis, or other techniques? It is essential to highlight that infarction is a three-dimensional issue; planimetry alone (which determines the areas of infarction in sections) does not provide information on the volume of the injured myocardium. Unfortunately, this result should be removed from the article because it does not make sense scientifically. Page 8 (statistical analysis) – It is problematic that such a small sample was normally distributed for all parameters analyzed (perhaps the authors should review this). It is not understood to do a one-way ANOVA and then a two-way ANOVA. What software was used in the study? Bio-render and AI-based tools are not acceptable software for statistics. Finally, the lack of a functional study of the post-infarct heart and estimation of left ventricular ejection fraction significantly reduces the contribution that could be made by the experiment and is a significant limitation of the study. Reviewer #2: Authors have addressed all my previous comments. They have acknowledge that this is a preliminary study and it would be ideal that they mention this in the discussion and conclusion. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Post-myocardial infarction heart failure and long-term high-fat diet: cardiac endoplasmic reticulum stress and unfolded protein response in Sprague Dawley rat model PONE-D-24-15393R2 Dear Dr. Wojciechowska, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Marcia B. Aguila, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors accepted my suggestions and placed a limitation on the study. The study is preliminary and should be continued in the future. No further comments. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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