Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 31, 2024 |
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Kind regards, Hosam Al-Samarraie Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and Additional Editor Comments : Dear authors, the work is relevant and well justified. I would advise you to review the comments below and respond to them for reconsideration. In addition to the reviewer's comments, please see mine below: The argument in the introduction is well established and linked to the goals of Exp1 and 2. However, you might want to include some recent examples from previous studies on viewing behaviors of different styles of painting and their results. This can be added before “We suggest that the reason why descriptive titles….” You did mention some studies (Early eye movements reflect the structural elements and semantics of art works, its gist, with…) but not specifically explaining them for readers to be able to see the difference to yours. In the method, have you thought of using mixed model analysis? This type is more effective in handling smaller sample sizes and controlling for type I errors by considering random effects and fixed effects together. Can you please explore the possibility of integrating this to your current study. Reading the discussion, it is a bit difficult to extract the practical implications of this work. I would suggest that you add this as a separate section after the discussion. The limitation and conclusion in the discussion can be separated into a separate section. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This is the review for manuscript PONE-D-24-31271 entitled: “Viewing of abstract art follows a gist to survey gaze pattern over time regardless of broad categorical titles”. Therein, the authors describe two experiments in which they showed pieces of art to participants while they recorded their eye movements. Prior to the presentation, art works were labelled. The authors assumed that labelling will affect gaze behavior during viewing the artwork. However, this was not the case. The authors argue that the results can be explained by the labels not adding to the processing of the artwork above what would have been expected by a gist to survey viewing behavior and the inherent properties of abstract pieces of art. Overall, the manuscript is well written, and the analyses are in principal appropriate for answering the research question. The literature review is comprehensive and the explanation of the results plausible. Eye movement recordings and analyses follow the state-of-the-art and are well described. I have some questions and suggestions concerning the analyses. Please, see my major and minor points below. 1) One alternative explanation could be that the labels were ignored by participants. Did the authors check that labels were recognized and processed? For instance, by asking them after viewing about the label of the artwork? If the authors did not check this, I suggest to at least mention this as an alternative explanation for the missing effect of labelling. A stronger manipulation could be to instruct participants if they find the label a piece of art was given suitable. 2) For the frequentist analysis approach, did the authors maker power calculations as to how many participants would be needed to at least find a small or medium effect of the labels? If not, they could calculate the achieved power post hoc and mention it in the Participants section of the manuscript. 3) In frequentist analyses, a null result cannot be interpreted. It would be of interest, if there is convincing evidence against the effect of category label by running a Bayesian ANOVA, for instance with the open source and easy to use software JASP. 4) One suggestion for further analyses. Did the authors compare the same artwork that got different labels for different participants? How did people look on average on one and the same artwork when it received the label landscape or portrait? Minor 1) While the overall story can be followed, I recommend language proof correction through a native speaker or careful revision of the writing. There are many minor grammar mistakes. 2) Please, also check the accordance to APA style for titles and tables. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Dear Dr. McSorley, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 25 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Kind regards, Hosam Al-Samarraie Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: Thank you for submitting the revised version back to us. Despite some improvement, the reviewer and I still believe that further improvement is needed. Please review the reviewer's comments and respond to them accordingly. Here are my comments: The manuscript would benefit from thorough proofreading, as there are many places lacking commas, correct spelling, etc. In the discussion when you refer to previous studies you need to indicate the number along with the name of authors. “For example, some works of abstract art are described as more calming and static, such as those by Piet Mondrian or Josef Albers,” The citation must be checked throughout the manuscript. I found the assumption here “Thus, eye movements would be expected to be spread more widely than those evoked by static paintings.” Can benefit from more explanation. There are many previous studies that have indicated this too. Perhaps linking to possible individual differences or characteristics might help explain why. Also the practical implications section should be placed after the discussion. The conclusion section comes at the end. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No ********** Reviewer #1: This is the review for Revision 1 of the manuscript: “Viewing of abstract art follows a gist to survey gaze pattern over time regardless of broad categorical titles”. The authors could address some of my points. It is a pity that the authors cannot compare the same artwork with different labels, but only report the overall mean differences between viewing of art works and labels. To me, that would have been a more direct test of the hypothesis and could easily be tested in a third experiment. Based on the revised manuscript, I have some more comments. Please, see below. Design: should the factor Time not be mentioned in the Design section and power analyses? So far it only includes the factor “Label”. But Time is analyzed and theoretically motivated. I guess the authors used G*Power 3.1. I think, citing this source would be appropriate. While I appreciate the use of Bayesian inference to draw conclusions on the reported null effects, the results confused me at first glance. The probability of the alternative over the null hypothesis is BF10. The evidence for the Null hypotheses over the alternative is usually labelled BF01. To ease understanding of the BFs, it may make sense to report the BF according to the reported result. Thus, for instance, instead of reporting BF01=1.326x10-23 (p.14 l.298) which is basically 0 evidence in favor of the null, it makes sense to report the BF10, that is evidence for the difference between the second- and third-time interval. I don’t understand the expression: “Label BF01/Null model BF01=482.206/249.356=9.55” What do the authors mean? Dividing Label B01 by Null model BF01 results in 1.93, not 9.55. “Methods” is the proper title including Materials. No need to change that to “Materials and Methods” Minor language errors: p.5 l.87: «paintings of Jacob and this Twelve Sons” should be “paintings of Jacob and his Twelve Sons p.11 “all repeated measures as random slopes for all repeated measures (JASP version 0.19.1; jasp-stats.org).” Do the authors mean: “for all dependent measures” ? ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Dear Dr. McSorley, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 23 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Hosam Al-Samarraie Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Dear authors, thank you for your patience and for addressing the major comments in the previous round. Please do consider the reviewers' comments when submitting your revised manuscript [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: Your article is well-revised and meets a high standard for publication. I have a minor suggestion: consider including a visualization of raw eye movement data overlaid on the abstract art, showing fixation points and saccades for a representative 10-second segment from both experiments. This would help the audience intuitively grasp the gaze patterns before presenting the bar graphs. Additionally, a brief explanation in the results section would enhance clarity and provide better context for the statistical summaries Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: Yes: Suraj Upadhyaya Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org
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