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PONE-D-23-43796Differences between atrial fibrillation diagnosed before and after stroke: a large real-world cohort studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hsu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 25 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this study, the authors retrospectively investigated more than 160.000 thousand patients from from the National Health Insurance Research Database (NHIRD) of the NHI program in Taiwan. The aims of this study were to evaluate the clinical characteristics of newly diagnosed atrial fibrillation after a stroke (AFADS) in patients with ischemic stroke (IS) in a large population-based cohort; the differences in comorbidities and outcomes among the patients with known AF (KAF), AFADS, and without AF; the effects of anticoagulant treatment in patients with IS with either KAF or AFADS. The authors reported a very high mortality rate among patients with AF (both groups), and a higher risk of recurrent IS and hemorrhagic stroke for patients with KAF compared with AFADS. The study is conducted in a large population and is overall well written, applying also a quite good statistical method. However, I have some major and minor comments: Major 1) It is not clear at which time the data regarding OAC therapy has been extracted from the registry. Is it after the stroke events? Please provide this data. 2) Following the previous point, many patients with KAF should have been already treated with OAC therapy before the stroke. I believe that it would be very interesting to know how many of them were already on treatment before the stroke. 3) Since data were collected regarding antiplatelet therapy, direct oral anticoagulants (DOAC) and vitamin K antagonist (VKAs), it would be interesting to see the results of the cox regression analysis also for the subgroups of antithrombotic treatment, especially in regard of hemorragic events. 4) Regarding the Cox regression analysis, the authors did not report about the adjustments made in the multivariable analysis for the risk of recurrent stroke, hemorragic stroke and all-cause mortality (Tables 2,3 and 4). Please provide this data. 5) Since the independent variable including the type of AF (eg. Non-AF, AFADS, KAF) was already studied in the different models for the various endpoints (results reported in table 2, 3 and 4), I do not understand why it has been done the same thing also in table 5. Furthermore, the results of the analysis using Non-AF as reference reported in table 5 are different compared to those in Tables 2,3 and 4, suggesting different adjustments. Please specify. 6) Since the mortality rate for KAF is particularly high, the risk of competing events strongly limits the results regarding the recurrence of Ischemic stroke and hemorragic stroke. I suggest that reporting “Compared with AFADS, the patients with KAF had lower risks of recurrent IS (HR: 0.91, 95% CI: 0.86–0.97, p < 0.01) and hemorrhagic stroke (HR: 0.88, 95% CI: 0.79–0.99, p < 0.01)” may be misleading. I also suggest to provide potential strategies for mitigating the impact of competing events on the study outcomes, thus strengthening the validity and reliability of the results of the study. 7) The authors also reported that OAC therapy reduced the risk of all the outcomes of the study. However, they do not provide data regarding the population in which OAC therapy was studied. The results reported in the tables, suggest that they included in the cox regression analysis the whole population, also those with Non-AF, for which OAC therapy may not be indicated or beneficial. Please provide this data. Minor 1) Discussion paragraph, page 8. “The incidences of AFADS (4.9%) and KAF (10.5%)…”. Maybe, it was meant “The prevalence”? 2) I also suggest in the discussion in the paragraph regardin OAC therapy to refer to this relevant paper on the argument “ Romiti GF, Corica B, Proietti M, Mei DA, Frydenlund J, Bisson A, Boriani G, Olshansky B, Chan YH, Huisman MV, Chao TF, Lip GYH; GLORIA-AF Investigators. Patterns of oral anticoagulant use and outcomes in Asian patients with atrial fibrillation: a post-hoc analysis from the GLORIA-AF Registry. EClinicalMedicine. 2023 Aug 25;63:102039. doi: 10.1016/j.eclinm.2023.102039. PMID: 37753446”. 3) Also, it may be interesting to refer to some gender disparities regarding the risk of adverse events. Here I provide a relevant article on the topic “Bucci T, Shantsila A, Romiti GF, Teo WS, Park HW, Shimizu W, Mei DA, Tse HF, Proietti M, Chao TF, Lip GYH; Asia-Pacific Heart Rhythm Society Atrial Fibrillation Registry Investigators. Sex-related differences in presentation, treatment, and outcomes of Asian patients with atrial fibrillation: a report from the prospective APHRS-AF Registry. Sci Rep. 2023 Oct 26;13(1):18375. doi: 10.1038/s41598-023-45345-3. PMID: 37884587; PMCID: PMC10603128.” Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, thank you for submitting your valuable study. You have the unquestionable merit of having addressed a still unclear subject, the management of which is still too arbitrary and burdened by mortality and morbidity rates still too high. However, I have some suggestions to offer you to refine the article and enrich the discussion section: - consideration should be given to the possibility that the results of the higher incidence of recurrent ischemic or hemorrhagic stroke in patients with AFDAS may be linked to the fact that atrial fibrillation in this cohort may recognize different etiopathogenic mechanisms (such as neurogenic atrial fibrillation). Similarly, cerebrovascular relapses may imply a different pathological pathway than atrial fibrillation in this cohort. The real challenge, in my opinion, will be to be able to distinguish how many patients with AFDAS recognize a cardioembolic genesis of their neurological events. This aspect should be underlined and deepened in the discussion; - another aspect to note is that only cases of atrial fibrillation diagnosed during the admission for the neurological event have been taken into account in the AFDAS group. As evidenced by many studies and as emerged with increasing strength thanks to the use of devices for the continuous monitoring of heart rhythm (such as implantable cardiac monitors or ECG-monitors for personal use), many patients with stroke have paroxysms of arrhythmia even at a distance from the index hospitalization. Therefore, many patients with AFDAS may have merged into the "non-AF" group. This should be highlighted within the limitations of the study and further discussed; - it would also be interesting to investigate the incidence of major adverse cardiovascular events during the follow-up period in the three patient groups. Would it be possible to add this analysis to the study? - The acronym AFADS does not sound right. I would suggest to modify it with AFDAS (Atrial Fibrillation Detected After Stroke), as widely reported in the literature. It also appears necessary, in conclusion, a minor revision of some typing and consecutio temporum errors of some sentences. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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