Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 22, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-07129Scenic Spot Path Planning and Journey Customization Based on Multilayer Hybrid Hypernetwork OptimizationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Song, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 03 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper proposes scenic spot path planning and journey customization based on multilayer hybrid hypernetwork optimization. There are still several aspects that need to be addressed. 1. The language expression appears to be overly redundant and requires simplification. For example, the sentence "The research on path planning and itinerary customization of scenic spots involves many difficulties, which involve many aspects such as technology, data, and user behavior [6, 7]." may be "The research on path planning and itinerary customization of scenic spots involves many difficulties such as technology, data, and user behavior [6, 7]." "First of all, ..." should be "First". "Secondly, ..." should be "Second, ...". "Finally, path planning and itinerary customization require... ..." should be "Therefore, path planning and itinerary customization require... ..." 2. The expressions of "multi-path" and "multi-way" should be consistent. 3. The abbreviation POI lacks its full name, e.g., Points of Interest. 4. The table for storing equations should have no borders. 5. The font of the variables in the formula is inconsistent with that in the main text. 6. In Equation (1), $Concat(\\phi_i)$ should be $Concat(\\phi_1, \\phi_2, \\dots, \\phi_i)$. Moreover, the value range of $i$ is not clear and its setting in this paper is also unclear. 7. It's strange to have all the pictures attached, and the readability is also very low. 8. The equation (2) is difficult to be understood. For example, the value range of $m$ and $n$ is not clear. $O(i, j)$ and $I(i + m, j + n)$ appear indistinguishable but use different symbols. 9. The abbreviated form of "Adaptive multi-way selection Feature extraction (AMS)" is greatly difficult to understand. 10. It is difficult to find the support for "realize the personalized customization of tourists' itinerary" in the experiments. Reviewer #2: Thank you for your submission to PLOS ONE. Your work focuses on an interesting topic: that of path planning with side-constraints. Unfortunately, though, the manuscript is organized in a manner that makes the problem unclear to most interested readers. Specifically, my comments follow. 1. The Introduction fails to provide the necessary background to understand the problem setup. Are we discussing about a shortest path problem with side-constraints? Is it supposed to be a tour or a circuit? What exactly is dynamic in the setup? Please consider updating this section with the necessary problem definition, perhaps followed by a visual representation of the problem. 2. The Literature review section is also very poorly written. At the moment, the literature review only mentions some of the works that have attempted to solve side-constrained network optimization problems. As an example, the most prominent method (that of Lagrangian optimization) for such problems is not even mentioned. Additionally, there is no synthesis in the Literature Review, as of now. A good literature review for a journal like PLOS ONE would require a better organization: at the moment, the literature review is "W solved the problem using Y, while X solved the problem using Z". Furthermore, the methodologies that you contrast your approach to in the Computational Results section are absent from the literature review. This section would need a thorough rewriting in order to become more concise and more inclusive. 3. The Methods section is missing important details for exactly how the model proposed is working. What makes it harder to follow is that some notation changes from subsection to subsection (see, for example, $D_i$ that is a feature in 3.1 but $D_i$ becomes a subset of scenic spots in 3.3). Traditionally, a full optimization problem would first be provided prior to tackling it using metaheuristics or AI-ML techniques. 4. While the data is available to download, a lot of details for the implementation and the selection of the hyperparameters is very unclear. The manuscript does not provide any reasoning for the selection of the hyperparameters and their impact of the metrics. One step that would help would be to make the code available to download and test, too. 5. The comparison to other methods is also unclear, as some of the methods compared to are optimizing for different objective functions. In summary, I believe that there are significant edits to be made before the manuscript can be considered. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-24-07129R1Scenic Spot Path Planning and Journey Customization Based on Multilayer Hybrid Hypernetwork OptimizationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Song, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 10 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Yunhe Tong Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Please see below for the comments: To realize the efficient matching between tourists and scenic spots, this paper proposes (1) the feature extraction method of adaptive multi-path selection (AMS), (2) the tourist personalized reasoning method based on multi-layer hybrid network (MHN), and (3) the path planning method based on hyper-network optimization (HO). However, there are still several aspects need be improvemed. (1) The notations are chaotic and their connections are weak. (2) The optimization objective function (see, Eq. (5)) is uninformative and very difficult to understand. (3) The accuracy of expression urgently needs to be improved. For example, the ``OH'' listed in Table 2 should be ``HO''. (4) The best result should be highlighted, such as in bold. (5) If the AMS, MHN, and HO are not considered, what exactly is the baseline-model? (6) In the 20th page of this PDF file, there is a mistaken code between 0.50 and 0.95. (7) The expression of first person such as ``We'' or ``I'' should be unified. (8) The path planning and path prediction are two completely different problems. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: To realize the efficient matching between tourists and scenic spots, this paper proposes (1) the feature extraction method of adaptive multi-path selection (AMS), (2) the tourist personalized reasoning method based on multi-layer hybrid network (MHN), and (3) the path planning method based on hyper-network optimization (HO). However, there are still several aspects need be improvemed. (1) The notations are chaotic and their connections are weak. (2) The optimization objective function (see, Eq. (5)) is uninformative and very difficult to understand. (3) The accuracy of expression urgently needs to be improved. For example, the ``OH'' listed in Table 2 should be ``HO''. (4) The best result should be highlighted, such as in bold. (5) If the AMS, MHN, and HO are not considered, what exactly is the baseline-model? (6) In the 20th page of this PDF file, there is a mistaken code between 0.50 and 0.95. (7) The expression of first person such as ``We'' or ``I'' should be unified. (8) The path planning and path prediction are two completely different problems. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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PONE-D-24-07129R2Scenic Spot Path Planning and Journey Customization Based on Multilayer Hybrid Hypernetwork OptimizationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Song, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewer only suggested minor revisions. Please see below for detailed comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 17 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Yunhe Tong Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: To realize the efficient matching between tourists and scenic spots, this paper proposes (1) the feature extraction method of adaptive multi-path selection (AMS), (2) the tourist personalized reasoning method based on multi-layer hybrid network (MHN), and (3) the path planning method based on hyper-network optimization (HO). However, there are still several aspects need be improvemed. (1) The notations are chaotic and their connections are weak. (2) The optimization objective function (see, Eq. (5)) is uninformative and very difficult to understand. (3) The accuracy of expression urgently needs to be improved. For example, the ``OH'' listed in Table 2 should be ``HO''. (4) The best result should be highlighted, such as in bold. (5) If the AMS, MHN, and HO are not considered, what exactly is the baseline-model? (6) In the 20th page of this PDF file, there is a mistaken code between 0.50 and 0.95. (7) The expression of first person such as ``We'' or ``I'' should be unified. (8) The path planning and path prediction are two completely different problems. [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Scenic Spot Path Planning and Journey Customization Based on Multilayer Hybrid Hypernetwork Optimization PONE-D-24-07129R3 Dear Dr. Song, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yunhe Tong Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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