Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-11365Implementation status of postoperative rehabilitation for older patients with hip fracture in Kyoto City, Japan: A population-based study using medical and long-term care insurance claims dataPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sasaki, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 05 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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YT and MT reported receiving grants from the Japan Society for the Promotion of Science during the study [grant numbers 20H01594 and 21K21166]. HU reported receiving grants from Janssen Pharmaceutical K.K.; Chugai Pharmaceutical Co Ltd; Mitsubishi Tanabe Pharma Corporation; Sumitomo Pharma Co Ltd; Takeda Pharmaceutical Company Limited; KYOCERA Corporation; Nippon Telegraph and Telephone Data Corporation; Nippon Telegraph and Telephone Business Solutions Corporation; and Health Insurance Claims Review & Reimbursement services outside this submitted work. JM received honoraria for lectures from ASAHI KASEI PHARMA CORPORATION and UCB Japan Co. Ltd. outside this submitted work." 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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study aimed to examine the implementation status of postoperative rehabilitation for older patients with hip fractures and the factors associated with continuing rehabilitation, using Japanese medical and long-term care insurance claims data in Kyoto. The authors found a decreased proportion of continuous rehabilitation use after six months of the hip fracture surgery. Also, they found that men, higher frailty risk, care dependency before hip fracture surgery, and non-dementia patients were associated with continuity of rehabilitation. This theme is relevant in the field, but please consider the following comments to improve the readability and to confirm the validity of the study. Major comments: 1.Page 3, Line 66: Please consider to clarify more details of the study results which supported a minimum requirement of six months rehabilitation after hip fracture surgery in the Japanese guideline. For example, some countries have introduced the reablement interventions which is a multidisciplinary rehabilitation within 3 months after discharge. I am not sure whether all hip fracture patients should take the six months rehabilitation or not, because the intensity of rehabilitation that can be provided in a hospital may not be available or feasible in a nursing home or at home. 2.Page 3, Line 72: Authors mentioned about two previous studies in Japan on the rehabilitation after hip fracture. Please consider the clarification of more details (i.e.,study design, data, limitations etc.) for these studies. Also, authors can mention the other countries’ studies on it. Furthermore, authors are conducting the analysis to identify factors associated with continuity of rehabilitation, so please consider to add what is known in the previous study on it. 3.Page 4, lines 90 – 92: Each data has the different periods for data use. These could make us confused, so please consider to write only actual study period after data management (linkage). 4.Page 4, lines 95 – 97: What is the proportion to what? 5.Page 6, line 126: Please explain the Japanese system of rehabilitation between medical and long-term care insurance. We are not sure why authors must use the both of them. 6.Table S3: Some residents in special nursing home for the elderly (Toku-you in Japanese) have received the rehabilitation. Is it already included in Table S3? 7.Page 6, lines 132-133: Could you clarify the differences between the comorbidities (i.e., dementia and so on) and 20 types of diseases? What is the purpose of describing the 20 types of diseases? 8.Page 6, Lines 139 – 143: Why did authors set the different periods after the surgery to identify the dementia, depression and the frailty risk score, compared to delirium and 20 types of diseases? 9.Page 7, line 153: I am not sure what the convalescent rehabilitation ward is. Please consider the explanation on it. 10.Page 8, line 178: Please consider to add some description for the demographics of the population such as age and sex at least. 11.Table S6 and Table 1 can be combined and shown as a Table 1 because authors are conducting a regression. 12.Figure 2 should be added the value at each month and what is month means at x-axis. 13.Table 2: I’m not sure that the results of univariable analysis is needed because authors did not seem to mention them. 14.Table 2: Who has a responsibility for continuing rehabilitation after hip fracture surgery in Japan? At the acute or sub-acute moments, physicians in hospitals could order it. However, how about in the situation after several months in nursing facilities? Do physicians in clinics do it? Or can care managers in the long-term care insurance system do it? 15.I am worry about the possibility of incorrect and biased estimates because of the nested structure of the population. Especially, if physicians order the rehabilitation, patients are correlated with physicians. Also, physicians are nested by hospitals. Therefore, I think authors should consider this structure in the regression, using the multilevel analysis or cluster SE, even though authors are exploring the related factors simply. 16.Page 13, lines 219 – 229: Authors mentioned the issue around the transition from hospitals to other facilities as a possible reason of the decreasing proportion of rehabilitation over time after the operation. However, it seems to me there are other possible reasons. For example, some patients may be more likely to recover quickly. Other patients may not prefer to continue rehabilitation for whatever reason. Or perhaps there are limited resources for rehabilitation in the home or nursing home. This is a primary outcome in the study, so the authors should consider various possibilities. 17.Page 17, lines 313 - 315: Please clarify the directions of the association. (i.e., positive or negative) Minor comments: 1.Page 2, Line 43: an intermediate of what? 2.Page 2, Line 45: Please consider to add some odds ratios for care dependency. 3.Table S2 is titled as S3. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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