Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 21, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-41672Efficacy and safety of Saireito (TJ-114) in patients with atrial fibrillation undergoing catheter ablation procedures: a randomized pilot studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shizuta, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 13 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I have read with interest the manuscript titled " Efficacy and safety of Saireito (TJ-114) in patients with atrial fibrillation undergoing catheter ablation procedures: a randomized pilot study”. The authors conducted a randomized placebo-controlled prospective single-blinded clinical trial analyzing the anti-inflammatory and anti-edema effects of the Japanese herbal medicine Saireito post-catheter ablation of atrial fibrillation. In particular, in this pilot study they analyzed whether the intake of this traditional herbal medicine reduced the burden of frequent atrial arrhythmias in the 30 days after the procedure (primary endpoint). This period is within the so-called blanking period, in which the burden of atrial arrhythmias might paradoxically increase due to the fact that ablation lesions have not yet completely stabilized and usually is not taken into account in clinical trials, however patients still might experience discomfort due to symptoms with quality-of-life reduction and might necessitate ER visits and/or hospitalization. All anti-arrhythmic drugs were discontinued before ablation procedure in order to avoid bias and analyze Saireito true effect. The authors demonstrated that at the end of the follow up Saireito did not reduce atrial arrhythmias in a statistically significant fashion, however there was a tendency in this reduction, more pronounced in the first two weeks, and trials with bigger sample sizes might provide better insights on the topic. Moreover the use of Saireito was associated with adverse events, in particular with a non-negligible rate of interstitial pneumonia (4%, i.e. two patients). I think this manuscript is well written and does not have any major issue in form or design of the study. The study design and the endpoints are clear, as well as inclusion and exclusion criteria. The topic is debated among experts and the use of this Herbal Medicine might be a novelty. I therefore wholeheartedly congratulate the Authors for their work. I would like to highlight the following aspects: 1. The study is single-blinded for the operators, participants were not masked to the treatment assignment. The reason of this choice should be clearly stated. 2. Ablation procedures, both using RF and cryoballoon, have a plethora a possible variables to be considered to define ablation success. However, maybe due to word limit, it was not clearly defined how ablation success was evaluated. Please elaborate on this and provide the exact variables used to define clinical success. Furthermore were mapping systems used? Was remapping after energy delivery evaluated? 3. In the “Methods – Follow up” section I would suggest to change the sentence “The monitored ECGs during the index admission were read by the attending physicians”, In particular I would suggest to use the word “analyze” in lieu of read, to better convey the message I think the Author intended to pass on. 4. A 30-day period was chosen. Why did the Author chose such period? I think it would be interesting to analyze the effect of Saireito on the whole blanking period, which is conventionally defined as 90 days for most trials, or at least 45 days, as some authors advocates for shorter blanking periods. 5. Was the use of Implantable Loop Recorders (ILRs) to detect atrial arrhythmias taken into consideration? I think the use of ILRs could have provided invaluable data on this matter, virtually eliminating the possibility of undetected episodes of atrial arrhythmias (a limit clearly stated by the Authors on the manuscript) 6. I think the abstract conclusion section should be changed to avoid misleading the readers, in particular I would change the part “but the favorable effect was remarkable in the first 2 weeks” with “there was a tendency in their reduction, more pronounced in the first two weeks”. 7. Last but not least, the use of Saireito was associated with adverse events, in particular with a non-negligible rate of interstitial pneumonia (4%, i.e. two patients) which could theoretically lead to further morbidity and mortality and have long lasting effects on the patients. Did the two patients had any long-lasting effects due to pneumonia? Furthemore, could you elaborate more on this aspect and in particular on its pathogenesis? Moreover, considering that, as you cited, interstitial pneumonia is a side effects of Ogon, a component of Saireito, is it possible and/or plausible to avoid its use in the Saireito compound? Considering this non-negligible rate of this complication, are further studies using Saireito ethically viable in your opinion? I congratulate again the Authors for their invaluable work. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Efficacy and safety of Saireito (TJ-114) in patients with atrial fibrillation undergoing catheter ablation procedures: a randomized pilot study PONE-D-23-41672R1 Dear Dr.Satoshi Shizuta We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ibrahim Marai, MD Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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