Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 18, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-15704How do soundboard-using dogs respond to human button presses? An investigation into label comprehensionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bastos, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please carefully address the reviewer's concerns regarding the presentation of your results and conclusions of your study in your revision. This includes potentially altering the title of your manuscript as you revise based on the thoughtful critique provided by the reviewer. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 14 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Bastos et al. How do soundboard-using dogs respond to human button presses?... May 14, 2024 At its heart this is a very simple paper, but, because of the context of this work, it is likely to excite a lot of attention. Much of it misguided. Consequently, a great deal of care needs to be taken in its presentation. A lot of care has already been taken. I’m going to suggest some additional care. In essence, Bastos et al. tested pet dogs for their ability to respond appropriately to three words: “Out,” “play,” and “food.” (The exact word used depended on the dog’s prior training). “Respond appropriately” means here, move towards the room exit in response to “out,” move towards toys in response to “play,” and move towards food in response to “food.” The authors found above chance tendencies to move towards the exit and toys in response to “out,” and “play” respectively. There was no tendency to move towards food in response to “food.” These tendencies to respond appropriately to “out” and “play” were not massive effects. On average the dogs showed about 50% appropriate behaviors in response to the relevant word. So a detectable tendency but far from the levels expected, say, of explosive detection dogs. The study stands out for extreme care in design and experimental controls. It was preregistered, every imaginable attempt was made to blind the experimenters and video coders to what was going on. So the risks of Clever-Hans-type unintentional cueing are very small. The data analysis also appears careful and fully appropriate. Thus far this might seem like a very minor study. What will surely lead to it attracting a great deal of attention is the fact that the dogs that were tested had all been trained (by their owners) on the button systems that are currently very popular in social media and elsewhere. These are buttons programmed so that, when pressed, they say a word recorded by the dog’s owner. The widespread interest in these buttons stems from the fact that people train their dogs to press them, however, in this study, the dogs were not given an opportunity to press the buttons. All button presses were carried out by humans. There were two sets of conditions: one where the owner or experimenter said the relevant word; the other where the owner or experimenter generated the word by pressing the button that activated a prior recording of the owner saying the word. No significant differences were found between these conditions. Furthermore, there is no basis to believe that the fact that the dogs had all been trained to press these buttons themselves has anything to do with their performance. It wouldn’t surprise me if most pet dogs respond 50% appropriately to someone saying “out” or “play.” In fact, I’m rather surprised that the dogs in this study didn’t respond correctly to a word standing for “food.” My dog does and we haven’t had to train her explicitly to respond to “din dins!” There were also a further two sets of conditions, one in which the dogs were tested by experimenters, and one where the dogs were tested by their owners. No difference was found between these conditions. I think this is an interesting little paper, but, as I started out by stating, its presentation and conclusions need to be carefully expressed to avoid the possibility of misunderstandings. First, I think the fact that these dogs had been trained to press “talking” buttons should be downplayed. In this study the dogs were not pressing the buttons. There are no comparative data to indicate that the prior button-press-training has anything to do with the performance observed, and the generally low (albeit statistically significantly above chance) levels of performance provide no grounds for believing that the prior training had had any positive effect. Figure 2 should be redrawn to cover the whole range over which values were free to vary (0 – 100%). The present truncated formatting gives a visual impression of a more powerful effect than was actually observed. I wonder about including “soundboard-using” in the title. As noted above, there is no evidence that having been trained on the soundboard impacted the dogs’ performance. Tables 8-10 lack full explanations. What are “Play:Press” and “Food:Press” etc.? I’m not sure why, in the Discussion, the authors stated that they possibly failed to detect a respond to the word “food” because food-related behaviors occurred at a high rate in all conditions. Figure 2 indicates the opposite; Food related behaviors occur at the lowest rate of any analyzed behaviors in all three conditions. I recognize that this isn’t an error, but I think it would be simpler to refer to the stimuli as ‘words” rather than “labels.” That will be easier for more readers to understand. I would like to see consideration in the Discussion of other contexts in which dogs respond to stimuli. This might include scenarios like sniffer dogs, which are trained explicitly and to far higher criteria than were observed here, and possibly other everyday examples of dogs developing appropriate responses in daily interaction with humans, such as following pointing gestures. Overall a worthy piece of work that ought to be published after some revision. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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