Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 26, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-07558Synthesising perspectives: Crafting an Interdisciplinary view of social media's impact on young people's mental health.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Maltby, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 21 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Dear Authors, Thank you for submitting the article entitled "Synthesising Perspectives: Crafting an Interdisciplinary View of Social Media's Impact on Young People's Mental Health" for review in our magazine. After a detailed analysis by reviewers specialized in the field, it became evident that the work holds significant potential but also identified specific areas requiring improvement to maximize its impact. The reviewers primarily highlighted the need for enhancements in the article's theoretical and methodological aspects. Their observations provide valuable insights to fortify the study's theoretical foundation and methodological robustness. I would like to request that all adjustments and requests highlighted by the reviewers be addressed in the new version of the article. This encompasses, but is not confined to: Revising and deepening the theoretical framework, ensuring the consideration and coherent integration of all pertinent approaches. Enhancing the methodology, which entails clarifying procedures, justifying methodological choices, and adequately addressing potential limitations. Integrating any additional suggestions or comments provided by the reviewers to enhance the overall quality of the article. I underscore the importance of these revisions to ensure that the article fulfills its maximum potential and merits consideration for publication in our journal. Please do not hesitate to reach out should you have any questions or require further clarification regarding the reviewers' feedback. I am at your disposal to assist you throughout the revision process. Thank you in advance for your dedication to improving the article. I eagerly anticipate the revised version. Yours sincerely, [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Regarding the Comprehensive Digital Influence Model, how robust are the identified key themes in capturing the complex dynamics between social media and mental health among young people? Are there any potential limitations or areas where further refinement may be necessary? In terms of practical implications, how do the insights provided by the study inform the actions of educators, policymakers, and mental health professionals? Are there specific recommendations or strategies proposed that are actionable and feasible in addressing the challenges posed by social media in supporting the mental well-being of young individuals? Reviewer #2: The paper "Synthesising perspectives: Crafting an Interdisciplinary view of social media's impact on young people's mental health" explores a highly relevant theme for practice as well as for various fields of research. The paper stands out for the clarity of the written text, rigor in the application of the research method, use of an interdisciplinary approach (combining various knowledge perspectives), and discussion of the practical implications of the study, aiming to demonstrate how the research findings can impact the formulation of public policies. In essence, the paper’s main contribution relies on the development of a method to perform thematic analysis using ChatGPT, which could be replicated in other qualitative research studies. The following remarks seek to summarize the key areas where the paper needs improvement: 1) Include a Research Question (RQ): The first chapter (Introduction) is effective in showing the topic and clearly stating the research gap, highlighting the lack of studies exploring the effect of social media on young people's mental health from an interdisciplinary perspective. However, it would be advisable to include a research question at the end of this chapter, aiming to state the research scope. 2) Methods: Page 8 contains the following excerpt: “(...) ChatGPT offers a consistent, unbiased processing capability, crucial for handling the subtle and often subjective nature of qualitative data (...).” Considering the use of ChatGPT is the core of the paper’s research design, there is a lack of references/citations that support the author's choice in the use of this tool. In that excerpt, it was mentioned the “unbiased processing capability” of ChatGPT; certainly, that is a questionable statement that demands a more in-depth discussion to justify the use of ChatGPT. Here are some examples of studies that doubt the “unbiased processing capability” of ChatGPT: [1] Rozado, D. (2023). The political biases of chatgpt. Social Sciences, 12(3), 148. [2] Ray, P. P. (2023). ChatGPT: A comprehensive review on background, applications, key challenges, bias, ethics, limitations and future scope. Internet of Things and Cyber-Physical Systems. [3] Motoki, F., Pinho Neto, V., & Rodrigues, V. (2024). More human than human: Measuring ChatGPT political bias. Public Choice, 198(1), 3-23. 3) Results are essentially descriptive, and there is a lack of discussion of findings with the literature: The main weakness of the paper relies on the descriptive aspect of the chapters Results and Discussion. In essence, these chapters describe the outputs from the thematic analysis without any analysis or discussion with the previous literature on the impact of social media on young people's mental health (from a disciplinary or interdisciplinary perspective) (there is no citation from pages 12 to 26). 4) Explain how the interdisciplinary approach adopted in the paper differs from other studies: The authors mention that the differential of the interdisciplinary approach carried out in the paper is that it allows a more precise analysis of this complex phenomenon, overcoming the limitations of a specialized analysis considering only one field of study. However, the paper lacks a more detailed discussion to demonstrate what would be the differential of the findings using this interdisciplinary approach? How are the results presented similar to (or different from) other studies analyzing the impact of social media on young people's mental health? ********** 6. 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Synthesizing perspectives: Crafting an Interdisciplinary view of social media's impact on young people's mental health. PONE-D-24-07558R1 Dear Dr. Maltby, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Luis Hernan Contreras Pinochet, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear Authors, Thank you for your detailed and thoughtful response regarding the revision and resubmission of your manuscript. I am pleased to inform you that all the reviewers' queries and requests have been brilliantly addressed. The manuscript has considerably improved following the adjustments made during this latest revision. We appreciate your efforts in ensuring the clarity and quality of the manuscript. We look forward to progressing with the publication process. Best regards, Reviewers' comments: |
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