Peer Review History

Original SubmissionFebruary 8, 2024
Decision Letter - Zewdu Gashu Dememew, Editor

PONE-D-24-05371Incidence and predictors of tuberculosis among HIV-infected children after initiation of antiretroviral therapy in Ethiopia: A systematic review and meta-analysis.PLOS ONE

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Additional Editor Comments:

Dear Authors,

Congratulation to come up with this very relevant manuscript of childhood TB among HIV infected children on ART in Ethiopia.

It is well narrated, reviewed, analyzed and discussed.

Please just attend to a few comments from the one of the revue

Regards

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

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5. Review Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: • The publication by Amare Kassaw1 et al “Incidence and predictors of tuberculosis among HIV-infected children after initiation of antiretroviral therapy in Ethiopia: A systematic review and meta-analysis’, was read and reviewed with great passion and sincerity. I note that this study was registered in PROSPERO on 06/07/2023 with registration number CRD42023439555 as required of systematic reviews.

• The critical appraisal was done using the Joanna Briggs Institute (JBI) quality assessment checklist for cohort studies as seen in the attached S2 document. This implies that high quality studies were considered since JBI is more sensitive than both CASP and ETQS. This however is dependent on the level of expertise since JBI is not user friendly for students.

• The authors do not provide a detailed explanation of eliminated studies and their disqualifying reasons. This could lead to elimination of relevant and useful studies. The authors could use reference manager to avoid deleting duplicates by one category say author’s name or year of publication.

• I note that the review considered only published articles in open access journals and went ahead to acknowledge the authors of the primary articles considered. I also note that no systematic review has ever analyzed or critiqued the used articles.

• The authors used the random effects model to do the meta-analysis which gives weight smaller but relevant studies which isn’t the case for the fixed effects model.

• The article has got a few grammatical errors (especially mixed use of upper & lower cases in the authors’ addresses) which I feel should be harmonized before its publication, either by use of an expert librarian or any other English language expert.

• I confirm that I have read this submission and can say without doubt that it is of an acceptable scientific and ethical standard for publishing in Plos one.

Reviewer #2: The Manuscript meets all the necessary guidelines to satisfy the PLOS ONE criteria for publication. The analysis is performed approriately and presented in an intelligent manner in addition to fulfilling all the other criteria. It is from this basis that I recommend publication of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: Yes: IVAN AHIMBISIBWE

Reviewer #2: Yes: Victor Draman Afayo

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Submitted filename: Feedback_Amare_childhhod TB.docx
Revision 1

Response to Reviewers and Academic editor

Point by point responses

We would like to take this opportunity to thank the reviewers and editor for sharing their view and constructive comments. The comments were very important which further improves the quality of our manuscript. The point-by-point responses for each of the comments are provided in the following pages. Our responses are written in blue font color.

# Journal requirements

1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming

Authors’ Response

We are grateful to this comment of technical relevance. Thus, we have ensured that our manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming

2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.

Authors’ Response

The authors are very grateful of these constructive comments. After read the reference lists carefully, we made some correction and addressed the incomplete one. We are sure that we have not cited retracted references, almost all references are recent.

Additional Editor Comments: #

Congratulation to come up with this very relevant manuscript of childhood TB among HIV infected children on ART in Ethiopia. It is well narrated, reviewed, analyzed and discussed. Please just attend to a few comments from the one of the revue.

Authors’ Response

Dear editor, really thank you very much for your constructive comments that makes us strive for further relevant works and contribution of our future career in the field.

Response to Reviewer #1 comments

1. The authors do not provide a detailed explanation of eliminated studies and their disqualifying reasons. This could lead to elimination of relevant and useful studies. The authors could use reference manager to avoid deleting duplicates by one category say author’s name or year of publication.

Authors’ Response

First of all, we thank you the reviewer for his constructive comments and suggestions. The authors had used EndNote X8 reference manager/citation manager to screen the included studies consciously. After export the search result to EndNote X8 software, the authors used to screen orderly based on the title, abstract, full text, setting, population etc. We worked on carefully to include all the relevant studies. Moreover the authors tried to show the detail of explanation how to screen studies in Figure 1 of page 7.

2. The article has got a few grammatical errors (especially mixed use of upper & lower cases in the authors’ addresses) which I feel should be harmonized before its publication, either by use of an expert librarian or any other English language expert.

Authors’ Response

We accepted the comment and correct on the revised manuscript. After we have read carefully through the whole document, we properly addressed the concerned issues.

Reviewer #2:

The Manuscript meets all the necessary guidelines to satisfy the PLOS ONE criteria for publication. The analysis is performed appropriately and presented in an intelligent manner in addition to fulfilling all the other criteria. It is from this basis that I recommend publication of the manuscript

Authors’ Response

Really thank you very much.

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Submitted filename: Response to reviewers.docx
Decision Letter - Mengistu Hailemariam Zenebe, Editor

Incidence and predictors of tuberculosis among HIV-infected children after initiation of antiretroviral therapy in Ethiopia: A systematic review and meta-analysis.

PONE-D-24-05371R1

Dear Author,

Thank you for the correction on the given comments

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Kind regards,

Mengistu Hailemariam Zenebe, PhD

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: Yes

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #1: Yes

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6. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: All questions have been fully addressed. Thank you for all this hard work

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Reviewer #1: Yes: IVAN AHIMBISIBWE

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Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Mengistu Hailemariam Zenebe, Editor

PONE-D-24-05371R1

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