Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-23848Estimates of functional muscle strength from a novel progressive lateral step-up test are feasible, reliable, and related to physical activity in children with cerebral palsyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Modlesky, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 29 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review Estimates of functional muscle strength from a novel progressive lateral step-up test are feasible, reliable, and related to physical activity in children with cerebral palsy I thank the authors for this very interesting paper. It will be very relevant for the clinical field. Some questions arose during the reading of the paper. I really miss the ICF-CY as a model to use for an explanation of the relevance of the outcome and its use in the clinical field. I miss more actual references as aertssen. w to use in the discussion. I do not understand the reasons why 10-15-20 cm of step height are chosen and why LSUT is used instead of FSUT. What is the relation between these heights and functional environment ( stairs, street ramps…….) As a functional test, the FSUT is more feasible related to its functional value – stairclimbing- The height of the steps will have relevance but should be related to leg length and especially tibia length. The explanation of the composite score A composite LSUT score was generated by multiplying repetitions at 10 cm by 1, repetitions at 15 cm by 1.5, and repetitions at 20 cm by 2, then adding the total score. I miss a reference and do not understand the multiplying score. Reliability Please relate to the cosmin guideline. Reliability is assessed in 20 children. That is a really low number and the outcome is not yet really transferable according to the cosmin. Please add this in the discussion Explain in the method the value of SEM and SDC and compare with the studies of Verschuren en aertssen of it is in the same line. Please go in the discussion in more details in on the MIC and SDC and what is seen in other studies about the changes due to interventions in CP and if we can use the LSUT for evaluation for interventions I hope you can address these questions and make the paper more valuable for the clinical field best Reviewer #2: Dear Author, I have opportunity to review the manuscript titled " Estimates of functional muscle strength from a novel progressive lateral step-up test are feasible, reliable, and related to physical activity in children with cerebral palsy". Individuals with CP experience impairments of body structures and functions, such as in strength, spasticity, ROM, co-contractions, low motor control, kinaesthetic ability, dyscoordination which, in turn, may limit their functional mobility. The relationship among these impairments is still under investigation with researchers focusing mainly upon the effect of strength, spasticity and ROM on the functional mobility of individuals with CP. A variety of measures have been used by researchers in the past to assess functional mobility of individuals with CP. The most common is the gross motor function measure (GMFM) which has been widely used and may be perceived as the golden standard. The LSUT may be perceived as a valid instrument for assessing the functional mobility of adolescents with CP. The LSUT exhibited sufficient concurrent and construct validity evidence and supported the sample specific validity evidence theory. In the light of this information, I carefully read the purpose and methodology of the article. My comments for the study are below: - The first thing that caught my attention while reading the study was the study schedule. The study data were collected over a period of more than 10 years and time intervals. Factors that may be present in this process (such as the assessor, the environment in which the assessment is made) may affect the results. This unfortunately reduces confidence in the results. - There is confusion about the number of participants in the article. The study included 45 children with CP, why only 20 children had LSUT scores calculated. - There is validity evidence of the LSUT for adolescents with spastic cerebral palsy (DOI: 10.3109/09638288.2012.711896). I am not sure what the development of a new method by changing the step heights would contribute to the literature. I think that the purpose and design of the study will not provide an adequate contribution to the literature. Reviewer #3: Review comments on Manuscript Number: PONE-D-23-23848. Entitled “Estimates of functional muscle strength from a novel progressive lateral step-up test are feasible, reliable, and related to physical activity in children with cerebral palsy" Overall, the idea of research is very interesting to be studied nowadays and paper is coherently developed. However, there are some comments and suggestions. Title - Well structured Abstract - It is recommended to write 5 to 7 keywords in alphabetical order. Introduction - Well structured Subjects and methods - The authors recruited ambulant children with CP. However, there is great difference between unilateral and bilateral CP cases regarding energy expenditure, balance , strength. Authors should clarify which subtype of CP was included in their study. Statistical analysis - Well structured Discussion - Well structured References Update your References ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Estimates of functional muscle strength from a novel progressive lateral step-up test are feasible, reliable, and related to physical activity in children with cerebral palsy PONE-D-23-23848R1 Dear Dr. Modlesky, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: Review comments on Manuscript Number: (PONE-D-23-23848R1) entitled ‘’ Review comments on Manuscript Number: PONE-D-23-23848. Entitled “Estimates of functional muscle strength from a novel progressive lateral step-up test are feasible, reliable, and related to physical activity in children with cerebral palsy". Overall, this study provides a novel approach. The idea of research is very interesting, well written and reasonable. I would like to thank the authors for their successful work to address the reviewers' comments. The authors have done great efforts to accomplish this work. They fulfilled all comments and made necessary changes throughput the manuscript. I recommend accepting the manuscript its revised form. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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