Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 18, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-24149Childhood brain morphometry in children with persistent stunting and catch-up growthPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Koshy, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 26 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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DBT-Wellcome Trust India Alliance The 9-year follow-up of the Mal-ed India cohort was supported by an Intermediate clinical and public health research fellowship awarded by the DBT/Wellcome Trust India Alliance to Dr. BK. (Fellowship grant number IA/CPHI/19/1/504611) Please state what role the funders took in the study. If the funders had no role, please state: ""The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript."" If this statement is not correct you must amend it as needed. Please include this amended Role of Funder statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 3. In the online submission form, you indicated that All MAL-ED data till 5 years are available on www.clinEpiDB. Further data can be shared by corresponding author on reasonable request. All PLOS journals now require all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript to be freely available to other researchers, either 1. In a public repository, 2. Within the manuscript itself, or 3. Uploaded as supplementary information. This policy applies to all data except where public deposition would breach compliance with the protocol approved by your research ethics board. If your data cannot be made publicly available for ethical or legal reasons (e.g., public availability would compromise patient privacy), please explain your reasons on resubmission and your exemption request will be escalated for approval. Additional Editor Comments: Interesting dataset you have collected. However you are requested to respond to queries raised by me (below) and reviewers about your study. In the revised manuscript please highlight the changes made in a different colour (i.e. for each reviewer and Editor) and in reply to reviewers document mention the line numbers of revised manuscript where you have addressed the issue…We look forward to receiving your replies/revisions..Good luck 1)In Abstract- Please specify the methodology as suggested by reviewer 4 Also In Introduction- Why Freesurfer was used to study morphometry..add your motivation? 2)Why Desikan killiany atlas was used...Any reason or reference? 3)Studies have shown sex and age differences as well as sex by age interaction for children.. See below references https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/23500670/ https://doi.org/10.1093/cercor/11.6.552 I am not sure if sex by age interaction was considered in your model? 4)You seem to have missed some latest studies. If relevant discuss these in introduction or discussion sections as appropriate in context of their results. https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0361923023002721 https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC10964341/ [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: I Don't Know Reviewer #4: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This work studies early childhood stunting effects. The authors highlighted that this is the first neuroimaging analysis to investigate the effects of childhood stunting. Specifically, this study analyses correlations between childhood stunting occurrence and multiple covariants, including total brain volume, subcortical volume, bilateral cerebellar white matter, posterior corpus callosum, etc. Statistical analyses including p-value, are conducted, categorized by different regions. I think this work is coherent and supportive, and can provide useful references for future research on the reasonings and trends of stunting effects. Reviewer #2: This study provides valuable insights into the long-term neurological impacts of early childhood stunting and subsequent catch-up growth, an area with limited prior data. While this study offers important insights, there are several limitations to consider. The sample size of 178 children, though informative, may not fully capture the variability within the broader population. Additionally, the study is geographically limited to Vellore, south India, which might affect the generalizability of the findings to other regions or populations. The cross-sectional nature of the neuroimaging analysis at nine years of age does not allow for the assessment of brain development trajectories over time. Furthermore, potential confounding factors such as socioeconomic status, educational environment, and genetic predispositions were not thoroughly addressed, which could influence the observed outcomes. Most of the references are clubbed. Its better to use one ciation at the end of one line. Reviewer #3: 1.1. Current literature has established that handedness is associated with differences in brain morphology. Given that the current study has only included one left-handed participant, rather than including that participant, it may be worth removing that participant. 1.2. From the literature review/introduction, I understand that there are very few work looking at childhood stunting and brain morphometry. However, it would have been beneficial to include a broader range of knowledge, such as studies examining malnutrition (which is closely related to stunting) and brain morphometry, or research on childhood stunting and its effects on other brain modalities, such as fMRI. 1.3. The study mentions addressing the research gap of limited data on the effects of early childhood stunting and catch-up growth on brain morphometry. However, the conclusion primarily emphasized the differences between the 'Never Stunted' and 'Always Stunted' children. The 'caught-up' groups were not discussed in detail, and there was limited interpretation of the findings related to these groups. 2.1. Aside from age and gender, total intracranial volume is also an important covariate for volumetric analyses, which I don't think has been considered in the current study. In addition, I am curious whether the present study has considered the child's awake/asleep state during the MRI scan as a covariate. 2.2. I understand that visual checks have been carried out visually, but I am wondering if post segmentation checks have been performed (e.g., using Qoala-T on the Freesurfer output) as the study has not mentioned and it will be important information. 3. Authors have stated that some restrictions will apply. 4. There are some punctuation and grammatical errors, which may be a result of the long sentences. For example - "In a previous report from the same cohort, children who remained persistently stunted had a significant reduction in verbal, and total cognition scores by 4·6 points which corresponded to a 0·3 standard deviation difference compared to those never stunted, and is consistent with the previous literature [6, 17]." The comma is misplaced, and there are grammatical errors: "In a previous report from the same cohort, children who remained persistently stunted had significant reductions in verbal and total cognition scores, by 4·6 points which corresponded to a 0·3 standard deviation difference compared to those children who have never stunted, and are consistent with the previous literature [6, 17]." 5. I was curious on why the study looked till 9 years old, and not an older age since the study was interested in the catch-up growth on brain morphometry (for example, 12 years old is an age at which brain volume is suggested to continue growing till). Reviewer #4: The work by Koshy et al to understand the morphometric changes associated with stunting and catch-up growth is interesting with a larger Indian cohort from a small town. Though I liked the approach but the study needs considerable improvement from the analysis point of view. MAJOR Abstract- Please specify the methodology used in the method section to let readers understand what was done before they understand the finding. Please specify multiple comparison etc here Introduction- 1. Please define stunting and the criteria to identify 2. The statement 1000days = 2 years is bit confusing. Method 3. Every study should be an independent read. So please briefly mention the cohort details in main manuscript or in supplement. 4. Please mention the age at which the childrens were scanned. Additionally, provide details on How many children needed Triclofos- Please mention. 5. Are the Regional Brain volumes normalised. Most of regional level results will dissapear if Total brain volume is regressed. 6. How was the Time of MRI aquisition adjusted. Result Please provide all the details of ANNOVA analysis for each group. Please adjust the time of aquistion, TIV and results will get shifted from present. This will provide a robust picture of the analysis. MINOR (1) Writing needs to be improved through out the manuscript at several places- starting from abstract to discussion- For example- Amongst 251 children from the overall cohort, 178 children with a mean age of 9.54 were considered for further analysis.- It sounds like the volumetric parameter is assessed longitudinally. Please write the message in each Paragraphs clearly and directly. For example Paragraph 3 shows Neuroimaging is expensive which I agree, but authors themselves have used neuroimaging rather than any alternative. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-24-24149R1Childhood brain morphometry in children with persistent stunting and catch-up growthPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Koshy, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 28 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Cota Navin Gupta Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Thanks for addressing our queries..However in the "Response to Reviewers" doc the lines numbers where the changes have been made in the revised manuscript with reference to reviewer queries are haphazard and hard to track Make sure that the line numbers in the "Response to Reviewers" doc match the changes made in the revised manuscript ? [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: Most of the amendments suggested during the first round of review are addressed. The manuscript is technically sound and all the data presented are valuable information for carrying out further studies on child hood morphometry of ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Apurba Patra ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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Childhood brain morphometry in children with persistent stunting and catch-up growth PONE-D-24-24149R2 Dear Dr. Koshy, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Cota Navin Gupta Academic Editor PLOS ONE www.iitg.ac.in/cngupta Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thanks for addressing the queries raised by me and reviewers...Congrats for this publication..Best wishes...Navin Reviewers' comments: |
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